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What of you think of this? Works well with commanding shout, mostly it's only aiding board control, but offers  a kinda winfury effect that might be used with a whirlwind combo finisher. Was thinking it might work well in Murloc s too with buffed murk eye.

Also, is the wording incorrect or is there a better version... doesn't sound exactly right but not wrong either :/

Thanks. ye, might a bit under whelming i think... it's kinda cute but lacks some punch. we'll see  

[img]http://i.imgur.com/NFVj5Ue.png?1[/img] is the basic idea. I want it to essentially counter secret decks, though I imagine it's rather overtuned. Possibly make it +1/+1 instead and change it to 3/1?

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 So, you're saying at some point I could make a better version of Nozdormu and that would be okay?

 I'd be more impressed if you managed to make it worse

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Question! Does Legendary count as a keyword?

 It does not, sorry. =P

It is certainly intersting that is it bolded on occasion, but Legendary doesn't mean anything beyond or other than Legendary. Last I checked anyway, no definition for it pops up when you hover over those cards. 

Just looked at your entry for like a few  times already haha. I think the wording is fine, but could be better phrased a little bit. :)

"Battlecry: All future Discover effects grant you four options to choose from."

Currently, your card text feels a bit aura-ish; that is, when I read it, I get the feeling that it lasts only as long as it's on the board, even though there's a Battlecry in front.

"Future" makes it clearer that it will affect all other Discover effects as well haha.

Up to you to tweak it though! I think it's okay the way it is now haha, since your effect is pretty unique.

The amount of Secret Paladin hate is real LOL.

It shows up here, but your entries are breaching the rules set for this week's card design competition.

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Okay, which of these options is best:

I am leaning towards the left one. I kinda want it to be neutral, so that it improves Spell Damage archetypes for all classes. I want it to have a good body, because it's supposed to be guarding your minions. If it dies too easily, it's not very good at its job.

Hey all, just submitted my entry:

This seemed kind of hard to evaluate without actually playtesting with it. Do you guys think this needs to be weaker, maybe a 2/4 or a 5 mana 3/5?

So I had a card in mind for the competition, but I don't know if I can submit it, does it match the restrictions?

This doesn't look like it violates the rules. The keyword you're choosing is Discover, and you card doesn't discover anything.

I think it would probably be worded differently though, like
Battlecry: Summon a Vault. Whenever you Discover a card, for each unchosen card friendly Vaults gain "Deathrattle: Put a copy of the unchosen card into your hand."

There might be a better way to word it though.

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First time participating! Here's my submission (which is at the bottom of page 4 of the submission thread). The intention was to come out with a creative counter to Secret Paladin while avoiding an straight up "destroy secrets/stop secrets from triggering" kind of effect which is antithetical to Blizzard's philosophy of not having too many cards that simply negate other cards' effects (e.g. Silence).

I made its effect trigger on all secrets because I didn't want this to become purely an anti-secret tech card. So it could possibly see play in, for example, Tempo Mage - the Unstable Ghouls could protect your Flamewakers and Mana Wyrms. I doubt it will work in Secret Paladin since the AOE is bad for that archetype.

Any thoughts?

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Hey all, just submitted my entry:

This seemed kind of hard to evaluate without actually playtesting with it. Do you guys think this needs to be s 2/4, or a 5 mana 3/5?

 I would increase the mana cost to 5 for 3/5 stats. As a 4-mana drop the stats should be as low as 4/3 or 3/3. The main issue is the card can be abused to activate Sylvanas Windrunner's or Sneed's Old Shredder's Deathrattles without even needing to play them. Compare it to Feign Death or Reincarnate, which do almost the same effect, while the minion is on the board, for 2-mana.

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So I had a card in mind for the competition, but I don't know if I can submit it, does it match the restrictions?

This doesn't look like it violates the rules. The keyword you're choosing is Discover, and you card doesn't discover anything.

I think it would probably be worded differently though, like
Battlecry: Summon a Vault. Whenever you Discover a card, for each unchosen card friendly Vaults gain "Deathrattle: Put a copy of the unchosen card into your hand."

There might be a better way to word it though.

After a crappy false start where I came up with a card I really liked that totally violated one of the rules (oops), I have made another one. Would really appreciate some feedback :)

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After a crappy false start where I came up with a card I really liked that totally violated one of the rules (oops), I have made another one. Would really appreciate some feedback :)