I honestly hope that all submissions that satisfy the rules pass at least to phase 2. I feel it would be a shame if a class looses after only a small percentage of cards are shown.
The problem is that people dont read all the classes and cards leading to them picking based on picture. Last time when i made it to semifinals (last 8 people) there was at least one class that people voted for just because of the character. The actual class was bad and the cards were too. But people liked the picture and the character so they upvoted.
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GOD f-ing dammit as soon as i post in the submission topic i get another idea for a class and a better one with something my current class is missing and will probably be the reason it wont make it too far. It's like i learned nothing from last time. :,(
EDIT: @layrit thanks for the feedback. The taunt bypass card is just something if you want to play a more agroish type of deck and i wanted to make it just like how the skill functions in guild wars (tp to your opponent). Hmm you may be right on guardian reflection and i will probably buff it a bit. Master of illusions is supposed to be a big bods bad card from the basic set. Like temple enforcer and ironbark.
@HackergradIts not about fixing but about how Hearthstone works. Your effect would in that case function as an aura since it can turn on and off making it similar to stormwind champion. Tha way you imagined it wont work because hs would process it differently.
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@layritHmm thats a problem. I am facing something similar cause I need to make cards that produce tokens. Try making at least one minion for your example cards and explain in great detil what you plan on the submission post. That's all I can say. Would you mind looking at my submission too and give some thoughts?
@layrit ok class but you should make something that makes your class stand out. Librarian and morporks poison could be as well any class cards. Nothing unique. 12 o clock well i have nothing to say since you should have shown at least one minion with the assasin tag? yeah you should decide for one tribe and go with it.
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yeah but then it could become a mess lets say your opponent deals 1 or 2 damage to it and you play a minion and some how destroy that minion. The shogun would heal himself.
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I'd like to ask for some opinions before posting this. Anyways, this class is the Contractor( from the anime Darker Than Black), the hero is Hei. His hero power is pretty straightforward. Deal 2 damage to whatever then take 1 damage to your face.
I'm a bit iffy on this keyword, so i'm asking for opinions.Basically, if a minion has a Battlecry, Inspire or Deathrattle(or all of those), once it activates, this effect also triggers. Here's an example:
So whenever you use your hero power, this guy gains 2 attack AND he deals 2 damage to himself.
I feel like this guy is a bit underpowered(or maybe he's overpowered, it's a bit hard to judge since it's a bit situational).
And here we have a legendary. Her effect is a bit odd so i'll explain it. Once you use your hero power, everything rewinds to how it was the previous turn. Health/attack changes to how it was a turn ago, if any minions died, they are revived, etc. but Amber stays on the board, silenced.
The more i think about it, the more confusing it is, so i'll probably change it.
Yeah sometimes your keyword is a bit unnecessary like in case of Mao. You could only say battlecry: gain control of a random enemy minon untill the end of the turn AND give it/this minion +2/+2. Or first minion. Inspire gain +2 attack and deal 2 damage to this minion. The keyword is a bit uneccecary. As for a more positive thing, i think your hero power is balanced quite well while keeping it similar to lore. GJ with that. By the way would you mind looking at my class and give me your thoughts?
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The main theme involves comparing the number of your minions to your opponent. Many involve having lesser or equal minions.
As for the Rare, I wonder if it is a bit too powerful, or if it belongs in a differing set.
Now, I feel like the Hero Power and the theme do not fit very well with each other. But then again, so does the Hunter's Hero Power and Beast theme, that much.
Using spoiler as reference, I was considering replacing the rare with this, such that it can provide the class synergy.
Hmmm i liked your original cards better. Well it is better now flavour wise since your cards feel a bit more unique but previous cards seemeed alot better if you ask me. Also the rare cards is op. Most of the time you could leave the board empty at turn six so a huge tempo boost like that would be a bit overpowered. I would add a drawback to that card.
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Your class is bad. Your hero power description ends mid sentence. Your class keyword is explained in a way no one would understand. Almost every card is poorly worded.
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Ok added a few more powerfull spells and two more illusions that are more control oriented. Any advice helps (balance favourite three cards) and will return the favor.
@nurgling13 good point on time traveller and revert. Traveller should be changed because if you somehow get it into your hand it will be a dead card. For the hero power i would go with consistency (cuse it would botner me if it didnt cost 2) and make it 2 cost: the card costs 1 less. It mind sound extreme to you but from balance standpoint that would be the best if you ask me, but do ask other people too =)
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Anyone else willing to give me feedback / wants feedback?
The Shatter keyword seems really unneccessary. It seems to me you could replace every instance of Shatter with Destroy and it wouldn't have a significant impact on the functionality. Is there some distinction between Shatter and Destroy? There really needs to be one if you made it a new keyword.
Also, a lot of the Shatter effects seem incredibly weak. If you are sacrificing your own minions, especially if you sacrifice several, you really need to be getting better effects out of it. For example, you could sacrifice powerful illusions with Distortion, and all you get out of it is +1/+1 from each minion sacrificed. Void Terror gets all of the stats of the minions it destroys and it still isn't very great. Basically, all of your spells need to be majorly buffed.
The class also seems really one-dimensional right now. The only theme I see here is sacrificing minions. What other kinds of spells does the class have? You should have some other theme or themes of the class and give one example of that. After you buff your spells, I would include one example of an Illusions and one example of a minion that sacrifices illusions.
Now, what do you think of my class? (link in my signature)
Thank you for the feedback!
Imo shatter keyword is neccecary since some Illusions do something when they are shattered not killed/destroyed (that would be deathrattle). Hmm I could agree that shatter seems weak but you can look at it from two perspectives. you can play aggro shatter where you will flood the board with small Illusion tokens (cant make cards that produce other tokens so that comes in the basic/expert set) and sacrefice them easily or play powerfull illusions that are bigger bodies and sacrifice them when you deem nececary. In any case I could do some tweaks on the spells. (Distortion for example would be meant to be played in a more weak flood deck). Will make a few more spells for the control decks. Also i will add another flavor to the class that i have been working on.
As for your class
the hero powers is if you ask me a bit overpowered. Even thou you use the same ammount of mana to summon something it still allows insane combos. Chrono wrench seems ok but i see no reason to play it without seeing the rest of the cards. Time traveler is ok. It gives you a tempo boost but can screw you over rather quick (an overload if you can say so). The wrench could save you from the deathrattle but then it would just stay in your hand forever. As for revert make it cost more or reset the hands. You could use this when your opp used up his whole combo or vomited his hand on the board. Unless you meant by resetting the board the hand also gets reset.
hope you read the part about token cards on both posts. it says you can present up to 4 cards. Present can mean you only show 4 but have more or you are only allowed to have 4.
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One of the brightest commanders of the Imperium of Man, and Governor of the planet Cadia.
His hero power is very focused in his role as strategist:
The first one is your normal hero power, the second one, the one you get through Justicar Trueheart. The basic orders are:
As this orders can't be kept in your hand for later, to use the right order in the right moment is the key for a good commander. The drawing system is the same as discover, and though pretty complicated for starters, this hero involves a lot of tactical decisions. All orders have their name in exclamations (we are shouting this things, for the Emperor's sake), and not all of them are basic orders. An example:
All these orders need minions to work. I'm showing two examples of Imperial Guard minions (two good ones, because, well, I have to promote my class):
This class should really focus on fighting for the board, helping his mates to get the upper hand through orders, supporting spell and weapons, and some late game hitters like the Leman Russ (coming in a future release), or Ogryns, like this one below:
I hope you like this, and give me some feedback about it. May the Emperor protects you!
ok hold on what i said before about the hero power and 4 token cards. In the rules it says you are not allowed to present more than 4 tokens from your hero power. So it could mean you still can have more than 4. Not sure how to interpret that.
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I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
GOD f-ing dammit as soon as i post in the submission topic i get another idea for a class and a better one with something my current class is missing and will probably be the reason it wont make it too far. It's like i learned nothing from last time. :,(
EDIT: @layrit thanks for the feedback. The taunt bypass card is just something if you want to play a more agroish type of deck and i wanted to make it just like how the skill functions in guild wars (tp to your opponent). Hmm you may be right on guardian reflection and i will probably buff it a bit. Master of illusions is supposed to be a big bods bad card from the basic set. Like temple enforcer and ironbark.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
@Hackergrad Its not about fixing but about how Hearthstone works. Your effect would in that case function as an aura since it can turn on and off making it similar to stormwind champion. Tha way you imagined it wont work because hs would process it differently.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
@layrit Hmm thats a problem. I am facing something similar cause I need to make cards that produce tokens. Try making at least one minion for your example cards and explain in great detil what you plan on the submission post. That's all I can say. Would you mind looking at my submission too and give some thoughts?
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
@layrit ok class but you should make something that makes your class stand out. Librarian and morporks poison could be as well any class cards. Nothing unique. 12 o clock well i have nothing to say since you should have shown at least one minion with the assasin tag? yeah you should decide for one tribe and go with it.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
yeah but then it could become a mess lets say your opponent deals 1 or 2 damage to it and you play a minion and some how destroy that minion. The shogun would heal himself.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
Ok added a few more powerfull spells and two more illusions that are more control oriented. Any advice helps (balance favourite three cards) and will return the favor.
@nurgling13 good point on time traveller and revert. Traveller should be changed because if you somehow get it into your hand it will be a dead card. For the hero power i would go with consistency (cuse it would botner me if it didnt cost 2) and make it 2 cost: the card costs 1 less. It mind sound extreme to you but from balance standpoint that would be the best if you ask me, but do ask other people too =)
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
Anyone else willing to give me feedback / wants feedback?
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
hope you read the part about token cards on both posts. it says you can present up to 4 cards. Present can mean you only show 4 but have more or you are only allowed to have 4.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
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^^made two comments about it already =)
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.
I am a servant of the world. And if I'm a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool, at best.