This card has a lot of potential. Flavor is superb and fits SoU really well.
However, I agree with you the wording is quite inconsistent. Plus, the Riddles should have a more riddle-y effect. How about if they all hid some info from your opponent?
In any case, if you polish its its flaws a little bit, you could be a very strong candidate for winning.
Thanks for the feedback. I tried to make those riddles more riddle-y, but on the other hand, I want to make them simple enough to keep them in check easily. Hiding some of the effect was an option, but in this case, it's quite obvious lol At the moment, I cannot think about something more complicated and balance at the same time, too bad :( Guess I will be going with these effects this time, hopefully can develop it some more later. Unfortunately, while checking other card texts, the wording seems to be alright. That's quite weird since I have uncomfortable feeling about them as well lol. Probably fix the grammar, but have no idea to make wording much more consistently tho.
Thanks for the feedback.
I tried to make those riddles more riddle-y, but on the other hand, I want to make them simple enough to keep them in check easily.
Hiding some of the effect was an option, but in this case, it's quite obvious lol
At the moment, I cannot think about something more complicated and balance at the same time, too bad :( Guess I will be going with these effects this time, hopefully can develop it some more later.
Unfortunately, while checking other card texts, the wording seems to be alright. That's quite weird since I have uncomfortable feeling about them as well lol. Probably fix the grammar, but have no idea to make wording much more consistently tho.
Would like to get some feedback with this :D
Just not so sure if those effect is unique enough
The riddles are temporary effects that last for one turn, thinking about Loatheb. I think i will have to do some fixing on the wording tho.