Hi all :) Great design challenge. I didn't know where to start, so I decided to make one proposition for every class. Let me know which is your favourite one, with some feebdack on mechanics and balance.
Some of these are way too powerful (like Protector Reunion in a Highlander deck) or way too weak (Void Summoning in like any situation). My favorites are Pack Revenge and Adrenaline Rush. Adrenaline Rush I think is the better choice. It's got great flavor, and it's a Miracle card that isn't too powerful.
Indeed, some of them can really have snowball effects or generate way too much value considering their mana cost.
I don't think Void Summoning is too weak. It could find some play to complete Lakkari Sacrifice easily in the mid/late game without being disturbed by random discard effects. It is also a good way to recycle cards too expensive on the early game (Abyssal Enforcer) or not valuable enough on the late game (Flame Imp, Voidwalker).
#CastorT I think you mean Frozen Blockage with the Mage card. Anyway, some of these are pretty unique, compared to what's out there already. With that in mind, my favorites are Pack Revenge and Elite Selection. Deathrattle Hunter could use some love, and Elite Selection is very flavorful: "You need more healing? Too bad! *whomp!*"
Typo indeed :) Nice flavor text for Elite Selection. But I don't think I'll keep the card: too similar to Execute and very situational (although that's what Warrior excels at ^^).
I'll focus my attention on those 3. If you have other feedback.
Concept: Refill your hand with Deathrattle minions. Your opponent has an idea of potential minions you drawn.
Concept: Choose the cards you want to discard to benefit their effect or synergies, or simply complete your Quest easily in one turn in the mid/late game.
Incase anyone is wondering how the experiment regarding pming people who submitted via Hearthcards.
Then it's a complete disaster. Out of 7 people whom i have pmed, not a single have reacted though the pm, nor changed their cards from being hosted at Hearthcards.
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Now, the real/frustrating question is: did they see the PM and willfully ignore it, or have they not even bothered to read the PM?
Either way, that is unfortunate. Thank you for trying, though.
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Today (Sunday) I m putting 1 of these to submission, my vote on Spreading Rage, but I would like to know your last review/vote on them;
*Fixed Hogger Hunt Text, and reduced its mana from 6 to 5 to make it more powerful.
*Cursed Shield requires an update on Deathspeaker like make a friendly minion immune to fatal damage this turn/ give it divine shield etc. (Blizzard can easily do it since they change Dreadsteed for Defile.) So, don't worry about it.
would like to hear your reviews about Hogger Hunt as well as my other cards. Also, I would like to know which one you'd pick for submission page.
It should read "... If it had Taunt, cast this again." Im not sure if it would even be played tho, i think in most situations, u would rather have Deadly Shot, since its cheaper and might do basically the same thing. Sure there would be situations, where this would provide more value, but it could still just not hit the taunt first and be a 6-cost Deadly Shot. I guess its a "hard counter" to Spreading Plague, but thats about it. I dont think u can rly change it by lowering the cost, so im not sure if its salvageable, since i dont see how else would u change that.
Thanks for the review, as I mentioned above I fixed the text. Also countering Spreading Plague was my main consideration while creating Hogger Hunt.
I would advise against Spreading Rage. Understanding the card requires reading the token, and people don't really read tokens in the Final Poll. People's initial reaction (as mine was ) will be "OMG, so OP!" and a number of them won't bother to check the token to see that it can't attack heroes.
Personally, I like Cursed Shield, if you can solve the Deathspeaker problem.
Thanks for the review! I can understand the token problem, but I guess I can easily fix it with putting smaller version of token next to my submission instead of spoiler, so people can see it while voting. If it somehow made to final phase, I can put its token as a command, so people can judge based on it.
Today (Sunday) I m putting 1 of these to submission, my vote on Spreading Rage, but I would like to know your last review/vote on them;
*Fixed Hogger Hunt Text, and reduced its mana from 6 to 5 to make it more powerful.
*Cursed Shield requires an update on Deathspeaker like make a friendly minion immune to fatal damage this turn/ give it divine shield etc. (Blizzard can easily do it since they change Dreadsteed for Defile.) So, don't worry about it.
would like to hear your reviews about Hogger Hunt as well as my other cards. Also, I would like to know which one you'd pick for submission page.
It should read "... If it had Taunt, cast this again." Im not sure if it would even be played tho, i think in most situations, u would rather have Deadly Shot, since its cheaper and might do basically the same thing. Sure there would be situations, where this would provide more value, but it could still just not hit the taunt first and be a 6-cost Deadly Shot. I guess its a "hard counter" to Spreading Plague, but thats about it. I dont think u can rly change it by lowering the cost, so im not sure if its salvageable, since i dont see how else would u change that.
Thanks for the review, as I mentioned above I fixed the text. Also countering Spreading Plague was my main consideration while creating Hogger Hunt.
I would advise against Spreading Rage. Understanding the card requires reading the token, and people don't really read tokens in the Final Poll. People's initial reaction (as mine was ) will be "OMG, so OP!" and a number of them won't bother to check the token to see that it can't attack heroes.
Personally, I like Cursed Shield, if you can solve the Deathspeaker problem.
Indeed. The card is fine...except at face value, where it looks insanely broken.
I also like Cursed Shield, but as has been mentioned before you have an Immunity problem. You could change it to say "Ignores Immune", I suppose.
Thanks for the review, Horde Warrior card cannot hit the face, the reason I havent mention on the card text is because I wanted to revert Spreading Plague while creating Spreading Rage and adding "which cant attack to heroes" text would make it too long. For the Cursed Shield, I am not sure if its allowed to add ignore immunity text to a card.
After these reviews, I feel like I have 2 votes on Cursed Shield, keep voting please ^^
I'm gonna do a round two of the sending Pms out. Maybe someone will respond. But it seems unlikely
I've done this in the past for people on my own page (it's in everyone's interest to keep low-scoring cards on their own page from being disqualified), and responses are rare. When I do get responses, it's usually after the competition is over.
I'm gonna do a round two of the sending Pms out. Maybe someone will respond. But it seems unlikely
I've done this in the past for people on my own page (it's in everyone's interest to keep low-scoring cards on their own page from being disqualified), and responses are rare. When I do get responses, it's usually after the competition is over.
I mean i diden't have that high hopes for this experiment. But noone even responding fells super discouraging.
And the idea wasn't really to net me a better chance to advance, but mostly to make the competition more "fun" for newcomers.
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I'm gonna do a round two of the sending Pms out. Maybe someone will respond. But it seems unlikely
I've done this in the past for people on my own page (it's in everyone's interest to keep low-scoring cards on their own page from being disqualified), and responses are rare. When I do get responses, it's usually after the competition is over.
I mean i diden't have that high hopes for this experiment. But noone even responding fells super discouraging.
And the idea wasn't really to net me a better chance to advance, but mostly to make the competition more "fun" for newcomers.
Id say most of these ppl r not frequent visitors of this site, they just saw a news post and made a card and posted it and mby will come back to check on tuesday if they made it (if they even read the 1st post beyond what was written in the news post, since rules were mentioned there) or just dont care about it anymore.
Gosh darn illnesses making me cough blood and unable to participate in the discussion thread. Here are my final cards! Your thoughts?
First, I hope you feel better soon. Sounds rough.
Chain Lightning is interesting. I'm assuming that it'd behave like the Chess cards from Karazhan? I can't think of any other card that requires both players attending to their positioning, so the effect is pretty novel. You could play it on a sacrificial minion of your own to deal 8 damage split between the opposing minions that it lies between, or to deal a flat 4 when you either lack a board or your opponent has 2+ more minions than you. I like it.
Permutation is alright. Would be better if you discovered the Hero Power, as it would seem to me that if you're intent on running this card, you're fishing for a specific Hero Power. 1/9 odds are not favorable, and you have to spend 2-Mana to take another crack at it. Not worth it IMO. As is, the RNG component is too inconsistent. Unless I'm missing something.
Steady Pulse..... too OP? If I play this in the late game I have infinite Elemental generation (or 14 is suppose). Even if I play this in the mid-game, I should be able to pick an elemental that can fit with my curve. I'd change the Discover part to something like "Add a random Elemental to your hand." For 2-Mana, the value of generating just one elemental could be worth it. Given the possibility to generate more elementals beyond that, a more balanced card needs to pressure the player into playing less than desirable elementals to keep the chain going. Just my opinion though.
Thanks for the wishes and the feedback! Viruses are such a pain.
Yup, Chain Lightning works exactly like the chess pieces from Karazhan. I tried to make the wording as close as possible to the chess pieces like White Queen ("minions opposite to").Your card!
supports Weapon Rogue. I'm already in love with it. The flavour is on point as well. It's a great card that synergizes with those weapon-synergy cards introduced in KoFT (e.g. Doomerang and Runeforge Haunter), and encourages Rogue to play high-durability weapons (e.g. Assassin's Blade). The balancing seems fine to me. My only complaint is that it may create an OTK weapon deck but the pieces of the combo required are so expensive that you have the chance to interact with it with cards like Acidic Swamp Ooze.
For the Cursed Shield, I am not sure if its allowed to add ignore immunity text to a card.
We're creating fake cards: if you think you can get away with putting "Ignores Immune" on the card, then go for it lol.
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Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
For the Cursed Shield, I am not sure if its allowed to add ignore immunity text to a card.
We're creating fake cards: if you think you can get away with putting "Ignores Immune" on the card, then go for it lol.
Its.. just.. not my ninja way! When I design card, I try to make it as real (I mean looks like a card that would be in game) and balanced as possible. Since Cursed Shield is breaking some in-game mechanic, I'm going with Spreading Rage instead..
I'm gonna do a round two of the sending Pms out. Maybe someone will respond. But it seems unlikely
I've done this in the past for people on my own page (it's in everyone's interest to keep low-scoring cards on their own page from being disqualified), and responses are rare. When I do get responses, it's usually after the competition is over.
I mean i diden't have that high hopes for this experiment. But noone even responding fells super discouraging.
And the idea wasn't really to net me a better chance to advance, but mostly to make the competition more "fun" for newcomers.
I was just saying everyone should be trying to help out the newcomers on their page, rather than just one person.
For the Cursed Shield, I am not sure if its allowed to add ignore immunity text to a card.
We're creating fake cards: if you think you can get away with putting "Ignores Immune" on the card, then go for it lol.
Its.. just.. not my ninja way! When I design card, I try to make it as real (I mean looks like a card that would be in game) and balanced as possible. Since Cursed Shield is breaking some in-game mechanic, I'm going with Spreading Rage instead..
I guess I'm just radical like that :P
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Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
For the Cursed Shield, I am not sure if its allowed to add ignore immunity text to a card.
We're creating fake cards: if you think you can get away with putting "Ignores Immune" on the card, then go for it lol.
Its.. just.. not my ninja way! When I design card, I try to make it as real (I mean looks like a card that would be in game) and balanced as possible. Since Cursed Shield is breaking some in-game mechanic, I'm going with Spreading Rage instead..
Couldn't you just change the wording to "non-Immune minion"? That's the wording originally used by Demonwrath (don't know why they changed it)
For the Cursed Shield, I am not sure if its allowed to add ignore immunity text to a card.
We're creating fake cards: if you think you can get away with putting "Ignores Immune" on the card, then go for it lol.
Its.. just.. not my ninja way! When I design card, I try to make it as real (I mean looks like a card that would be in game) and balanced as possible. Since Cursed Shield is breaking some in-game mechanic, I'm going with Spreading Rage instead..
Couldn't you just change the wording to "non-Immune minion"? That's the wording originally used by Demonwrath(don't know why they changed it)
It looks better this way, with "except Demons" at the end. More formal English.
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Couldn't post on page 6 as it would be suicide because of Toble's entry.
Couldn't post on page 7 as someone posted a slightly tilted version of my card.
Post on page 8, Tox outta nowhere with 11 votes already.
You're telling me. I posted on Tox's page, and I just realized he had WAY more votes than me. I'm screwed XD. (Nothing against Tox's card though because I quite like it.)
Couldn't post on page 6 as it would be suicide because of Toble's entry.
Couldn't post on page 7 as someone posted a slightly tilted version of my card.
Post on page 8, Tox outta nowhere with 11 votes already.
You're telling me. I posted on Tox's page, and I just realized he had WAY more votes than me. I'm screwed XD. (Nothing against Tox's card though because I quite like it.)
Yeah, who doesnt like a card that can set up a one card OTK :D I suppose i shouldnt be talking this week, but w/e, i am! :p
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
I'm gonna do a round two of the sending Pms out. Maybe someone will respond. But it seems unlikely
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Your card!
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
SOMEONE RESPONDED!
Deathstoll on page 7.
WOOH
I want a new title, but Flux won't let me have one,
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Come Play Make the Keyword!!!
Check out my Worgen Class in the Class Competition
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Come Play Make the Keyword!!!
Check out my Worgen Class in the Class Competition
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
And then I posted a discussion in the submission thread...
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