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First let me just say that I haven't read through this thread, so if this resembles anything else already posted def let me know!!

I'm leaning towards the first one... just unsure if it should be 0 or 1 mana. Thank you so much for any feedback! :D :D 

btw, the C'Thun minions are these 17 minions that have to do with C'Thun (other than the big man himself!).

 Im also more keen on the left one, tho i think it should remain 1 mana.

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Based on the feedback I've gotten (thanks!), I've altered my cards a bit, and I've thought up a new one. I'm considering having the Hermit get +2/+2 and Taunt, replacing the Vanguard's Taunt with "Enrage: Double attack", and having the Prodigy give 2 cards with worse stats, if you feel like evaluating those possibilities as well. Any feedback is appreciated!

 Devoted Hermit, a 4/4 Taunt for 1 mana seems a little too good. Maybe make it gain +2-3 Health and taunt? it would make it Wyrmrest Agent powerlevel (tho admittedly you have to play it later in the game for the effect).

C'Thun's Vanguard, both Taunt and the Enrage look good. I think you have to decide for yourself :)

Twilight Prodigy, im for the less stats and draw two cards, but maybe you could fit it in another class? F.e Hunter or Paladin, they both didnt get C'Thun minions like some other classes and they both dont have that many options when it come to card draw. 

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Does it tell a clear story (I'm thinking along the lines of Primalfin Champion)? Is the balance okay? Does it present interesting strategies? And does it feel professional

 I think there were two ppl with the exact same idea, and i think one of them posted theirs already, but ill say what i said to them too. I would make it 1 mana above average (i.e 4).

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A few of my cards:

I'm still not sure how to stat the Archbishop, and not entirely sure how much it should buff C'thun, and how much damage it should deal.

Alternatively, the Klaxxi Harbinger could be a 2 mana 2/2, or give +2/+2, or both.

 Archbishob Consceleratu(s), (Latin for corrupted, wicked ;), alternatively Nefastus) i think it would even be good at 5/5, i think the 8 for 8/8 is pretty good.

Klaxxi Harbinger, i think it should stay as it is or give +2/+2. As someone mentioned, C'Thun decks dont have many good 1 drops so this fits right in.

Chaos Cultist, still cool, but it is the least favorite out of these 3.

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Thanks all for the feedback! After reflecting on the problems with Twilight Champion (namely, a degree of abusability and a lack of originality), I went through a chain of cards before coming up with this one, and I'd love some critique- and of course, I'll return the favor if you'd like:

Same questions as before: How clear is the story? Is it well-balanced? Does it promote interesting strategies? And does it feel professional? Does it stand out?

EDIT: Also, how's the art? Does it fit with the theme, or should I keep looking for something more... bomber-y?

Thanks in advance.

 it is ok, i think it maybe even good at 5/5. As for the art, it fits the theme but it bothers me (a lot) that that is Medivh in it. Keep the theme but  change the art (not into something more bombery i think) :)

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Ok its between these 2 cards. Which do people prefer?

 i think the left one is great.

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C'thun tech card

 This is very gimmicky :| i dont know what to think... maybe make it 3 mana. uhh... (help me).

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I've modified my idea.I wonder if it looks better,and... maybe some errors in description.Please give me some feedback.Thank you.

 Some wordind improvments and its good. "gain at least 4 armor at a time for 4 times" and "Battlecry: Whenever you gain armor this game give you C'Thun +1/+1 for each armor gained (wherever it is)."

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My biggest questions: Should i give him +1 Attack/Health or keep it this way and make it say "...has 10 Attack or less...", im not very sure on that one, i would want to keep it as it is but if more people say it should be that way ill change it.

I've modified my idea.I wonder if it looks better,and... maybe some errors in description.Please give me some feedback.Thank you.

Hello everybody,it is my idea for this week.If there is errors in description,please point it out.Thank you very much!

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Is the description right?I want to say it just like Water Elemental ,change the minions' Attack to 0,whomever damaged by him.If I was wrong,please change it to the right.Thank you.

There should be a space after "Battlecry" - if it wasn't that you should actually remove the battlecry to make it functional, otherwise it would never have a chance to damage any minions prior to the effect happening. You should also end the card text with a dot. Finally, I think the wording should be "Set the Attack of minions damaged by this minion to 0.", though I'm actually not certain about the latter part.

 Thank you very much! It's modified.

 

Also, there should be a space behind "," in the card's name :P

I think the wording could be improved a little futher (Water Elemental, Humility, Aldor Peacekeeper): Change Attack of any minion damaged by this minion to 0.

That being said, im not sure if its balanced or not, i suppose that most minions that would trade with this would also die and having a simple 6/6 taunt isnt THAT great, so if there ever was a big minion that would survive, i suppose its fair it would get negated. And most of the big minions played nowdays would already gave u some value (battlecry + traded for this) or have an ongoin effect, which would still be valuable. So yeah, i guess its balanced.

PS: SMALLER IMAGES!!!

 

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Is the description right?I want to say it just like Water Elemental ,change the minions' Attack to 0,whomever damaged by him.If I was wrong,please change it to the right.Thank you.

There should be a space after "Battlecry" - if it wasn't that you should actually remove the battlecry to make it functional, otherwise it would never have a chance to damage any minions prior to the effect happening. You should also end the card text with a dot. Finally, I think the wording should be "Set the Attack of minions damaged by this minion to 0.", though I'm actually not certain about the latter part.

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Is the description right?I want to say it just like Water Elemental ,change the minions' Attack to 0,whomever damaged by him.If I was wrong,please change it to the right.Thank you.

 just remove the battlecry, Water Elemental Snowchugger

Is the description right?I want to say it just like Water Elemental ,change the minions' Attack to 0,whomever damaged by him.If I was wrong,please change it to the right.Thank you.

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Hello everybody,here is my ideas for this week. Which one is better,in your opinions?My english is poor,if there's error in description,please point it out.Thank you very much.

 Set all taunt minions Attack to 0. and for the second one put specific details on start of your/opponent turn

edit: maybe change also good, just find Eadric the Pure use change on its text

 Thanks for reply! So the first one is better?

 yup, the first one have direct impact when summoned, i think its better than deathrattle Boltaar

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Hello everybody,here is my ideas for this week. Which one is better,in your opinions?My english is poor,if there's error in description,please point it out.Thank you very much.

 Set all taunt minions Attack to 0. and for the second one put specific details on start of your/opponent turn

edit: maybe change also good, just find Eadric the Pure use change on its text

Thanks for reply! So the first one is better?

Hello everybody,here is my ideas for this week. Which one is better,in your opinions?My english is poor,if there's error in description,please point it out.Thank you very much.

Hello everybody,here is my creation , Paragons of Klaxxi.

My english is poor,so if there's error in description,please point it out.

Hope you will like.Thank you.