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Alter isn't very good. You need to be at half health for it to even activate, and since you don't have any cards or effects that damage you (unlike Warlock, who this mechanic was built around), you just have to hope that your opponent puts you at or below 15 hp instead of just trying to build board up enough to kill you in one turn.

After your Alter is triggered, the game stops being fun for the enemy player. They spent half the game stomping you and now they have to deal with you throwing out 2 mana 1/7 poisonous walls that then turn into 4 1/1 poisonous walls once they destroy them.

I don't mean to offend you, but this looks like you didn't really think it through all that well. The first card you're choosing to show off is a 0/5, the name of which could easily be changed to either "Piece of Meat" or "Bonemare Target" considering none of your cards are minion buffs. By making mind trap you've created a tool that people can use to permanently disable minions with no taunt effects, rendering them useless. Have fun going up against that in arena. I think one of the greatest offenses is that you don't have any cards here that could actually win you a game. After you reach Alter and your 6/5 starts taking 1 damage at a time and the public defender grows some poisonous thorns, what do you actually do? Hope they can't deal with your walls, hope they don't have direct removal for your sorcerer and go face over and over? At this point they most likely have double your health.

Again, I'm not trying to offend, I'm just trying to tell you what exactly it is that you've created without a sugar coating, and what you've created isn't something that would be fun to play as or against. I think you seriously need to reconsider what you're trying to make here, because out of all your cards, the most fun and interesting one is The Floor is Lava!, which synergizes the least with your class's intended mechanics. If you insist on keeping Alter as an effect, add a lot more self damage and self healing so that you actually have control over your health pool.

I genuinely think at this point you could design the best class in the world but if it was engineering themed nobody would even bother to read your cards because they're so bloody tired of engineering themed classes. Do yourself a favour and scrap (heh) the engineer idea for now. You could maybe use it in a future competition.

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Yeah, I was going to say something about the art as well...there's plenty of decent art featuring Rehgar out there, especially since he became a character in HoTs...the cartoony thing really doesn't fit very well.

I wouldnt rly say there is plenty of decent art out there. Only other two decent pics iv found r these

but the first one is more shaman-y than anything and the second one id like to save for DK card (if i get that far lol) :X To be honest, i dont even like the second one, but he at least looks (un)dead-ish there, so i can use it for something.

Yeah, I was going to say something about the art as well...there's plenty of decent art featuring Rehgar out there, especially since he became a character in HoTs...the cartoony thing really doesn't fit very well.

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Helo People of the world! Im here to just ask opinion on my Geomancer Class. Even thou another person has posted his, I will not be intimidated and show mine! The Geomancer I will be making will be more based of the Periodic Table

Class Identity So Far.

• Very Durable/Anti-aggro
• Good Burst Class
• Elementals!
• And some weird stuff that includes facts of some elements :3 Im a science nerd *cough* not really.

The Keyword!

Explaination? Why Decay for a Geomancer class even thou it sounds more of a necromancer thing. This Decay is based of Radioactive Decay and cards shown will be based of radioactive materials that break apart and change their properties.

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Just to make sure I'm not breaking any rules or anything, so I can be fully sure of whether my entry is eligible:

When I initially posted my entry, it contained this card:

Which produced this token:

Then I realized there was a rule about not having any unique tokens, so I replaced it with this:

Am I safe? Thanks in advance.

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First of all, you can give Fragile keyword on enemy minions, (Weakening Whisper, Darnok) so it's form of removal, kinda reversed execute. Second thing, you are suppoused to have overstated minions that can be silenced for greater value.

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                                                                                                    Class: Holy Strider

The Holy Striders are the elite messengers of the horde. They provide a variety of roles and are able to travel long distances quickly. They are a secretive bunch employed by the leaders and often work as messengers, spies, scouts, cartographers, and guides all rolled up into one. They use their wits and their magic to deal with the situations they come across.

So I was having a bit of a conundrum with my keyword, in that I couldn't decide which one I liked better. So, I'm looking for opinions on which one I should use, or potentially both. So I've provided a couple example cards that aren't quite yet set in stone of course with each keyword.

Well, there it is.

 

 

 

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So a quick message on tokens. (Thanks Cogito for explaining it to me)

You can use them as long as they are not unique, as with Kindly Grandmother, Murloc Tidehunter, and Savannah Highmane. An unique token includes effects that aren't on the card. Examples are Spikeridged Steed, Lord Jaraxxus, every quest, and every DK. Save those for later. If you're not sure, feel free to ask one of the mods.

 

I like it, makes good use of the space and it's pretty easy to follow

You need to right click and copy image location.

I could, but I think I'd rather just replace it at this point. It's not that great of a loss atm and I might bring it back in a later phase. I'd rather just preserve the flavour of the card and include a different card than compromise the card just to make it eligible.

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I'm a bit confused. Are we able to do tokens cards? Are quests rewards considered tokens?

 Our hero power can make tokens. However, for this first submission, none of our cards can make tokens UNLESS it's the same tokens as the Hero Power. So no Quest cards yet.

 Oh crap, I missed this one and made this.

So I disqualified myself. I probably should have waited until I was absolutely sure I was safe, but gg.

 You have time to change it! Replace it with something before the thread locks next week.

Nope, it says right there in the rules:

Your example cards may not produce any unique token elements. The only exception to this would be if the only unique token cards they produce are one that are already produced by your Hero Power.

Also you don't have to have synergy, that rule just says that you have to have a minion that's either a Mech, an Elemental, or a Dragon.

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I'm a bit confused. Are we able to do tokens cards? Are quests rewards considered tokens?

 Our hero power can make tokens. However, for this first submission, none of our cards can make tokens UNLESS it's the same tokens as the Hero Power. So no Quest cards yet.