looks very nice. Its a bit one dimensional. No jokers/removers. So with slight mods it might work better.
Maybe moremidrange aproach.
I have absolutely no doubt that my list can be refined, but I doubt midrangey is the way to go. I think this meta has very little room for midrange decks (other than Libram Paladin, and even that is suffering in winrate now). You either need to be aggressive, or have a ton of lifegain and value.
I'm also biased against your version because it has 3 legendaries that I lack.
I have HSReplay Drawn Winrate stats for my cards, btw, analyzed over 57 games, which might be almost enough to be meaningful. According to those stats, if I'm going to remove anything, Salhet's Pride and Blessing of Kings are the worst cards in the deck.