Hearthpwn

Alright, I'm nearly set and ready to submit. I need all the feedback I can get because I have to submit it in a couple of hours.

I've tweaked and reworded some of the cards, the current result is:

I'm currently thinking about which Legendary to put into the set:

I like Pastor Oats the most however I couldn't find a Priest/Cleric with a Two-headed battleaxe and that is the closest I've got to the art I want to have.
Chrysoprase the Troll fits thematically really well but might be overloading the class with draw mechanics. He could possibly reward you in some other way for collecting bounty.
Moist von Lipwig I am most unsure about. It would probably be really unfun to play against it.

These are the weapons I want to put into the set however I am concerned with their balance. (altho they seem fine to me they don't seem fine to others):

The newest Common cards that might require balancing:

 I am thinking about forcing some tribal synergy into the class by having a tribal secret (if X condition is met, give your Criminals Y) and maybe taking out a card (likely Night at the Castle) and putting a tribe-synergistic spell instead.
One of the following will make it into the set, the other will not:

The last secret will probably be:

The idea is that if you take the bait and assault it, you are getting busted, arrested and thrown into jail.

@nurgling13

Thx for the feedback.

I can call the ordinary Thief "Thief of the Guild". That would be a bit more descriptive but I'm unsure.

Having 4 health IS the stat detriment because it can be taken out by nearly anything. But if somehow she isn't taken out you are able to cash in. I was thinking about making it a 4/4 or a 5/3 but with both of those statline it becomes unplayable.

But if you can avoid the secret by going face and trying to win the game before your opponent can - its alright. Its not as if you couldn't attack at all.  I am still unsure about it.

I will reword Ambuscade.

Need to add 'Secret:' to bait in the shades.

I've completed my set, only need to choose which legendary to use. I have 4 more hours, right?

I'm currently thinking about which Legendary to put into the set:

I like Pastor Oats the most however I couldn't find a Priest/Cleric with a Two-headed battleaxe and that is the closest I've got to the art I want to have.
Chrysoprase the Troll fits thematically really well but might be overloading the class with draw mechanics. He could possibly reward you in some other way for collecting bounty.

@Zukuu

THe only reason TPG is a 5/8 is because his ability can be exploited by the opponent. Troll has the body of a very strong 5drop or weak 6drop. He has a huge ability on top. I can see myself buffing him to a 5/8 if you really think he is weak.

You also think I should go with Chrysoprase the Troll over Pastor Oats, right?

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@Zukuu

THe only reason TPG is a 5/8 is because his ability can be exploited by the opponent. Troll has the body of a very strong 5drop or weak 6drop. He has a huge ability on top. I can see myself buffing him to a 5/8 if you really think he is weak.

You also think I should go with Chrysoprase the Troll over Pastor Oats, right?

Troll has more flavor. The thin gis, TPG gives you valueable cards and shies your opponent away from actually using them, so he sort of has a board impacting presence. The coin is pretty negligible in most situations since we are talking turn 6+ onwards. Drawing a card right away is strong. Having that tied to a deathrattle makes it costing less. Having that tied to your OPPONENT's minion makes it costing even less than that, since it requires you to use up resources / trade with minions to have access to them, so the actual effect is not costing very much of the budget, if we apply the usual "2 target" rule. Him having 2-4 stats less than most other 7 drops seems unreasonable for such a slow-triggered effect. But yeah, make him 5/8 at the very least or preferable make him 6 mana and keep the 4/8 stats.

Pastor is on the very other end of the balance spectrum. It's a 3-fold effect, which costs primly. You get a 6/4 body, a 6/2 weapon as battlecry (which alone is roughly worth 5.5 - 6 mana) AND heal for 10 (around 3.5 mana) all combined in a single card. I like that he has an immediate effect the turn you play him (a common thing about almost all currently viable legendaries), but he is pretty much OP as fuck, unless Forgeivness does something negative or doesn't function like a normal weapon.

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One hour left and still a feeew missing entries. The pressure is on. =3

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One hour left and still a feeew missing entries. The pressure is on. =3

 Question about the voting, are you guys looking into who votes? I could simply have 10 accounts and up-vote myself.

A) Up-votes are irrelevant to this phase of the competition. When submissions close in 45 minutes, we'll be putting up our first poll topic of the competition. =)

B) Yes. As for the WCDC, we do have ways of looking at both up-votes (when they're relevant, as they were in the previous competition phases) and poll votes and finding out whether people are cheating like that.

Alright, I've buffed/nerfed both Legendaries according to feedback, I've written the entire submission, now I need to decide which Legendary I'll use. 37 minutes to go.

I've found 3 images for Forgiveness suit it alright. Currently I think the second one is best, not sure tho.

The first poll is now open! This features half of the entries that made it this far. The other half will feature in a poll tomorrow, and then the top 11 entries across both polls will move on to Phase IV.

If I *finally* get the feedback on my legendaries, can I swap them granted I am not in the poll #1? (So nobody will notice it unless I tell them).

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Man, I wish I was in the other poll. I have to go against DKPaladin... He's gonna bring up the average vote.

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Man, I wish I was in the other poll. I have to go against DKPaladin... He's gonna bring up the average vote.