Hearthpwn

How many lines of text am I allowed on the Card text?

I think your photo shop kills are pretty bad if Im being honest with you.

The thing that gave it away was the fact that the card back is way to low res and You can see the cards you original cards behind The ones you or someone else added. Look closely at the cards Closest to the right.

EDIT: Im a fool, I forgot to take into account the overlapping of the cards. My bad

There aren't that many good 7 drops. The best once is Dr.boom But there could be some others I cant think off

Quote from futhead_olindblom68 >>

Yea, just made it to see how much dust i needed :)

Im missing Thalnos and I dont have enough Dust to craft him ,so do you have any Suggestions for cards to replace him?

ok, thank you for telling me.

Isn't this the same deck as the oil rogue deck on icy veins?

Just asking because Ive made an oil rogue deck and Ive noticed that it doesn't do to well against it.

ok so:

1st- This is a name and shame thread.

2nd-How do you know he uses Hearthpwn?

Its one of the cards you can get from dark peddler.

Quote from Thebutchers >>

Firstly, I congratulate on your foray into non-fiction writing. However, in my opinion there are a few techniques you could use to make it more readable from a literary point of view.

For example, writing in giant chunks with out paragraphs puts a strain on readers, regardless of their IQ.

Second, using all capital letters or strings of bold reduce the flow of the writing.

In addition, the punctuation is incorrect, and the grammar needs a little work. For example the very first sentence, ("hes Dead Ben" I say to ben Brode, ben Brode Reply's "we can Rebuild him, Stronger, Faster Paced!". ")

It should look more like this. ("He's dead Ben," I say to Ben Brode. He replies, "we can rebuild him, stronger and faster paced."

The above version doesn't use multiple pronouns in sequence, doesn't use capital letters incorrectly, and overall reduces the clutter of the sentence, while conveying the same points.

Also, it is very straining on the reader to see things like (???) and (...) and (*) in the middle of a sentence. If you want to highlight an action for example try writing it in italics. For example, (Lighting hits the hidden object.)


Please note that I am not trying to attack you, I think writing is an excellent tool to convey stories and share with people. With a few changes this text can be much more natural to the human eye.

My writing is great m8 what you sayin?

Warsong nerf:

"hes Dead Ben" I say to ben Brode.He Replied  "we can Rebuild him, Stronger, Faster Paced!". "no you can't, once dead always Dead ,I mean whens the last time you saw a Undertaker Warlock?" I respond, "you'll See, YOU'LL ALL SEE" says ben

LoE:

"I did it, After all these Years" says ???? "after all these days.... Hes Finaly Fixed.... now for the Grand Reveal!" lighting Hits the Hidden Object. a Grim patron Warrior Reveals its self, But then a Voice From the Shadows is heard, "This is over Ben.... Its Time to finish this once and for all....". "is it really? You have forgotten the Power of The Patron!" ben says, "No.. I never could.. but this Time Im ready! Its time to dudududuel!" (I know You like the Yu-gi-oh Refrence) ben laughs "what are you going to use? a Secret paladin? hahahah" says ben, "maybe...." I respond

12 turns later

"Attack my 20/1 frothing berserker!" Declares ben. I drop to 3 health as I Draw my last card and add it to my hand of 1, "It is Over Unnamed Character! I have the High Ground!" Shouts ben. I smile "you think this is Over ben... You may have a Deaths bite Equipped But i have something more Some thing More Powerful than Your Frothing Berserker.... I SUMMON RENO JACKSON" I shout,"which as you should know Returns My health to Full if I have no more then 1 of each card in my deck and I well... My deck is kinda Empty", "aww Cute, Its a shame I still have... Lethal...." Ben reply's, "o'rly? I CAST CONSECRATION!" I Scream at the top of my voice, "no... it cant be!" Ben Responds in horror... I shout "Well met!" as Ben Concedes Leaving me... Victorious. I later Find an angry post of hearthpwn Saying that Reno Should be Nerfed.

Those are my thoughts on this matter.

EDIT: the Reason why I made this is A-I got bored and B-Ive seen an Increasing number of Patrons.

EDIT:changed a few things and Thank you toTheButchers for helping me Improve this.

Quote from gravitycat5000 >>

Well some of the legendaries. Harrison, and reno and arent related to wow. but you get my point most of the legendaries are related to wow. (Mal'ganis, ragnaros,ysera, alextrasza, you get my drift)

Quote from IceverinHS >>

xpac based on Warlords of Draenor