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I'm having way too much fun with this promt.

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"One might call him a con-golem-rate. Get it? 'Cause...yeah. I'll be going now."

"Generated" simply refers to Spare Parts you've acquired from Mechanical Yetis and the like.

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 If Tournament Combatant works anything like Dragon Consort - wherein its Battlecry stays available until you use it, even on a future turn - that card is redonkulous. It's a War Golem with a crazy-good Battlecry.

Giant Sandbeast is not itself a Beast; that's odd. Also, are you sure you don't want it to say "Costs (3) less" for the memes? :P

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 Giants gotta be Epics, so I think this would be disqualified.

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About your card: It looks like a Giant, and all the Giants are Epics, so yeah...

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I really fucking want to do that.

So taking criticism for my three ideas I made some adjustments

People said Depthcharger sucked compared to North Sea Kraken, and they're right. So I buffed it by making it deal 5 damage instead of 4, and it's still balanced at 7 mana since it's a 6/6 and hits a random enemy.

Flying Witch seems to be my popular card and is most likely what I'll be submitting, but some have pointed out it feels a little OP. So I reduced the attack from 7 to 6.

I reworded Sabertooth Hunter. Also, a note: I didn't make it a beast for two reasons: 1. I don't want this card being given beast buffs because of how powerful it is. 2. Cloaked Huntress isn't a Beast despite riding one, so this won't be either.

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Thoughts? I did post this awhile ago in a competition elsewhere, so if that isn't allowed then I'll take it down

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Thoughts? I did post this awhile ago in a competition elsewhere, so if that isn't allowed then I'll take it down

 

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I'm having way too much fun with this promt.

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Oooooo! I really like this theme. Okay, here's my first three ideas:

Originally I was gonna give Depthcharger, well, Charge, but I remembered the 3 lines rule, so I changed it to just a deathrattle. A 8 mana 6/6 that deals 4 damage as a Deathrattle. Though I feel I can make this card more exciting, like Bonemare exciting.

So since it's October, and I have a crippling love of witches, I made a Witch themed minion for Shamans that is a big body that hexes another minion. This would be a great replacement for the nerfed hex, and give Shamans something in Arena.

So because of the high mana cost, I wanted to give Hunters something exciting. So I created this 8 mana 5/6 with charge that can ignore Taunt! Use it to SMOrc, or remove a minion that needs to die but it's hard to kill for a taunt is in the way.

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This theme is interesting. Big Common cards are a very rare thing in the game and most of them are generally quite unimpressive, but they can't be too crazy because they're Commons. It makes this theme challenging but I'm not hating it. Right here would be my first idea:

Fits the Un'Goro Druid theme, fits Jungle Giants. Counts as a 5 Attack minion and gets you another.

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Here's an idea:

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I really fucking want to do that.

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We always need a rager?

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I can't find "Bouncy Ball" artwork, so maybe "Bouncer" is the next best thing. :D

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Individual reviews while I can manage it:

@Tox: Doctor Golem everyday. I would change the art though. Even a shitty Paint edit of War Golem with a black hood and some Wisps besides him would do.

@Dr_Scaphandre: I love Deathcharger (the 5 damage version), it's simple and flavorful and this competition is obviously about simplicity and flavor.

@Demonx95: I don't really like the card, it's bland ( bland != simple) and Jungle Druid will likely never be viable anyway.

@Teknican: Deathseekr --> The effect is too hard to trigger for the cost. I would make it a 8mana 8/8. Also the card has no flavor associated with the effect. Ferocious Devilsair --> I like this one better. Simple and flavorful, though I would change the art.

@Hieii: Sorry you're only a few seconds late.

@Zukuu: I like it, but I would change the art. (Also I understand the 15/3 logic but that would erase all meme value)

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Although everyone here seems to appreciate Megagma Rager, I'm still gonna post the rest of my ideas just in case :

And Megagma Rager updated. I changed the art to be more Warcraft-y. Is it better ?

Alright I'm dropping Sabertooth Hunter. A card like that needs to be a rare, not a common.

So these two are gonna be my ideas. I feel Depthcharger needs to be more exciting or needs some stat adjustments to make it eyecatching. As for Flying Witch I got people saying it's overpowered. Problem is I can't add Overload to it or else it'll be over three lines of text.

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Is this too lazy :D ?

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My two ideas.

Karazhan Secretary could potentially be a hunter or paladin card (with a name and art change). There is one Secret for each class that makes this card somewhat busted, and I think I have to scrap the idea. Those Secrets are: Counterspell, Noble Sacrifice and Freezing Trap. Agree?

 

I'm going in a new direction: C'Thun cards. I've made a card for each of the three classes that don't have one (Hunter, Paladin, Shaman), A. because no class should be left out, and B. to challenge myself with the 3-text-lines limit. C'Thun text takes up a lot of real estate. For balance reference, Dark Arakkoa, Hooded Acolyte and Usher of Souls are the other Common-tier C'Thun minions. Gave up on finding solid art for now; figured I'd look for gameplay-related feedback in the mean time.

Each of the three also supports an archetype that could go hand-in-hand with C'Thun: Deathrattle Hunter, Divine Shield Paladin, and Hero Power-usage via Evolve with Thrall, Deathseer or a Totem Shaman.