Hearthpwn

 Hey, I think I have my first bunch of cards designed, and I want to know what do you think...

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 Hey, I think I have my first bunch of cards designed, and I want to know what do you think...

•  Voltaic burst seems too good compared to Flame Geyser. That one only adds 1 elemental to your hand.
• Engineering intern seems alright though these Voltaic Sparks have anti synergy with the legendary. Pursuing different themes in the set is good, but making them incompatible with each other is not.
• Wormhole feels like a weaker Psychic Scream in my opinion, as there's a chance you perhapsonly kind of Vanish the enemy. Weaker than scream, stronger and more expensive than Vanish, maybe it's alright.
• Magnos needs some heavy card draw to work.

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Changes:

• Due to negative feedback, Gutter Runner has been reworked
• Added Thanquol and The End times
• Added a ton of cards

Warpstone Ninjitsu:

 Eshin Tricks:

Clan knowledge cards (similar to Animal Companions/Demon companions, but you choose which one you want):

 

 Swarm Aggression:

Tokens:

The End Times is support to be an ultimatum card. Like Chef Nomi, you run out of cards and have a dangerous board as a reward. In true skaven style the minions are not super big, only 3/3s, but they never end. Now, as op as this may look, my class is super weak on defense. No good taunts and super weak heals through a basic minion or maybe you get something out of Throt.

Man 15 cards is a lot to make, stayed hours for this.

 

 The End Times repeats more than once? If so, maybe you could think on rewording it.

Both Poison Distiller and Always More could use buffs. One could be a 2/2 perfectly, and the other would work better as 2 mana, like Soul of the Murloc. Thanquol, being super late game card, might also become a 5/4 or 4/5 or something, vanilla stats. Specially since you don't have that much reliable card draw.

I love The Great Clans and Scuba-Skaven. I love how this class keeps being loyal to the concept of what a skaven is like (even without that many "deal X damage to random characters").

Hey, showing here the first batch of the Fisherman, following the Darmoon Faire themes, like circus, parties, entertainment, and corrupted magic from ancient evil gods. Just 2/3 to go xD

Did you know that in this Darkmoon Faire a band composed of aquatic species would make a concert? Because they will.

Not 100% sure about the wording on Drummollusk, yet. Some minions:

Corrupted version:

Any thoughts?

Now, some feedback:

@Noah_McGrath: I'm seeing some "easy" OTK potential with Snitkch Prime. Not sure how to properly balance, tho. I really like Skuba Skaven and the Eshin Tricks pack. Imprisoned Vermin's effect doesn't seem very fun to me. It may do nothing on late game or define the game in early turns. Even though its fine for cost and stats. "The End Times" look too OP to for me. We have Chef Nomi that triggers only once. I think triggering twice should be more okay.

@MvonTzeskagrad: Aeon Keeper is the man here. Reminded me of the old Bomb Lobber, but stronger. Perhaps you can switch the rarity to Rare if you somehow run out of ideas. But I think it's not a must, tho, due to the powercreeping over time HS got. Voltaic sparks are interesting. Have potential for unique mechanics. Magnos, right now, I see it more limiting than rewarding. Maybe limiting the effect to spells or minions, if you plan on having big ones?

Can we make our threads now and edit them until the phase ends? Would be much better if we could create them incrementally instead in one attempt. We'd have time to adjust formatting, correct errors and avoid the risk of just losing everything due to random events (blackouts while writing the page for example).

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 Lol this isn't even a good scam. 26$ for the first month and 7$ in the last?

Hearthpwn seriously needs some protection guys, there were like 2 messages like this every discussion thread in this comp.

@B3ckemon

I have to give yous some advices.

First, your first two cards are increibly similar. Both are 2 damages with beast synergy (also, the second one would be something like "deal 1 more for each Beast you control").

Specialized Cook should be worded as "Shuffle three Common Fishes into your deck."

River Giant would only decrease its cost by (1) each time you used a shuffle effect? Or (1) per each shuffled card? In the latter situation, I think you should consider rising its cost to (10), because just with one Cook it would get to 5, and both would make it potentially a turn 3 (2) cost giant.

 Hm, I'm not sure whether I prefer the Prepared Pupil or the Cryptic Studies as dual class, although the chance of discovering either paladin or seer secrets in the same game might be too bonkers.

Slow Learning could use a buff imo.

Coach Andrik affects himself? Btw, it's a cool concept, although might better watch out for those 0 attack minions.

Gotta say... Detention scares me, and I think that is a good thing.

All in all, I think your set so far looks pretty solid. With thee many draws your class have, I am not even concerned about Beginner Prophet clogging your deck with 1 mana secrets, it's pretty much anti-fatigue at this point.

 Holy cow, 15 cards... and still some left!

Having this in a week, then making a thread on it, it's gonna be craaaaazy!

Well, anyway, I tried to apply critics so far, and ended up doing this. Let's see what do yout guys think.

Still wondering some things like probably taking Lifesteal from Aeon Keeper but make its battlecry heal the hero still.

Kraem's wording means that if you discover or get some card that costs more than (5) after you play it, it costs more than (5). And yes, I am aware of the Malygos synergy. That said, this class has no way to discount cheap spells, and not many ultra cheap reliable  direct damage spells, wich sort of balance things.

And now... well, turns out Warrior likes the travellers crazy gadgets and combat skills!

Yep, it's a Thanos reference. No, I regret nothing.

Idea behind the mixed set is, both classes like control gameplays (even if they have aggressive ones too), can heal in a way or another, like rush minions (taunts are more of a warrior thing, but who tells a traveller will reject help when needed?) and tried this expansion to go for big plays, like this minion Thanael.

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@B3ckemon

I have to give yous some advices.

First, your first two cards are increibly similar. Both are 2 damages with beast synergy (also, the second one would be something like "deal 1 more for each Beast you control").

Specialized Cook should be worded as "Shuffle three Common Fishes into your deck."

River Giant would only decrease its cost by (1) each time you used a shuffle effect? Or (1) per each shuffled card? In the latter situation, I think you should consider rising its cost to (10), because just with one Cook it would get to 5, and both would make it potentially a turn 3 (2) cost giant.

 Thanks for the additions. These spells are intended to be quite similar due to the sub-theme around them. But I should change the second one to 5 mana, It's too strong right now I think. The River Giant will count for every "act" of shuffling. No matter how many cards are shuffled, will only count 1.

@MvonTzeskagrad : At the time I talked about Aeon Keeper I didn't realize it has Lifesteal too. Which makes it MUCH stronger than I thought hahaha. I would increase one or two mana. (and perhaps make it rare too). I believe the text of Grand Researcher Kraem should be something like "Change the cost of cards in your hand and deck that cost (5) or more to (5)." because it is a battlecry effect. My favorite so far for the game design: Aether Corsair. For flavor: Wormhole. +1 for Thanael, too.

@Klipce: Slow Learning looks strong. I see good snowball potential. Divination Major is also strong, but not out of bounds. I also like Coach Andrik. Only thing is that his "paladin feeling" surpasses the Seer's by far.

@Adm and @Mods: One question: Do the rarity distribution of the set must follow the same Demon Hunter had in our respective expansions? Just checked hearthpwn and DH in Darkmoon Faire has 8 commons, 2 rares, 3 epics and 2 legendaries. So much commons and so FEW rares. Now I found it really weird. I would prefer to add some more rares (2, possibly) and take out the commons.

Could we perhaps delay the deadline by a few days? It seems everyone is taking it very slow this round, some even might drop out. Since it's the final phase and we have to make more cards than usual, more time seems appropiate, right? 

I'm testing new ideas to replace Thanquol and Weeping Blades. Exploring different versions of skaven plagues, which one do you think it's the best?

I might change the flavor of some cards to be Pestilens themed later today if this is received well. I feel like the infinite value of Thanquol will be badly received by the voters.

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Could we perhaps delay the deadline by a few days? It seems everyone is taking it very slow this round, some even might drop out. Since it's the final phase and we have to make more cards than usual, more time seems appropiate, right? 

Sure I can do that. Let's say another 3 days?

 I'm perfectly fine with it, though i'm more finished than the others. If no one wants a longer delay, i think 3 days is good.