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The reason why I think Pneumatic Hammer and Laser Cannon are too strong is that they might grant too much tempo/value.

Pneumatic with 2 minions on board turns into a sort of 5/2 weapon, if you put some resilient stuff it's much likely to have that effect. I might be wrong (I was with many other cards printed before), but at first sight it looks very scary, at least  as a 1-off.

Laser Cannon might be too strong (it's not blatantly broken, if I claimed that -or looked like I had done it-) then I apologize, because I simply think it might should have some theoretical limitation (restriction to non-mechs might be an "overkill" because of shredder). Most 1 mana deal 2 damage are'nt used against face anyways, but still you might have a point here.

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I thought I could use some feedback on the following card.

Gate Summons the Following 4 minions.

 

So, you get an instant board.  But, it's a board of 3/4 mana minions.  Might not be impactful enough by turn 10.  My desire was to showcase the 4 classes that I'm trying to represent with my Dungeon Master class.  These 4 Legendaries represent the party of adventurers of my class, where my spells are representative of their abilities and spells.  It's mostly about flavor for this spell, but, I dont' want the card to be too over or under powered.  Would you play this for 10?  Would you throw your hands up in frustration if this dropped against you? 

Thanks!

 

 

Ebony Cane - I don't see why it has to be strictly worse than Fiery War axe.   I'd give it some minor ability like, "Deathrattle:  Add a Coin to your hand'

Seamstress.  I don't get the quote.  And man is that aggro.  I might make her 1/2 instead.  A little less aggro a little more chance she survives a turn.

Assassin's guild liscence.  I can't spell license.  It always looks wrong.  But, your card looks good.

Inhumation - Stricltly better than Assassination.  I don't mind with your class though.

Corporal.... Many your cards are hard to spell.. of the Watch.  - Honestly, I don't like the flavor.  Doesn't seem to match the name or art.  Maybe a 3/4 that has, 'when an enemy attacks your hero, gain a coin'  Now he's taking bribes to let attackers through, seems more flavorful to me.

Alchemist's guild.  Looks good.

Quote from jazzfan27 >>

I thought I could use some feedback on the following card.

Gate Summons the Following 4 minions.

 

So, you get an instant board.  But, it's a board of 3/4 mana minions.  Might not be impactful enough by turn 10.  My desire was to showcase the 4 classes that I'm trying to represent with my Dungeon Master class.  These 4 Legendaries represent the party of adventurers of my class, where my spells are representative of their abilities and spells.  It's mostly about flavor for this spell, but, I dont' want the card to be too over or under powered.  Would you play this for 10?  Would you throw your hands up in frustration if this dropped against you? 

Thanks!

 

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Quote from jazzfan27 >>

I thought I could use some feedback on the following card.

Gate Summons the Following 4 minions.

 

So, you get an instant board.  But, it's a board of 3/4 mana minions.  Might not be impactful enough by turn 10.  My desire was to showcase the 4 classes that I'm trying to represent with my Dungeon Master class.  These 4 Legendaries represent the party of adventurers of my class, where my spells are representative of their abilities and spells.  It's mostly about flavor for this spell, but, I dont' want the card to be too over or under powered.  Would you play this for 10?  Would you throw your hands up in frustration if this dropped against you? 

Thanks!

 

 The thing is, It just doesn't seem like a basic card, It seems like a legendary card, something you should only be able to have 1 of. Your minions have and all these other crazy effects that It's not just a board presence. Basically, with your hero power, you're going to choose a minion to be frozen each turn, including the turn you played it, and you will be able to kill any other threats with Kiera while healing Kiera up with Jozan, and on your opponent's turn they have to get through a taunt before they can even kill the important minions. 

Just imagine. Turn 9 some 7 drop and Hero power. Turn 10 Gate. Turn 11 Gate. Who can do anything to that?

Additionally I think the name of the card should be 'Party Time!'.

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Ebony Cane - I don't see why it has to be strictly worse than Fiery War axe.   I'd give it some minor ability like, "Deathrattle:  Add a Coin to your hand'

Seamstress.  I don't get the quote.  And man is that aggro.  I might make her 1/2 instead.  A little less aggro a little more chance she survives a turn.

Assassin's guild liscence.  I can't spell license.  It always looks wrong.  But, your card looks good.

Inhumation - Stricltly better than Assassination.  I don't mind with your class though.

Corporal.... Many your cards are hard to spell.. of the Watch.  - Honestly, I don't like the flavor.  Doesn't seem to match the name or art.  Maybe a 3/4 that has, 'when an enemy attacks your hero, gain a coin'  Now he's taking bribes to let attackers through, seems more flavorful to me.

Alchemist's guild.  Looks good.

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I tried to create some Basic Cards for my set. What do you guys think ? 

         

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A 10-mana spell gives you 12 mana worth of legendary minions? How is that balanced? You also freeze an enemy minion and you almost certainly get a free kill from the stealth poisoner. This is crazy OP. Just because something is weak to AOE does not mean you can make it extremely powerful.

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Quote from jazzfan27 >>

Ebony Cane - I don't see why it has to be strictly worse than Fiery War axe.   I'd give it some minor ability like, "Deathrattle:  Add a Coin to your hand'

Seamstress.  I don't get the quote.  And man is that aggro.  I might make her 1/2 instead.  A little less aggro a little more chance she survives a turn.

Assassin's guild liscence.  I can't spell license.  It always looks wrong.  But, your card looks good.

Inhumation - Stricltly better than Assassination.  I don't mind with your class though.

Corporal.... Many your cards are hard to spell.. of the Watch.  - Honestly, I don't like the flavor.  Doesn't seem to match the name or art.  Maybe a 3/4 that has, 'when an enemy attacks your hero, gain a coin'  Now he's taking bribes to let attackers through, seems more flavorful to me.

Alchemist's guild.  Looks good.

 Warrior is a premier weapon class. It is designed to have THE best weapons in the game (like Mage has the best spot removal). It can't be given a Deathrattle because it is supposed to be the basic card. I might make it have 1 more attack while going face (so you sacrifice potential value for damage).

That was one of the two quotes I had in mind. I will edit the second one right below the first one and also post it here in the spoiler. The entire idea is that she promotes aggro. She has to be a 2/1 so she can be easily taken out if your opponent decides that he wants to. I could also make her a 1/1 that still deals the same 5 damage if she hits you in the face (this way she can be easily taken out by minions as well but then it becomes a sort of trap card).

• A survey once found more than 987 women occupied as seamstresses. And two needles.

 

Sorry for the cards that are hard to spell, it isn't completely my fault.

The thematic is that he is actually looting boots of the fallen enemies. I really like your idea. I wanted to make Bribe if not an actual keyword then at least a theme for a reasonable amount of cards.

The idea behind the entire Basic set is to give some okayish tools for playing Tempo, Midrange and Aggro decks. Control and Combo archetypes would require significantly more spells.

I am not certain on what card draw mechanic my class will be using (or at least have access to). I was thinking about making smth like "Smuggle" that would draw a lot of cards on discount (f.e. 3 cards for 4 mana) but have a drawback attached to it, f.e. giving your opponent The Coin. Essentially you Bribe your opponent to look the other way while you are helping yourself from your deck.

But Anyfin Can Happen requires you to build your deck in a certain way. It's also a combo-based finisher, making it less consistent. With Gate, you can build your deck however you want and still play the card and still get its full effect.

Ok, take Anyfin as a great example.  It is about the correct power level.  How many mana worth of stats/abilities does it put on the baord.  If it's a OTK it's at least 30 attack.  And at least 7 health.  Probably 15 health.  Giving you something like 20+ worth of minions for 10.  And that's a balanced 10 mana card that sees some play.  (it's not like it's taken over the meta or anything)

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Quote from nurgling13 >>

A 10-mana spell gives you 12 mana worth of legendary minions? How is that balanced? You also freeze an enemy minion and you almost certainly get a free kill from the stealth poisoner. This is crazy OP. Just because something is weak to AOE does not mean you can make it extremely powerful.

 I think 10 mana spells really need to be strong to see play.  Compare with Varian or Deathwing.  And even those two cards with HUGE effects aren't strong enough to see play.

Is there a specified time on when the phase 2 thread will come out? I'm really interested on if I made it.