Hearthpwn

Jaraxxus is really not needed. You can run another card that helps defend urself against aggro

Replacement for shadow reaper?

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Review time! Maxlot's message incited me to write this on a text file before posting it.

First, let me start by saying that the last 3 phases did their job: There are no classes I really dislike that are left (still uneasy with the loner's general flavor, gameplay-wise it's good though). Now it's about sorting the alright from the good.

Note: I won't comment on cards which I think don't need to be changed.

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@Demonxz95

F

Individual cards

• Hollow Knight - It's too good. 10 Attack on C'Thun isn't that difficult. Lower the stats or raise the cost (I'd prefer a stat lowering).
• Astral Summoner - Love the concept. It's perfect for a "big" deck, but the stats look too high.
• Murozond - I don't like this effect at all. He would be even more annoying than his uncorrupted self. I agree that your class should use Murozond as its legendary, but not with this effect.
• You should definitely pick "???" and Power of Yogg for your epics, both have awesome effects that fit your class well.
• You could still use Demented Lackey without +X/+X, no?
• Child's Play - Too many potential broken combos with it. There's a reason why Shadowcaster is on a 5mana body.

Overall

This set looks really good so far. Better than in the last phase! There is no card I really dislike among yours and the Quick Time keyword and your Hero Power add a huge strategic depth to your class (probably the most skill-testing class of ours) so it's not surprising.

My only critic is that you actually went too far in terms of complexity and your set lacks "simple" cards. You can use your remaining spots to make up for this.

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@thepowerofcheese

Individual cards

• Bilefin Murloc - Too good. Lower the stats.
• Shifting Sludge - I don't see the point of this card.
• Deepcaller - "Reduce your C'Thun's Cost by (1)", also such big stats on a Murloc is weird. Finally, C'Thun (midrange-control) does not fit well with Murlocs (aggro).
• AbercroMbie - The effect is weird. I didn't get it before reading the explanation. I advise you to find another close effect.

Overall

The cards are cool, they all have nice flavor and WOG fits well with an apothecary class. I'm still skeptical of Mutate but the variance between the effects isn't huge this time so it's good. I advise you to use the remaining slots to make some all-around good cards

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@McF4rtson

I already gave you all feedback I wanted to give on individual cards in private, so I will keep it brief.

Overall

I still think this is the future winner. The Reservoir keyword adds a lot of strategical depth (no pun intented) to your class, but you also have some good ideas on top of that which is awesome. Only issue is Ravenous Tentacle for which I'm not sure about balance if you can put many in your deck.

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@Ragnador

Individual cards

• Obsidian Pawn - What is the point of this? Nobody would play that.
• Menagerie Semantery - Uh, that really sucks. I get that it costs (7) because it guarantees you a big-ass Dragon but compare this to Eternal Servitude... What about 4mana "Summon a 1/1 copy of a friendly Murloc; a Beast, and a Dragon that died this game"?
• Forbidden Knowledge - I love the concept. This is broken as fuck against aggro. If you give this a nonzero base cost it would be balanced (something like 1 or 2).
• Loss of Sanity - Oh boy, I hope your class doesn't have AOEs otherwise it would give rise to some very fun and interactive combos. Tone down the effect. 1mana "Deal 1 damage" seems more balanced.
• Spectral Pathfinder - This is too situational for a class card. If it blew up secrets as well like Flare it would be better.
• Tainted Lore Keeper - Text positioning could be improved. I would put the "died" on the last line. Otherwise decent card.
• Echo of the Ancients - So, we definitely need some explanations. Would the cost be divined by (2) as well? If C'Thun is on the board, will it summon another copy of it. In the hand? If C'Thun is further buffed, would each part gain the buff? The effect is waaay to ambiguous but even without that the effect isn't that great. Also not sure it counts for #2.

Overall

Not enough cards to make a good judgment yet, but individually most of your cards have issues. Your class has a clear intrisic synergy with N'Zoth, the Corruptor so I would add plenty of Deathrattles in your set. Finally, I don't know if I'm the only one to mind but try to use more WoW-related art for your class. There is plenty of necromancer-like art out there.

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@Tomerick88

Individual cards

• Suspicious Banana - Could cost (1). Damn I love the concept.
• C'Thun's Buffoon - Hmm, wouldn't a double of all stats count for #2 as well?
• Midnight Whelp - Extremely weak. It's a swarm-style card but Dragons aren't a swarm archetype. Also don't use the art on Molten Reflection please.
• Bearded Dragon - This is really weak, and the art is ugly.
• Dragonlord's Favour - It could target any minion at this cost. Really. Or could make it 3mana "Give a minion +2/+2. If it's a Dragon, also give adjacent minions +1/+1" or something.
• Highlight Reel - Hmm, this could be a balance issue in later sets.
• Death Duck - Poisonous is illegal. I don't like the card anyway.
• Lute Chorder - Shitty statline not justified by the effect.

Overall

The cards are interesting taken individually, and the flavor is still awesome. Gameplay-wise I have my doubts. You said your class has a swarm playstyle, so I don't see why it has Dragon synergy. It's very odd. For your epic, just keep Forbidden Gag.

Also, pls keep Wooden Boy. It's awesome flavor. If you don't use it in Kara, put it into WOG.

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@Haileystrasza

Individual cards

• Forbidden Summoning - This card is either useless or part of a "fun and interactive" cancer combo. It's bad in any case.
• Envoy of the Silent - That's... overly complicated.

Overall

I can't say much with just 3 cards, except that you should absolutely avoid making cards that are too complicated (the fact that you have 2 custom keywords makes it easy to fall into this).

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@NecroaV

Individual cards

They look alright. But the arts aren't really geomancer-related.

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@maxlot

Individual cards

• Abandoned Hatchling - The effect is good, but the art is ugly.
• Exactly as planned - I love this, but this kind of effect doesn't fit WOG.
• Corrupt Forerunner - Too weak. You will never have enough dragons in your hand to make this good.
• Menagerie Runaway - Broeck did something similar for 7.06, just so you know. Not a problem for me but might be for other people (like the aforementioned Broeck). The card itself is awesome.
• Magicat - "Give all 0-Cost minions in your deck [...]". The card itself is good.

Overall

Overall very flavorful cards with cool effects! But I think your cards lack a unifying theme, like synergy with any of the Old God cards.

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And now here are my cards!

Whispers of the old gods

The (sub-)theme of this class set is targeted roast (like my Cannibal Cake from the classic set) to draw your win condition (Old God or either Deathwing) quickly.

@Mods Pls I need confirmation that Blade of C'Thun-like effects are legal for #2

Karazhan

Nothing fancy here except the fact that I'm dissapointed by challenge #3 because Karazhan has intrinsic Chef flavor, and I can only make 2 cards out of this :(

Other ideas I had (in case those I had aren't good)

Now there's several questions I'm asking myself:

1. I'm not satisfied with taking Kosumoth the Hungering as my legendary. The problem is that I don't know any character that is both Chef and WOTOG-related. I picked Kosumoth because it has "hungering" in its name but it's a bit lazy. Do you think I should make a custom character again?
2. Does Harsh Food Critic qualify for #2. Pls mods I need an answer.
3. Is it weird that my Karazhan set contains only spell? I planned to do a minion, but that chess bullshit forced me to do this instead and there isn't any chess term that is directly food-related.
4. Does my WOG set contains too much spell?
5. I feel like my set is too one-dimensional and I want to include synergy with the hero power ("Deal 2 damage to a random enemy"), is it a good idea?
6. Are Improvise, Haute Cuisine and Highlands Dragon pertinent cards to have?

THX FOR THE BANNER! :P

Welp im running throught some ideas atm but here are the first two confirmed cards i guess. Burning Scale is the corrupted version of Stone-scale and abomination of C'Thun is just a cool gimick contol card.

Does Chess pieces include ones from Dragon Chess and Chinese Chess :P im joking btw

< Geomancer >

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Thats all for now, vote for me! Thank you for reading~

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Helo everyone! Need feedback! Keyword name has been changed, ive gotten permission for the name change.

Hero Summary and Basic

 

      

 Classic Cards

Ps Need Token for Burrowing Ambush.

Helo everyone! Need feedback! Keyword name has been changed, ive gotten permission for the name change.

Hero Summary and Basic

 Classic Cards

Ps Need Token for Burrowing Ambush.

Pogchamp legendary! "Flavour = It's a Planetary Upgrade!" 

Might be a 9 mana card or it might be 8 mana 6/6 "battlecry: give a minion +6/+6".

FEEDBACK PLEASE XD im shy :3

ASYLUM U VOTED FOR ME. AM I IN HEAVEN LOL

BHWHAAHAHAHA OMG LOOK AT THIS "Geomancer", "Geomancer", "Earthshifter". 

Btw here is my review on ur class @haileystraza

First thoughts on hero power - it scares me, there are so many exploits for this but I guess rng is funny with this.

The Bigger They Come - Pretty interesting card? Maybe bit under cost but you can’t have charge so not direct effect. Like I could imagine you playing a 3/4 and the very next turn it becomes a 6/8…. Yeah. Don’t really have a problem but feel like its undercost.

Solar Construct - Stormwind champion with steriods maybe? But only hits cards with no text, which has proven no difficult in basic set cause most basic deck list have just plain old minions. Stat wise its fine, but I guess this will be the scary card within the basic deck sets.

Val’kyr Maiden - Interesting card, I can imagine you just casually giving it +1/+1 and gaining the value from it. Not to afraid of the card at the moment but yeah good card.

Tol’vir Oracle - Well this card seems fine to me, its a weaker Chillwind Yeti but I have some questions on how the interaction works with “The Bigger They Come”. Should It not get buffed cause the effect does only effect non card text minions. That really all I’m questioning about this card but other than that, its a cool card.

Debiliate - just seems to me like a weirder version of Inner rage for me. So me not very likey.

The Harder They Fall - Seems like and execute to me but like I really need to see more support cards with this cause at where it stands, this card seems more of a priest/pally counter.

Reconstruct - Okay seems like a weaker greater healing potion to me but there is draw. Its fine but maybe I feel this should be able to target friendly characters sometimes.

Celestial Meditation - 5 mana do nothing I guess, this card seems like a very fillerish card to me but has very good value. Only time you can really play this is when u have a better board than your opponent. Against aggro… its dead

Stoneskin - I really don’t get its flavour but yeah its a cool card and scary at the same time. Its technically a weak Mark of the Wild and maybe a slightly better card than Blessings of kings but you need two minions. Nothing much to say.

Chain Blightning is weird to me but hey cool effect I guess its a better holy nova I feel.Overall: Im scared of the hero power but its card seems that it has interesting interactions. I would vote for it but the hero power just scares me away and there is a lot of questionable interactions but I do like the take on “Enchantments” being like the main theme but from where I look at is. The classic decks for this might scare me and might be top tier.

P.s check ur msg :D

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