Hearthpwn

The way she sounded before had presence. She was commanding that you look at her bright and powerful beauty. She knew she was a better version of whatever stood before her.  Her voice sounded elegant, wise, strong, powerful, like as if she went into many battles and came out triumphant every time.

Now I don't know what she sounds like but I don't like it. I would love if the correction had never occurred.