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Here are my ideas:

Call of the Herd token:

What do people think? Any feedback is appreciated!

Quote from Livienna >>

Well, after completely missing last week's contest, I'm planning to submit this one this week :) those following the expansion competition know this is a tribute to my Warm mechanic. It works in the same way as Nerubian Prophet and Shifter Zerus: at the beginning of each turn, the text would become "Deal *2* damage" etc.!

This isn't bad to keep in your mulligan in a control-style druid deck, and is best drawn mid-game. The chance of top-decking this in the late game (and how bad that would be) is what makes this card balanced. Ideally, it fits the hole of the druid's lack of single-target removal since Mulch rotated. Hope you like!! 

 

 

I love the idea of Ancients's marsh. You would prob just ramp hard in a deck with this , so the downside isn't that bad. 

The warrior card is in my opinion too powerfull. You can just deal 10 to your weak minion, and clear the enemys board and pyroblast them. I sudgest that you change it from ,, friendly character" to ,, your hero". Warrior has armour, so he can afford to take 10 dmg in the late game 

Sorry for my english, not a native speaker

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Feedback would be appreciated! :D

Now onto more serious side, I decided to take a twist on "Deal 4 damage" meaning. You don't have to play this reactively, you can also play this proactively in some scenarios aswell. Making her summoning from a spell was mainly meant for the rules of this competition, but helps with creating nice synergies, both that require minions or spells.

I don't think this really works well. As you said, you made it a spell for the purpose of the competition, and this is just dying to be a minion. Also, it's busted. If you give this minion Taunt and never attack, your opponent can never get through. :/ 

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What do you think? The no duplicates thingy works as the highlander mechanics. So if you have drawn one of your minions, that you have a duplicate of. You can draw another one.

It can also be used as a tutor effect, if you only have a few selected minions in your deck.

And Call of the Yarr is the easiest way to complete the restriction 3 times, with little text.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but the priest spell(s) don't meet the criteria of the competition. I only see two "one"s. Also, Call of the Yarr feels kind of weird since pirate decks are fast, and this is painfully slow. How about just "Summon three 3/3 Pirates" (for 6ish mana). Obviously less interesting but much more of a useful/realistic card. 

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Here is my idea for this week. It's very nice of you for any feedback. Thank you very much.

 Maybe too op? I mean it's secret so it can combo with other cards, it's three mana draw three cards... Maybe 5 or more Attack?

Like the idea. I'll vote if you'll make it more balanced.

 

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Alright so, I've updated the text of Followers of Volazj as well as come up with a new idea, Early Sightings. 

Now i'm having a little trouble with the wording on Early Sightings. Basically I want to reduce the cost of the discovered card and all of its copies by 2 but increase the cost of the other discover options by 2. So is the wording okay or does it need changing? What do you guys think? 

 

 Followers Of Volazji - glad you made the card stronger. I'll vote now for sure :)

Early Sightings - good idea, I would vote. But... even I can't help you with wording... I mean wording it to fit 4 lines of text :/ Sorry, but I can't help you here.

Quote from Dat_boi_Eow >>

What do you think? The no duplicates thingy works as the highlander mechanics. So if you have drawn one of your minions, that you have a duplicate of. You can draw another one.

It can also be used as a tutor effect, if you only have a few selected minions in your deck.

And Call of the Yarr is the easiest way to complete the restriction 3 times, with little text.

 

 One Of A Kind(s) - hmm... interesting idea, but make it 2 mana maybe? Oh, and Discover version is better.

Call Of The Yarrr - Like the idea, but you have "2 two 2/2" and it should be "two 2/2". Just a little mistake in wording. I'll vote for both ideas but not in finals

Quote from Cooler39140 >>

Feedback would be appreciated! :D

Now onto more serious side, I decided to take a twist on "Deal 4 damage" meaning. You don't have to play this reactively, you can also play this proactively in some scenarios aswell. Making her summoning from a spell was mainly meant for the rules of this competition, but helps with creating nice synergies, both that require minions or spells.

 

 But... if you don't attack and give it Taunt you have immortal Taunt! It should've die at the end of your turn. Or remove Immune thing, and I'll vote but not in finals

 

Well, I didn't get any feedback on page 3 so... I'll post them again!

Tokens:

 

So Ben is 2/3, Alex is 2/2 and Bonnie is 3/2. If you kill one, others are weaker.

 Does Call Of The Pupies count?

 

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Tell me what you guys think.

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Make a big moster!!!

 

 this is good, but you should make it so it only targets beast that cost 5 or less (you know, so you can play that big monster)

Quote from Redqueen >>

Here is my idea this week. I don't know whether it is overpower:

or might I make it a 10 cost spell?

 

 I would make it a 9, and make it Discard instead of destroy; also, change the name to "Marks of the Demon Lord", it matters more than you think.

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 I'd change the text to "Destroy 7 random minions and summon 7 random Demons in their place", otherwise it would just potentially destroy the demons you summoned.

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first idea:

"one of rogue crazy skill, they can manipulate corpse"

was looking for another art with "corpse puppet" theme. more AOE board clear for rogue..

 

second one:

another board clear, works as Consecration on second use, any idea for better name? will it better to shuffle to deck instead of your hand?

 

 Quill Spray should definitely shuffle in your deck, otherwise it's waaay too powerful;still, i like puppet mastery more;

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 Hi! First time posting here on the site. What would work better? This one:

Or this other version:

 

 I'd say the second one is more balanced;

 

 

 

And now for my card:

What do you guys think?

Quote from ffinderous >>

Here is my idea for this week. It's very nice of you for any feedback. Thank you very much.

@ NOVEX0R: I like the Warlock spell the best, but it should cost at least 9 mana maybe 10. A regular 3/3 minion cost 3. Deal 3 damage cost 1 or 2 mana.

This will be my submission, I think it should cost 5 mana because it can be really strong (Annoy o tron and 2 0/2 taunt (and divine shield) copies of it or Bloodmage Thalnos and 2 0/2 taunt copies giving you +3 spelldamage and probably the most scary one Sorceres Apprentice with 2 0/2 copies reducing your spells by 3. etc. etc.) :

Dark Iron Bouncer
Really not sure which one should I choose, definitely need some help here. Gonna post review about other cards later.

Is it weird to make a neutral legendary spell? I know that there is none in the game, but this specific card (or at least one with that title)  should exist since the game release.

Always wondered what it would be like if other classes other than shaman and mage got freeze. Well, gonna submit this later when the topic is up. This counts, right?

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CWelp. Is any of these usable?

Minimal Infestation is powercreep on Shiv. But so is Fireball on Mortal Strike, and Maelstrom Portal on Arcane Explosion, and changing it kinda ruins the idea :/

Mysterious Portal can contain ANY collectable minion. So sometimes it wins you the game. But usually it does nothing.

Clarity is suspected to change name to A moment of Clarity.

I'll try and return any feedback given.

 

I always liked The Curator, and wanted to make a card of this caliber before. I picked "three" because it uses a murloc, beast and dragon, so the theme is that each of those three powers up The Curator's self-destruction to have an effect. I wanted to add another effect to the card for if you don't have a murloc, beast and dragon left to activate the card (along the lines of "if you don't have one of each left, you can play this card for 3 mana to draw a card" or something, but it was so much text already that it would get a bit too much.

Anyway, is it too strong? I think that an archetype-specific card like this is allowed to be strong, but...

Ok I went back to the drawing board from all the feedback. Tried to keep it thematic, fit with KFT and have a neater concept so here it is - please as always give me feedback!