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Quote from DestroyerR >>

Thanks for all the feedback guys!

but you’ve left me confused: GerVez0512 likes Chester (which was said to be against the rules by linkblade and I didn’t explicitly receive the OK from Wailor about him, so that doesn’t matter), Kovachut likes Gambler, Wailor likes SiaB, and my personal favorite is Murloc Holmes...

My feedback:

@GerVez0512

I definitely like Larissa better, for a number of reasons:

1) Emerald Druid’s effect would be very complicated to execute in terms of UI (4 fills the screen, there are 5 Dream cards)

2) Larissa’s effect is much more interesting than Emerald Druid’s

3) Larissa’s art is amazing

Something you could change though: you can just call it fantastic Treasure, it just looks weird that way (the shuffle would then be de-capitalized)

@Wailor

Did We Forget Someone? is the absolute best IMO. Balanced, flavor on point, original... the other two are nice (although one could argue that Masked Plotter can be a little OP) but DWFS is just the best. Well done!

 @MurderyUnicorn

EVIL Worthyfinder has the same problem as GerVez’s Emerald Druid, difficult UI execution (5 Lackeys, screen fits 4 at most). If I were you, I’d try something else

 @ShatterStar1998

Fight or Flight has awesome flavor, balanced and is what this competition is looking for. I’d say you’re good to go!

@Kovachut

As WUBRGWBRG said, the current wording doesn’t make sense. Even if it did, I think it would be too bad to be played as removal, since you’re forcing your Beasts to attack a minion with 3+ Attack, and it wouldn’t even be really worth it, because if it was a minion that needed removal, you’d have done so without the spell (yes, I know this bypasses Taunt but it’s still a pretty bad removal compared to what Hunter already has). And using this as a buff... meh. Okay at best. Summing it up, I’d try another idea if I were you

 

 

 Thanks for the feedback! 

I see your trouble with choosing a submission, i hope i could  figure this out:

Murloc Holmes is interesting, but hard to understand and he is not very strong either.

Chester is cool and has a cool art, but imagine all the hell which would happen with Gadgetzan Auctioneer and Shadowreaper Anduin. Also it has good mill potential, which i personaly find annoying.

Snake in a Boot got the same problem as Murloc Holmes, hard to use in game and not so strong either.

Gambler on the other hand is interesting, requires a high skillcap, and is useful in many decks without being terribly OP. Also makes your opponent think twice. 

Well, i hope this will help to choose the right card to submit. Good luck!

Now i got another idea:

She is meant to be played in combo with Myra's Unstable Element, Augmented Elekk and to be followed up with Academic Espionage. Fantastic treasure is Marin the Fox's treasures: Golden Kobold, Zarog's Crown, Tolin's Goblet and Wondrous Wand.

Here is my older idea:

So, which one do you like the most?

@Wailor

 @Murdery Unicorn

 @whatTheHeck

 @OttawaCloset

 @Demonxz95

 @DestroyeR

@Thezzy

 @Shatterstar1998

 I have an idea myself, what do you think:

EDIT: Only now noticed the second page and that people changed ideas and got new ones. LOL.

Sadistic Demon synergizes with Warlock's self-damaging mechanic and is good in Zoo decks, while Void Emissary synergizes with healing and has combo potential.

Huge thanks for your feedback! I changed my original idea to this:

Sadistic demon synergizes with warlock theme of taking damage, while being a good card for zoo.

Void Emissary however synergizes with healing yourself and has combo potential.

So, what so you think?

@AngryChicken

 @Wailor

 @OttawaCloset

 @linkblade91

 @Shatterstar1998

 I got an idea too:

Both Shaman and Mage have Elemental synergy and have a lot of damaging spells, so these cards are different and similar at the same time.

Quote from GoliathTheDwarf >>

Here's my idea for the combo. Adaption, hero card, recruit. Lorewise it symbolizes the mutation of the night elves into naga after the bargain of their queen. 

 LOL, thats so similar to my idea:

It's OK however since i got new idea already:

@Demonxz95

 @OttawaCloset

 @Triple_Factorial

 @Thezzy

@ Wailor

@linkblade91

 @nobravery

 Here is my idea:

So, what do you think?

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Quote from GerVez0512 >>

 Sounds cool, too bad that i didn't think about it during submission stage)))

 

Well, i think winner of the competition should accomplish both balance and interesting concept, because otherwise almost everyone could win it, this is what makes a real challenge. Maybe i switched too much into flavor and cool mechanic, but forgot about balance, while some people did great on both fronts. Anyway, i wish good luck to all others!

 Nah I think I really like yours the best xD it doesn’t have to be good and I’m gonna be honest the calculator probably wouldn’t be [unless it highlights yellow when it finds lethal (op)] but it sounds fun and memey as heck so I love it

 Thanks and yeah it should highlight yellow, that was the core theme!

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Quote from EyeCantSee >>

Divide by Zero is just another Mecha'thun enabler. In fact, you don't even need to wait for fatigue.

Pythagoras is really cool, but I would have liked it more if his stats were actually a Pythagorean triple (3 numbers that make a right-angled triangle, like 3, 4 and 5 or 6, 8 and 10, etc).

The Calculator is kinda funny, but I would highly doubt that ever getting printed because the game then needs to 'calculate' every single situation currently possible to find lethal. Also, it's kinda uninteractive to play against, because if there was some super complicated lethal scenario, I don't want to die because my opponent happened to play this card. I would gladly take a loss to some extremely obscure lethal than just by playing this card out of suspicion.

Altar of Greater is very clever, it punishes aggro decks that have granular damage like Odd Pally, and rewards appropriate order of attacking. 

Still, well done to all finalists, because I know that I could never be in a spot like this.

 What if the calculator, instead of just winning the game like mechatun, actually took control of your board and cards to play the lethal out in front of you? :P

 Sounds cool, too bad that i didn't think about it during submission stage)))

Well, i think winner of the competition should accomplish both balance and interesting concept, because otherwise almost everyone could win it, this is what makes a real challenge. Maybe i switched too much into flavor and cool mechanic, but forgot about balance, while some people did great on both fronts. Anyway, i wish good luck to all others!

Quote from wooder >>

 

Turn 5  play The Calculator  and Renounce Darkness on hand.

Other card become Stargazer Luna and 20+ Arcane Missiles

Do i have lethal?

Also  Witchwood Piper Spreading Madness etc....

Well, i think Calculator should only count lethal based on information that you have in hand and battlefield. (Also ignoring random and unknown effects like Secrets.)

P.S. I guess your Renounce Darkness example is not so good, since he either gets changed by Renounce Darkness or will lose his battlecry.

Congrats to all finalists! All cards here are really cool, we almost remade Boomsday's Warlock in an interesting way! May the best card win! 

Well, Blizzard hate Charge now, they nerf and abandon any powerful Chargers. What if they completely removed Charge from the game, and all Charge cards now had Rush? I tried to do that myself and got pretty interesting results:

As you can see, some cards became more powerful, some became less unique. Anyway, feedback really appriciated!

P.S. If you like this, i can make Part 2!

Quote from Wailor >>

When I enter Hearthcards, Chrome puts a warning symbol next to the URL, indicating that it's not a safe site. Am I the only one getting this problem? The symbol doesn't appear every time I enter the site, but it has happened both on my phone and on my PC.

I don't know if Hearthcards and Hearthpwn are related in some way, so this might not be the place to post the issue, but I didn't know where else to go.

Thanks!

 I had same problem too, but it for me it's OK, i still can make cards and upload, nothing bad happened thus far.

Quote from w0lfey13 >>

Where do you guys get images for these cards from?

 Look in Card Creation - The Primer thread, many sources are listed there.

Well, for my card:

Well, this one was pretty obvious).

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