Hi there, first of all i would recommend you to use www.hearthcards.net for creating cards. I bet ur using that old site, which makes the card text look horrible. Hearthcards is what we all use, cause the cards look great, like real cards (or as close as possible) :)
Then you should use capital letter when writing keywords, so Recruit.
Overall, the idea seems ok. One thing - tho it might be my personal strife - i dont like when cards have a watermark of a set that is older than a first set where the mechanic you are using has been introduced. In this case, Legendary spells were introduced with Boomsday, so it feels weird to have this be a TGT card. I understand why it is, cause of the flavor, but legendary spells were not a thing back then. I guess its not a big deal, just something i felt like mentioning, if you wanted to go the extra mile. But i guess you would have to change the art+name, cause it would not fit into Boomsday, so a simple watermark change would be probably even worse than leaving it as it is, if you dont want to redesign the card to fit the Boomsday expansion.
Anyway, GL :)
PS: also it is better to post images via "Insert/edit image" function in the text editor, especially when you submit your card. Most ppl dont look at images that r only as an attachment. Use sites like imgur to host your image and upload it from there ;-)
Thanks for the feedback, I updated the card image and I found your feedback very useful
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Shudderwock reveal and spell hunter reveal was really hillarious, and shenanigans were pretty brutal
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You can get an Emeryss and Duskbreaker :D
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Quest odd warrior
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22 years old, playing since Un'Goro :)
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Huffer
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Ok, my first 12-x in arena, you can see the deck, Val'lanir is pretty strong i guess
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Thanks for the feedback, I updated the card image and I found your feedback very useful
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what do you think?
I would like to have your feedback :)
Edit: I updated the card aesthetics