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So many cards in submission topic where not the original card but the token has the word " immune" in it. Is this also allowed or an automatic disqualification?

 I don't see reason why it's bad. I mean cards that create tokens are harder to balance, but give you much more space! Look at Dreadful Deal from Demonxz95 here for example - really interesting, balanced and flavorfull card that creates a token. What I don't like in submissions tho are 10 mana legendary cards, Quests and Hero cards. It is weird to change Garrosh to some weird Naga (I know it's example from space but it shows how much nonsense cards like that give :P). I have two favorite card types - cards that create tokens and cards with 2 or less text lines.

So yeah, everyone likes something else but that shouldn't mean some archetypes should be banned from submissions :)

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What do people think of this piece?

 

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And because of posts being removed, my entry went from page 8 to page 7............

Sry guys who gave me feedback on thursday, i had to go out of town for couple of days, so couldnt give it back ... i assume all of u have submited already :)

The competition this week actually blew up more than i expected lol, already 9 pages of submissions :o gonna have to go through that and check whats already submited and see what i can come up with at this point :o

Would my card be run in any decks?

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Would my card be run in anything?

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Hi ;o, i subtmitted this card with its token the other day, but aint sure if the mana cost is appropriate.

Would you use it on a n'zoth deck?

P.S: Only after submitted noticed the typo on heroe.

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Welp, any thoughts on the balancing for this? This is quite difficult to balance...

 I feel like it should cost at least 5. With only a 3-Attack minion - which shouldn't be too hard to have - the damage alone is on level with Volcanic Potion and Consecration, with the added bonus that the targeted minion is safe and can trade safely after. This is also Hunter AoE, which there is very little of, so it needs to be kind of situational so as to not be used in nearly every Hunter deck (like how they handled Leeching Poison).

Thanks for the feedback!

I'm kinda on the fence with Punching Spree's cost being either 4 or 5. On one hand, Punching Spree is an AoE in Hunter, and Hunters aren't supposed to be good at AoE (the only AoE cards in Hunter is Deathstalker Rexxar and Explosive Trap); also, the 5-cost Brawl exists. On the other hand, I compared it to Betrayal, which doesn't see any play; also, Hunters are kinda bad at board control, so you'll likely choose an enemy minion and keep it alive. Do you think that justifies the 4-cost, or do you still think that it's necessary that this should cost 5?

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Hi ;o, i subtmitted this card with its token the other day, but aint sure if the mana cost is appropriate.

Would you use it on a n'zoth deck?

P.S: Only after submitted noticed the typo on heroe.

That is some big tempo gain with 2x 5/5 for 5 mana, tho the deathrattle might punish u hard (or not, but might). Im not sure if its balanced or not honestly. It looks kinda like big hit or miss card ... if your opponent has a minion (or more out) and has removal, he will take full advantage of deathrattle and can prepare to kill the other guy next turn and go double dmg face again ... if ur in a lead, this card will provide very good value, with very little disadvantage. U can also have quite a few of these on board with Shadow Visions.

Btw the art is rly bad, try not to use ingame screens.

Also "Void" isnt a tribe in HS, ofc u can make a new tribe, but creating it as a single example card in WDC isnt rly a good place to start, ppl dont respond to that very well.

And btw, u can repost your card in the submission post with fixed typos, that is allowed, so go ahead and fix that ;-)

And last, post smaller images ... thanks :P

 

First thanks a lot for the feedback ;o, was way more then i expected.

You made several good points, i did made the mistake thinking the card alone and not with help, so to avoid easy spam of minions i rose the card from 5 to 6 and lower the minion value to a 4 drop, rose 1 hp to help survive a bit better while lowering attack to make trades bit worse(bit better body vs aggro doh). I hope this lowers risk and reward values.

Art i was having hard time finding one that seemed like it so i kinda picked first one that had background, i hope this new one seems bit better.

The void race, seems like i totally mispredict, i thought people would like it, removed .

And lastly the image size, my bad didnt notice it would be too big resized it down hope its enough.

Once again thanks a lot ;o, i feel like a winner already just having my card commented.

Well, I decided to heed most if not all of the advice I got on Riot Until Dawn.

I guess it's actually more versatile this way without it killing the target, and its simpler to read now that it doesn't have to exclude enemy heroes. Thanks for the help guys. Wish me luck, and good luck to all of you. xP

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As someone who cares about the page I post on (because it absolutely matters a whole lot more than it should), the deleted posts make me very sad.  Would never have posted at the very bottom of page 9. Guess I will need to actually count posts on the page going forward instead of relying on post #.