Dr. Boom has hired the wildest boar biker gang in Tanaris as freelance mercenaries. Their payment? Some sick hi-tech bikes coming directly from the Boom Labs!
The Hog Bikers have always been too situational to use outside of Arena, where you didn't really mind too much if the effect did not activate. With this card, you can use the one who suits the situation, but you'll have to pay one extra mana for that consistency.
Use watermarks! Many people aren't using them and it takes away a lot of credibility and flavor.
@Thezzy
About Brann the Explorer: I'm not a fan of such obvious effects, but given you have 10 upvotes, I guess most people are. That said, I'd change his statline to 2/4, so that it has the same as Brann Bronzebeard and Dinotamer Brann.
@Shinkkk
I think Mrs. Boom is the best of your cards, I like the interaction with Goblin Bombs. That said, I'm not a huge fan of any of them.
@ZarmFK
About Jade Warehouse: I like that you're giving Rogue a way to improve their Jade decks, since they got the short stick in that regard. That said, the Jade mechanic was exteremly parasitic, so Jade cards don't make a lot of sense outside MSG. So, I'd go with another idea.
@t3lecast3r
Lost Soul of Shadow has more than 4 lines of text, which is usually regarded as the limit. I'd get rid of the Silence part, which I don't really get, to be honest.
@Brightcaller
I like the Giant part, but I find it weird that half of them exist and the other half is made up.
Personally, I'd change the text to "At the end of your turn add a random Giant to your hand (from any set). If you change the text to that, I'd also replace the character for a Titan.
@Nohva
I prefer Khaldarro, but I don't like that she is a made up character who doesn't have anything to do with Sylvanas. I guess that's alright, since Jan'alai, the Dragonhawk doesn't have a lot to do with Ragnaros the Firelord either.
She might be a bit OP too, so I'd probably bump her cost to 9.
@Nohva
I prefer Khaldarro, but I don't like that she is a made up character who doesn't have anything to do with Sylvanas. I guess that's alright, since Jan'alai, the Dragonhawk doesn't have a lot to do with Ragnaros the Firelord either.
She might be a bit OP too, so I'd probably bump her cost to 9.
@YoThats
Patchwerkis a bit dumb, but I like it. I'd put a KFT mark on it, though.
@YoThats
Patchwerkis a bit dumb, but I like it. I'd put a KFT mark on it, though.
Mutanus the Devourer, however, is quite cool. My only problem with him is that Murlocs are often very aggresive, so I'm not sure if having to generate them through spells would slow them too much.
@Covetousj
All your cards are interesting, but I think my favourite is Timetwister. However, if you decide to go with any of the other two, make sure to change the artwork, since those are already in the game.
@DeraVCC
IMO, your card is the best so far. It has a nice flavor and helps to upgrade a loved but forgotten card.
As a slight nitpick, I'd change the statline to 4/4 (the same as the original Wildred Fizzlebang) and the cost of the Hero Power to 2 (the same as all Hero Powers outside adventures).
@XanXon
As with DeraVCC's card, this is one of my favourites. Again, my feedback here is a bit nitpicky:
Put a watermark on it. Rise of Shadows would be fitting.
Change the name to one that seems legendary. Something like Candle Sinner Waks, for instance.
@Froggagedon
The fact that it has no effect if you have no Elementals is quite meh. A
@Froggagedon
What Zanywoop said xD
@Hereharehere
Pretty solid card. The multi-tribe requirement makes it quite cool.
@Zanywoop
I have mixed feelings about this. The concept is interesting, but it looks like a card that will never be made IRL.
Don't know how to improve it, besides capitalizing "Gorefiend".
I'm pretty satisfied with the flavor of this card, but I'm not sure if the wording is alright. Referring to MSG as Gadgetzan has some sort of precedent in Elise the Trailblazer, but the "Hog Biker" term is completely made up. I'm not convinced about the artwork, either, since the rider is a human.
Would like to get some feedback with this :D Just not so sure if those effect is unique enough The riddles are temporary effects that last for one turn, thinking about Loatheb. I think i will have to do some fixing on the wording tho.
This card has a lot of potential. Flavor is superb and fits SoU really well.
However, I agree with you the wording is quite inconsistent. Plus, the Riddles should have a more riddle-y effect. How about if they all hid some info from your opponent?
In any case, if you polish its its flaws a little bit, you could be a very strong candidate for winning.
Dalaran Heist Hero Powers were just marginally stronger than the regular ones. Therefore, I think paying 1/1 in stats AND the highlander requirement seems a pretty big cost for that effect. I'd either change the stats to 3 mana 3/4 or reduce the cost of the new HP to 1.
Besides that, the flavor should fit either Rise of Shadows or Saviors of Uldum, since the current one would fit TGT or KnC.
Blizzard missed opportunity to re-print Leeroy Jenkins this expansion as a team member considering he was their fan from LoE trailer. I tried to keep the flavor of original Leeroy with the same stats, but with Rush instead of Charge and effect only seen on Houndmaster Shaw i think.
Cool card. As a nitpick, I'd probably remove Rush from Leeroy himself and make him just grant Rush to all minions (including himself).
@wailor I’m of the mind that you could probably just say a Legendary Weapon from the past and that’d be both solid flavor and solidly defined text. However; I’d caution that Woecleaver was never meant to be wielded on turn five off a 5/4 body.
Thanks for the advice! I like your wording much more, so I'm gonna use it.
About the balance issue: I was a bit worried too, but Woecleaver is a build-around card and the fact that there are a couple of very bad options (Skull of the Man'ari and Kingsbane) made me think it's alright. However, if other users think it's broken, I'll probably change the effect to "Discover and reduce the cost by X".
I voted Scholar of the Void, which I wish it existed IRL. It has a very interesting effect which fits both Quests without feeling shoehorned. Its only issue is that the flavor is quite bland.
This dude combines the main themes Warrior has in SoU: Taunt and Quest. Keep in mind he would be the first card ever that can give your hero attack during your opponent's turn, which allows him to be used in two ways:
Defensively: Drop him against a board full of small minions. He will probably absorb a couple of hits and the attack he grants to your hero will destroy any minions who dare go face. This will also grant you one attack during your turn, since the card text says "until the end of YOUR turn".
Offensively: Combine him with whirlwind and ping effects and he can grant your hero up to 12 Attack. Even more if he's buffed by Into the Fray or other similar effects.
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Tanaris Hogchopper, Spiked Hogrider, Leatherclad Hogleader
Dr. Boom has hired the wildest boar biker gang in Tanaris as freelance mercenaries. Their payment? Some sick hi-tech bikes coming directly from the Boom Labs!
The Hog Bikers have always been too situational to use outside of Arena, where you didn't really mind too much if the effect did not activate. With this card, you can use the one who suits the situation, but you'll have to pay one extra mana for that consistency.
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@EVERYONE
Use watermarks! Many people aren't using them and it takes away a lot of credibility and flavor.
@Thezzy
About Brann the Explorer: I'm not a fan of such obvious effects, but given you have 10 upvotes, I guess most people are. That said, I'd change his statline to 2/4, so that it has the same as Brann Bronzebeard and Dinotamer Brann.
@Shinkkk
I think Mrs. Boom is the best of your cards, I like the interaction with Goblin Bombs. That said, I'm not a huge fan of any of them.
@ZarmFK
About Jade Warehouse: I like that you're giving Rogue a way to improve their Jade decks, since they got the short stick in that regard. That said, the Jade mechanic was exteremly parasitic, so Jade cards don't make a lot of sense outside MSG. So, I'd go with another idea.
@t3lecast3r
Lost Soul of Shadow has more than 4 lines of text, which is usually regarded as the limit. I'd get rid of the Silence part, which I don't really get, to be honest.
@Brightcaller
I like the Giant part, but I find it weird that half of them exist and the other half is made up.
Personally, I'd change the text to "At the end of your turn add a random Giant to your hand (from any set). If you change the text to that, I'd also replace the character for a Titan.
@Nohva
I prefer Khaldarro, but I don't like that she is a made up character who doesn't have anything to do with Sylvanas. I guess that's alright, since Jan'alai, the Dragonhawk doesn't have a lot to do with Ragnaros the Firelord either.
She might be a bit OP too, so I'd probably bump her cost to 9.
@Nohva
I prefer Khaldarro, but I don't like that she is a made up character who doesn't have anything to do with Sylvanas. I guess that's alright, since Jan'alai, the Dragonhawk doesn't have a lot to do with Ragnaros the Firelord either.
She might be a bit OP too, so I'd probably bump her cost to 9.
@YoThats
Patchwerk is a bit dumb, but I like it. I'd put a KFT mark on it, though.
@YoThats
Patchwerk is a bit dumb, but I like it. I'd put a KFT mark on it, though.
@Dewox
I feel your Forgotten Hallway is too complex :/
@LorettaBarbosa
Kairozdormu is too similar to Arch-Villain Rafaam.
Mutanus the Devourer, however, is quite cool. My only problem with him is that Murlocs are often very aggresive, so I'm not sure if having to generate them through spells would slow them too much.
@Covetousj
All your cards are interesting, but I think my favourite is Timetwister. However, if you decide to go with any of the other two, make sure to change the artwork, since those are already in the game.
@DeraVCC
IMO, your card is the best so far. It has a nice flavor and helps to upgrade a loved but forgotten card.
As a slight nitpick, I'd change the statline to 4/4 (the same as the original Wildred Fizzlebang) and the cost of the Hero Power to 2 (the same as all Hero Powers outside adventures).
@XanXon
As with DeraVCC's card, this is one of my favourites. Again, my feedback here is a bit nitpicky:
@Froggagedon
The fact that it has no effect if you have no Elementals is quite meh. A
@Froggagedon
What Zanywoop said xD
@Hereharehere
Pretty solid card. The multi-tribe requirement makes it quite cool.
@Zanywoop
I have mixed feelings about this. The concept is interesting, but it looks like a card that will never be made IRL.
Don't know how to improve it, besides capitalizing "Gorefiend".
@xOwleyex
What McF4rtson said xD
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Tanaris Hogchopper, Spiked Hogrider, Leatherclad Hogleader
I'm pretty satisfied with the flavor of this card, but I'm not sure if the wording is alright. Referring to MSG as Gadgetzan has some sort of precedent in Elise the Trailblazer, but the "Hog Biker" term is completely made up. I'm not convinced about the artwork, either, since the rider is a human.
I'll give some feedback tonight.
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Well, now I'm hyped for this.
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This card has a lot of potential. Flavor is superb and fits SoU really well.
However, I agree with you the wording is quite inconsistent. Plus, the Riddles should have a more riddle-y effect. How about if they all hid some info from your opponent?
In any case, if you polish its its flaws a little bit, you could be a very strong candidate for winning.
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I'd reword it to "If your deck has no duplicates, Discover a minion and give its stats to all minions in your hand and deck."
That way, it's shorter and it might fit in four lines (which is the de facto max length)
Dalaran Heist Hero Powers were just marginally stronger than the regular ones. Therefore, I think paying 1/1 in stats AND the highlander requirement seems a pretty big cost for that effect. I'd either change the stats to 3 mana 3/4 or reduce the cost of the new HP to 1.
Besides that, the flavor should fit either Rise of Shadows or Saviors of Uldum, since the current one would fit TGT or KnC.
What about making it so that the Discover effects give you all three options? I think it's cooler that way.
Cool card. As a nitpick, I'd probably remove Rush from Leeroy himself and make him just grant Rush to all minions (including himself).
Thanks for the advice! I like your wording much more, so I'm gonna use it.
About the balance issue: I was a bit worried too, but Woecleaver is a build-around card and the fact that there are a couple of very bad options (Skull of the Man'ari and Kingsbane) made me think it's alright. However, if other users think it's broken, I'll probably change the effect to "Discover and reduce the cost by X".
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I was kind of hopeful that Harrison Jones would show up this expansion, so I made him :)
How do you feel about the fact that he discovers a cards from another set? A Wild set, to be more specific.
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Thanks a lot! Can't see the results, however :/
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Hard removal that you have to play at the end of your turn. Quite ineffective against Taunts and certain Deathrattles.
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GL everyone!
I voted Scholar of the Void, which I wish it existed IRL. It has a very interesting effect which fits both Quests without feeling shoehorned. Its only issue is that the flavor is quite bland.
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Don't be a creep, please.
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This dude combines the main themes Warrior has in SoU: Taunt and Quest. Keep in mind he would be the first card ever that can give your hero attack during your opponent's turn, which allows him to be used in two ways:
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I prefer Master of the Pack, although it could use a change of artwork. Also, 7 mana is way too much. I'd make it a 3/5 for 5 mana.