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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.6 - Submission Topic

    Tanaris Hogchopper, Spiked Hogrider, Leatherclad Hogleader

    Dr. Boom has hired the wildest boar biker gang in Tanaris as freelance mercenaries. Their payment? Some sick hi-tech bikes  coming directly from the Boom Labs!

    The Hog Bikers have always been too situational to use outside of Arena, where you didn't really mind too much if the effect did not activate. With this card, you can use the one who suits the situation, but you'll have to pay one extra mana for that consistency.

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.6 - Discussion Topic

    @EVERYONE

    Use watermarks! Many people aren't using them and it takes away a lot of credibility and flavor.

    @Thezzy

    About Brann the Explorer: I'm not a fan of such obvious effects, but given you have 10 upvotes, I guess most people are. That said, I'd change his statline to 2/4, so that it has the same as Brann Bronzebeard and Dinotamer Brann.

    @Shinkkk

    I think Mrs. Boom is the best of your cards, I like the interaction with Goblin Bombs. That said, I'm not a huge fan of any of them.

    @ZarmFK

    About Jade Warehouse: I like that you're giving Rogue a way to improve their Jade decks, since they got the short stick in that regard. That said, the Jade mechanic was exteremly parasitic, so Jade cards don't make a lot of sense outside MSG. So, I'd go with another idea.

    @t3lecast3r

    Lost Soul of Shadow has more than 4 lines of text, which is usually regarded as the limit. I'd get rid of the Silence part, which I don't really get, to be honest.

    @Brightcaller

    I like the Giant part, but I find it weird that half of them exist and the other half is made up.

    Personally, I'd change the text to "At the end of your turn add a random Giant to your hand (from any set). If you change the text to that, I'd also replace the character for a Titan.

    @Nohva

    I prefer Khaldarro, but I don't like that she is a made up character who doesn't have anything to do with Sylvanas. I guess that's alright, since Jan'alai, the Dragonhawk doesn't have a lot to do with Ragnaros the Firelord either.

    She might be a bit OP too, so I'd probably bump her cost to 9.

    @Nohva

    I prefer Khaldarro, but I don't like that she is a made up character who doesn't have anything to do with Sylvanas. I guess that's alright, since Jan'alai, the Dragonhawk doesn't have a lot to do with Ragnaros the Firelord either.

    She might be a bit OP too, so I'd probably bump her cost to 9.

    @YoThats

    Patchwerk is a bit dumb, but I like it. I'd put a KFT mark on it, though.

    @YoThats

    Patchwerk is a bit dumb, but I like it. I'd put a KFT mark on it, though.

    @Dewox

    I feel your Forgotten Hallway is too complex :/

    @LorettaBarbosa

    Kairozdormu is too similar to Arch-Villain Rafaam.

    Mutanus the Devourer, however, is quite cool. My only problem with him is that Murlocs are often very aggresive, so I'm not sure if having to generate them through spells would slow them too much.

    @Covetousj

    All your cards are interesting, but I think my favourite is Timetwister. However, if you decide to go with any of the other two, make sure to change the artwork, since those are already in the game.

    @DeraVCC

    IMO, your card is the best so far. It has a nice flavor and helps to upgrade a loved but forgotten card.

    As a slight nitpick, I'd change the statline to 4/4 (the same as the original Wildred Fizzlebang) and the cost of the Hero Power to 2 (the same as all Hero Powers outside adventures).

    @XanXon

    As with DeraVCC's card, this is one of my favourites. Again, my feedback here is a bit nitpicky:

    • Put a watermark on it. Rise of Shadows would be fitting.
    • Change the name to one that seems legendary. Something like Candle Sinner Waks, for instance.

    @Froggagedon

    The fact that it has no effect if you have no Elementals is quite meh. A

    @Froggagedon

    What Zanywoop said xD

    @Hereharehere

    Pretty solid card. The multi-tribe requirement makes it quite cool.

    @Zanywoop

    I have mixed feelings about this. The concept is interesting, but it looks like a card that will never be made IRL.

    Don't know how to improve it, besides capitalizing "Gorefiend".

    @xOwleyex

    What McF4rtson said xD

     

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.6 - Discussion Topic

    Tanaris Hogchopper, Spiked Hogrider, Leatherclad Hogleader

    I'm pretty satisfied with the flavor of this card, but I'm not sure if the wording is alright. Referring to MSG as Gadgetzan has some sort of precedent in Elise the Trailblazer, but the "Hog Biker" term is completely made up. I'm not convinced about the artwork, either, since the rider is a human.

    I'll give some feedback tonight.

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    posted a message on Tombs of Terror Datamining - Explorer Treasures And More

    Well, now I'm hyped for this.

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.4 - Discussion Topic
    Quote from xOwleyex >>

    Would like to get some feedback with this :D
    Just not so sure if those effect is unique enough
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    The riddles are temporary effects that last for one turn, thinking about Loatheb. I think i will have to do some fixing on the wording tho.
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     This card has a lot of potential. Flavor is superb and fits SoU really well.

    However, I agree with you the wording is quite inconsistent. Plus, the Riddles should have a more riddle-y effect. How about if they all hid some info from your opponent?

    In any case, if you polish its its flaws a little bit, you could be a very strong candidate for winning.

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.4 - Discussion Topic
    Quote from user-30226470 >>

     

    Hi all,

    What do you think about the wording of this card? Because I'm good a native English speaker, and I'm not sure about the wording... 


    Thanks :) 

     I'd reword it to "If your deck has no duplicates, Discover a minion and give its stats to all minions in your hand and deck."

    That way, it's shorter and it might fit in four lines (which is the de facto max length)

    Quote from LittleOgre >>

    Just for fun, so all classes have Highlander support.

    These are all the Hero Powers for all classes:

    Paladin: Backup and Boon of Light

    Warlock: Pain Split and The Pact

    Druid: Lifebloom and Touch of Bark

    Warrior: Invigorating Brew and Undermine

    Priest: Distort and Soothe

    Mage: Frostburn and Burning Wit

    Shaman: Evolution and Refresh

    Hunter: Opportunist and Pet Training

    Rogue: Yoink! and Cut-less

     

     Dalaran Heist Hero Powers were just marginally stronger than the regular ones. Therefore, I think paying 1/1 in stats AND the highlander requirement seems a pretty big cost for that effect. I'd either change the stats to 3 mana 3/4 or reduce the cost of the new HP to 1.

    Besides that, the flavor should fit either Rise of Shadows or Saviors of Uldum, since the current one would fit TGT or KnC.

    Quote from Thezzy >>

     Would this be unique enough?

     What about making it so that the Discover effects give you all three options? I think it's cooler that way.

    Quote from YoThats >>

    Blizzard missed opportunity to re-print Leeroy Jenkins this expansion as a team member considering he was their fan from LoE trailer. I tried to keep the flavor of original Leeroy with the same stats, but with Rush instead of Charge and effect only seen on Houndmaster Shaw i think.

     Cool card. As a nitpick, I'd probably remove Rush from Leeroy himself and make him just grant Rush to all minions (including himself).


    Quote from Zanywoop >>

     @wailor I’m of the mind that you could probably just say a Legendary Weapon from the past and that’d be both solid flavor and solidly defined text. However; I’d caution that Woecleaver was never meant to be wielded on turn five off a 5/4 body.

     Thanks for the advice! I like your wording much more, so I'm gonna use it.

    About the balance issue: I was a bit worried too, but Woecleaver is a build-around card and the fact that there are a couple of very bad options (Skull of the Man'ari and Kingsbane) made me think it's alright. However, if other users think it's broken, I'll probably change the effect to "Discover and reduce the cost by X".

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.4 - Discussion Topic

    I was kind of hopeful that Harrison Jones would show up this expansion, so I made him :)

    How do you feel about the fact that he discovers a cards from another set? A Wild set, to be more specific.

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.3 - Final Poll
    Quote from McF4rtson >>

    Congratulations to Wailor! The next contest will be up momentarily. (for once we're actually on schedule)

     Thanks a lot! Can't see the results, however :/

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.3 - Submission Topic

    Hard removal that you have to play at the end of your turn. Quite ineffective against Taunts and certain Deathrattles.

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.2 - Final Poll

    GL everyone!

    I voted Scholar of the Void, which I wish it existed IRL. It has a very interesting effect which fits both Quests without feeling shoehorned. Its only issue is that the flavor is quite bland.

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    posted a message on Saviors of Uldum - Terrific Taunts - The Best Taunt Cards of the Expansion

    Don't be a creep, please.

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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.2 - Submission Topic

    This dude combines the main themes Warrior has in SoU: Taunt and Quest. Keep in mind he would be the first card ever that can give your hero attack during your opponent's turn, which allows him to be used in two ways:

    • Defensively: Drop him against a board full of small minions. He will probably absorb a couple of hits and the attack he grants to your hero will destroy any minions who dare go face. This will also grant you one attack during your turn, since the card text says "until the end of YOUR turn".
    • Offensively: Combine him with whirlwind and ping effects and he can grant your hero up to 12 Attack. Even more if he's buffed by Into the Fray or other similar effects.
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    posted a message on Weekly Card Design Competition 10.2 - Discussion Topic
    Quote from FailURGamer >>

    Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

    I prefer Master of the Pack, although it could use a change of artwork. Also, 7 mana is way too much. I'd make it a 3/5 for 5 mana.

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