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I don't think that there's many asians here, even though they are in many ways objectively superior in many ways and not only in language in that way that they speak english close to perfect, far better than most none native english speaking europeans. But the real reason i don't think they visit this site is that they don't need the support wheels and someone holding their hands when it comes to building decks. They can, and will, build their own decks out of intelligence combined with rigorously and statistically well proven methods. They don't look at someone else when coming across an obstacle but solve the problem on their own by their own skills and experience.

This site isnt only for deckbuilding tho...

"With this, your opponent will have a hard time staying positive"

Kind of a postponed boardclear. Gives imidiate board precense but can't stop lethal.

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Does my card artwork have to be selfmade? Or can I just google something

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Any thoughts? Still have rarity and stuff, cause I made them not specifically for this competition. Would change before submitting of course.

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As usual, feedback for feedback

Notes

I don't mind changing the name of "Armor All" if the meme doesn't resonate.

I know Bubble Hearth will be an extremely polarizing card, but
a) your opponent would still get a win, since the effect is essentially the same as "Your opponent left."
b) yeah, it's basically an extra life when you're at 2 losses, but that forces you to treat it as a dead card the rest of the time. Depending on the circumstances when you draw it, I could see it indirectly causing more losses than it prevents.

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Here are my final two, can't decide which is better:

The worst thing about them imo is the titles, can't think of something cool. Feedback for feedback.

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How's this?

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So far my ideas are these:

* I know Silver Hand Knight is already a card, I just need to rename it.

Any feedback on which of these to go for?

Thanks :)

Tox is spreading mis-information again >.< 

Its 821746399293 really

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I'm voting #5, just so you know.

Aaaaand then noone chooses you, sad Broeck1 :( :D

 

 If #5 get chosen, my vote goes to whoever adds the most Illusionist related cards! How about that!

Clap... Clap... Clap...

Lumus supposed to be an Elemental >.< 

This is crazy :/

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So despite the lack of edits I've made (and Otovent still not giving his review), I might just submit what I have. I really don't have anything else. Now I need to know what my 6 example cards should be. Preferably, there should be 3 MSoG and 3 Un'Goro.

Mean Streets of Gadgetzan

Time Traveller is part of the Kabal.

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Some people have commented on changing Cyber Punk's wording, though to be honest, I actually prefer it as is now.

Journey to Un'Goro

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Future Sight is a Basic collectable card

 

 

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Hey Otovent, how about you help me out too.

How about ok? lel, sry for not keeping up that thing >.<

MSG: The immidiate problem you notice is that only 2 cards have less than 4 lines of text. It is a lot and can possinly lose you votes cause an average user will have a hard time reading thru them. Other from that i think most of your cards are aight, synregizing nicely with the "top card" mechanic.

UNG: The set seems fine with many cool cards. The only major problem im seeing is with the quest, and althrough it makes some niche interactions with wandering mage  (and maybe C'Thun) it fails to deliver what the Quest rewards are supposed to: A win condition. I don't think its a bad quest, it's just doesn't give you much outside the knowledge of what you and you're opponent are playing and in what order (if you want to keep track of that) and im not sure if it's good enough.

P.s. Sorry, im terribad at reviews >.<

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Here's my cards as of now. EDIT: Images of individual cards have been added how that I had some sleep.

MSOG

Reminder: Hot meals cost (1) like Razorpetals, no Malygos shenanigans.

UNG

Reminder: Hangovers are 0mana spells "Do nothing".

Also yay I found a Quest reward!

Just in case the images don't load:

• MSG: https://i.imgur.com/lB45lgg.png
• UNG : https://i.imgur.com/KOEzSlG.png

Here are some cool cards I wanted to include but didn't because there weren't enough room

 

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@maxlot

Individual cards

• Primordial Peeble: This is too good compared to Evolving Spores. The Invoke cost needs to be raised.
• Rebirth: "resummon it"
• Primeval Pool: It's not bad per se, but it doesn't deserve to be epic. Also the art sucks.

Overall

I LOVE the Quest! The reward is super original while being flavorful and the quest condition makes sense in the class (the art for the tentacle is weird though...). The other cards are decent. I expect more secrets and secret synergy for the remaining cards of your Un'Goro set.

@Otovent

Oh well, I posted my own shit a few minutes too late apparently. You reviewed my first post haha

• Deckbuilding gang - The problem I see with this is that it goes into all directions at once. Although you can build a deck around it (which is what a Gang is supposed to be about) you would probably not include all cards of the gang at once. I suggest to focus on either spells or minions. Also the first card is not functional if the copied Battlecry is a targeted one.
• Anti-curse System - The "relics" need to be dormant minions rather than cards in hand, unless they also had an effect when played. Also, you can't build a deck around relics because each relic has an effect that is good in only one particular type of deck.
• Shuffling Mechanic - Well, shuffling is the theme of my quest so this gang would be the most adapted for my class (if I join it). Howevern same comment as above. You likely can't build a deck around just [well, Quest Chef could but that's it] this unless the gang legendary justifies it.

Overall, the weakess of the 3 themes is that they lack deckbuilding power.

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Hey, in the spoiler below, you'll find my first attempt at the Journey to Un'Goro set. If you have a few minutes, a review would be appreciated.

A quick reminder of the class and the keyword:

The cards

The Quest

The Arcan'dor is a dormant minion (which cannot be removed). It holds a minion spot without ever being able to do damage, but in return grants you 10 extra mana crystals. When you play the spell, your maximum number of mana crystals increases to 20 and you get 10 full mana crystals. Hence, when you'd play the spell at turn 5 (would be pretty insane since the quest can hardly be achieved in four turns, but anyway), you'd boost your mana crystals to 15 (of which 5 are used for the spell). Next turn, you'd start with 16 mana crystals. On turn 10 you'd have the maximum number: 20.

 

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P.s. I'll be reviewing everyone that posted here this evening (T - 6h) so post your cards peeps!

Tri-class is between Mewdrops, Broeck, and myself.  Name is Cutthroat Cult.

For reference:

Cutthroat Cult:

Davy Jones tokens:

Thought process:

Cutthroat Cult - Headed by a huge "shark god".

As the Kabal focused on deck and value (singleton and potions), the Goons focused on hand advantage (handbuffing), while the Lotus focused on board + tempo (Jade Golems), the Cult focuses on the Hero and Hero Powers.

"Backstory": - Davy Jaws is a ghostly pirate that has taken over the Gadgetzan harbour. Three classes that are well known for their shady dealings and powerful magic have rallied around him to boost their powers.

Card generalization - Short term replacement Hero Powers; Essentially one use HPs or temporary ones, based on minions onboard or weapons. We previously worked on this in Crusade's a Burnin' if you need ideas or wan to see how we thought they should be balanced.
- Inspire synergy is probably minimal
- The boss is a Jaraxxus style minion; The preferred idea is a hero power similar to that of the upgraded shaman power, where you can pick one of three choices each time you use the hero power: deal 4 dmg randomly split among enemies, summon a 0/4 taunt, or somethig with healing. Due to future DK's this shark boss hero is temporary. When he dies, you revert back to your hero whatever it was before you transformed.
- Pirates are possible but not a necessity; Illusionist has no weapons ATM (if anything, they will be beasts since it's a bunch of sharks) 

 

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WASSUP B*TCHES I've been working on my card and I have slightly more stuff to show you.

1/ QUEST REWARD

I'm still not set on which reward is best, here are the different possibilities I isolated below.

NOTE: Imagine that Kitchenlord costs (5).

2/ GANG EFFECT

I separated the gang flavor from the effects so that I can do any combination. I have 5 options.

a) Join Scribber and Dancer for a gang

Otovent posted some ideas above so just look at his post to see whether these ideas are better than mine.

b) Untargeted damage synergy

NOTE: For all the options, the 3rd card will be the discover one so I didn't bother making the same card for each class.

I want to include some untaregeted damage synergy at some point in my class because of my hero power. The "Gucca Gang" says the common is broken because it's Frothing Berserker on steroids, it's still only a big minion though.

c) Spell Damage synergy

My class has strong damaging spells and Spell Damage is an underexploited mechanic currently in HS.

I forgot to bold "Spell Damage" on the common.

d) Universal tribe synergy

This gang can be used in ANY deck featuring a good amount of tribal synergy, regardless of the tribe! Do note that the 1/3 effect is written in italics, because this information is actually contained purely on the "wild card" tribal tag. It is NOT affected by silence!

 e) Don't bother with a custom gang and join the Grimy Goons

...However I would exploit the handbuff mechanic in a very unique way. Rather than buff stats, my cards would give effects!

I plan to have 4 Gang slots in my MSOG sets, so here are the cards I would do if I choose Grimy Goons

3/ GANG FLAVOR

Although some gang effects would fit better into some gang flavors, pretty much any combination is possible.

a) Casino-themed gang

Erin Djee = RNG. BECAUSE IT"S CASINO LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

b) Circus-themed gang

c) Poaching-themed gang

 d) Pyromania-themed gang

 

The idea is that they would be like some sort of punk/anarchist group that loves to burn stuff.

 e) Whatever Scribber & Dancer do, again.

3/ THE REST OF MY SHIT

Besides 4 MSoG slots I'm saving for Gang synergy and the Quest reward, my sets are complete (I think)

MSG

 

(4 slots for Gang synergy)

UN'GORO

I just noticed Red Proto-Whelp is the Scribbler's hero power. Oh well.

 Other cool cards I might shove in my sets

Yeah, I know it's a lot :(

 

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EDIT: Somehow, double space bar is a shortkey to post something on my laptop....

 

Two new questions!

1) McF4rtson (Sea Witch) and I (Illusionist) want to make a new crime family that rule the docks of gadgetzan. We want to find something that both the Sea Witch and Illusionist (and Harbinger because that's likely to be the third class) have in common. We were thinking about some kind of sea god or demon these classes worship, like they're some kind of religion fanatics. Is there anything we could dig up in wow lore? We can't find anything so far...

2) Does the wording on my Quest idea make sense?

There are some neutral cards that would trigger this quest: Faceless Manipulator, Barnes and Doppelgangster for example. Illusionist has some copy cards as well. I am asking this, because someone thought this Quest would work similar to Crystal Core, when just reading the card text as it is.

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First crap failed

I've been thinking about my quest the last few days. I'm pretty set on the condition but I can't find a good reward.

NOTE: It says "add" rather than "shuffle" to account for cards that are put on top of the deck.

EDIT: Sorry the second one was meant to be "Shuffle this into your deck". It's corrected.

In addition, here are my first cards ideas (MSG and UNG mixed together).

Still thinking about the gang, but I have one Grimy Goon card just in case.

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Chat looks like it's dying a little bit so I'm just gonna put forward what little I've got for Un'Goro as of right now.

When I'm less busy, I have some opinions I want to share...

But now is not that time.

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P.s. I'll be reviewing everyone that posted here this evening (T - 6h) so post your cards peeps!

Mean Streets of Gadgetzan

Time Traveller is part of the Kabal.

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Journey to Un'Goro

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Future Sight is a Basic collectable card

 

Sry for not reviewing all of your cards, time flew and its suddendly almost 1 am here. I'll make sure to review them all by today after the night :) 

Edit: Im terrible, sry that i didnt review the cards today :( I won't say that ill review them all tommorow just to come out as an ass again, but ill review them. Maybe one by one so i can fit it in between my stuffs. Sorry for not keeping up with what i promised :(

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EDIT: F**K me, you edited the post.

 Nope, it was tox 

P.s. I'll be reviewing everyone that posted here this evening (T - 6h) so post your cards peeps!