I wonder how many different versions of Monkey King will show up in this competition...There's already one before this one.
The idea is straight forward, the Monkey KING turns your Bananas into Blessing of Kings. He's initially a tempo loss, but a few one mana +4/+4 can easily swing the tempo in your favor later.
What do you think about this idea? The cards that replace the normal discover pool are the bananas from Banana Brawl; Bananas, Big Banana, Rotten Banana, Deviate Banana and this card.
Bananas is the TGC pet obtained from Banana Charm. Lorewise Bananas is a son of Mukla. I am a bit uncertain about the name of the card. It can't be only Bananas because that is the name of the spell. "Prince" Bananas and Bananas, Baby Ape didn't feel that great. So far this name is the best I came up with.
I didn't feel like going for the fancy legendary route. Here's a nice and simple card that I am really proud of, at least flavour-wise:
The flavour being you're in a jungle and you're a woodsman. So you probably have an axe to cut down a tree, maybe a banana to munch on in the afternoon and you'll probably find a monkey along the way.
@draquaza1470 Nature's Gift is overpowered. It should cost 4 at least IMO. I prefer Archdruid Antonio even if it should be a Rogue card due to being the class with Razorpetals.
@Screwjank Pretty cool effect, and in my opinion it's balanced enough.
@Mist Assassin I would also go with Queen of Thorns, but you shouldn't explain what a Razorpetal does, just look at Razor Lasher.
@GoliathTheDwarf: Honestly I think that's too weak. I would raise it's stats to 3/4 or 2/3 at least.
As @GoliathTheDwarf recommended, I decided to change the art of the card:
"The strike of a thousand cuts shattered the orc's will to defend his land."
1) Before someone comments, yes, I'm aware of Lifesteal's existence. Un'Goro came before KoFT, so it didn't have that keyword yet and I want to stick to the timeline's rules.
2) Flowey - All Razorpetal generating cards will give you Pellets instead (this includes Lashers and Volleys). I feared Flowey's power and this is why I increased its cost to 6 mana (+ it also generates you two cards).
3) The weapon might feel overcosted, but, if you think about it, it thins out your deck and then it "draws" you the razorpetals, which were contained in the deleted cards.
I also have a banana idea:
Banana Smuggler Rare Battlecry: Add a Banana to your hand. At the start of your turn, double all Bananas in your hand.
@Kovachut honestly, not a big fan of any of them. Audrey seems needlessly complicated with all the different sprouts, Flowey relies more on the reference than on the idea itself, and Leaf Blower is an insanely niche tool that most times won’t help you (also don’t like the wording and art).
Weirdly enough, the Banana Smuggler is the one I like most. A creative effect, easily balanced and fits well in the theme
@CheeseEtc kudos for the HearthCards theme! I like the idea of your card, but the fact it doesn’t really deny you a draw in exchange for drawing feels a tad too powerful in early game. Although this sucks late game, so it might actually be balanced
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I submitted my idea and immediately regretted it lel. It's too plain of an idea.
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
@CheeseEtc kudos for the HearthCards theme! I like the idea of your card, but the fact it doesn’t really deny you a draw in exchange for drawing feels a tad too powerful in early game. Although this sucks late game, so it might actually be balanced
I wanted to do this theme since several months and patiently awaited for my next victory. As for your cards, I really like Flying Monkey but I would make the effect an aura.
My card denies you a draw on turn 3 when played on curve, so IMO it still requires some builaround to work.
It's a nice one. It offers some synergies with Gadgetzan Auctioneer, so it's solid. Boss Harambo is also a good pick.
I thought about Harambo but I'm reluctant to pick it because the base idea came from Tox (it was for our custom multiclass gang), so it might be illegal. Tbh I don't really like any of your cards. First one has too many tokens and the tokens are too complicated. Second one could do with just having Spell Damage and adding Razorpetals. Third one is too situational.
@Kovachut it's not obvious what "your Razorpetals ARE NOW Pellets..." means. All of them? Or newly generated? Or generated in the past? You say you mean future ones in your comment but it should be obvious from the card text. "For the rest of the game, ..." or "Replace Razorpetals in your hand with..." would specify the future or the past better. I guess I can see the problem of "For the rest of the game, your cards that add Razorpetals instead add Pellets to your hand" taking up too much space, but that's still more correct in my mind.
Also, whatTheHeck said earlier that I don't need to add "that deals 1 damage" after Razorpetal. What do you think about that, consdering that both Razorpetal Lasher and Razorpetal Volley have that text? (and I got space)
@CheeseEtc Your card is extremely close to 2 mana 3/2 Battlecry: Add a Banana to your hand. Only that the other version can cast the Banana faster, but yours can see and cast your real card sooner. Either way it would be an autoinclude in every minion deck in the game with that face value.
I wonder how many different versions of Monkey King will show up in this competition...There's already one before this one.
The idea is straight forward, the Monkey KING turns your Bananas into Blessing of Kings. He's initially a tempo loss, but a few one mana +4/+4 can easily swing the tempo in your favor later.
What do you think about this idea? The cards that replace the normal discover pool are the bananas from Banana Brawl; Bananas, Big Banana, Rotten Banana, Deviate Banana and this card.
Bananas is the TGC pet obtained from Banana Charm. Lorewise Bananas is a son of Mukla. I am a bit uncertain about the name of the card. It can't be only Bananas because that is the name of the spell. "Prince" Bananas and Bananas, Baby Ape didn't feel that great. So far this name is the best I came up with.
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A nice combo breaker for warlock that can take out jade idols, bombs, pogo-hoppers, or hakkar the soulflayer.
I am not entirely set on a cost, I am not sure if 2 would be better because shuffle abilities are rare. and I am definitely not set on a name yet.
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I didn't feel like going for the fancy legendary route. Here's a nice and simple card that I am really proud of, at least flavour-wise:
The flavour being you're in a jungle and you're a woodsman. So you probably have an axe to cut down a tree, maybe a banana to munch on in the afternoon and you'll probably find a monkey along the way.
Oh god there's gonna be a lot of monkey kings
Bananas are kinda boring tho and I'm pretty sure we've had a banana competition as someone pointed out. So I'm leaning towards this
The cliche names ughhhhhhh
Bonus Effects:
Crazy Monkey:
@draquaza1470 Nature's Gift is overpowered. It should cost 4 at least IMO. I prefer Archdruid Antonio even if it should be a Rogue card due to being the class with Razorpetals.
@Screwjank Pretty cool effect, and in my opinion it's balanced enough.
@Mist Assassin I would also go with Queen of Thorns, but you shouldn't explain what a Razorpetal does, just look at Razor Lasher.
@GoliathTheDwarf: Honestly I think that's too weak. I would raise it's stats to 3/4 or 2/3 at least.
As @GoliathTheDwarf recommended, I decided to change the art of the card:
"The strike of a thousand cuts shattered the orc's will to defend his land."
Thoughts on the new art?
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Ok, so I got some ideas for this week's comp:
Tokens:
Audrey
Flowey
1) Before someone comments, yes, I'm aware of Lifesteal's existence. Un'Goro came before KoFT, so it didn't have that keyword yet and I want to stick to the timeline's rules.
2) Flowey - All Razorpetal generating cards will give you Pellets instead (this includes Lashers and Volleys). I feared Flowey's power and this is why I increased its cost to 6 mana (+ it also generates you two cards).
3) The weapon might feel overcosted, but, if you think about it, it thins out your deck and then it "draws" you the razorpetals, which were contained in the deleted cards.
I also have a banana idea:
Banana Smuggler Rare Battlecry: Add a Banana to your hand. At the start of your turn, double all Bananas in your hand.
:3
Even though I knew the theme since last week I haven't thought about it yet. Here's what I have so far:
Custom cards :
CLASSES : Alchemist (CCC#5 | Phase V) | Chef (CCC#4)
EXPANSIONS : Year of the Scorpion (Year Comp)
@Kovachut honestly, not a big fan of any of them. Audrey seems needlessly complicated with all the different sprouts, Flowey relies more on the reference than on the idea itself, and Leaf Blower is an insanely niche tool that most times won’t help you (also don’t like the wording and art).
Weirdly enough, the Banana Smuggler is the one I like most. A creative effect, easily balanced and fits well in the theme
@CheeseEtc kudos for the HearthCards theme! I like the idea of your card, but the fact it doesn’t really deny you a draw in exchange for drawing feels a tad too powerful in early game. Although this sucks late game, so it might actually be balanced
The Submission thread is open.
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
It's a nice one. It offers some synergies with Gadgetzan Auctioneer, so it's solid. Boss Harambo is also a good pick.
Ty for the feedback. However I hope you don't mind that I will comment on your cards tomorrow. It's getting late atm and my father wants to use the PC.
@Kovachut you needn’t bother, I’m the quickest submitter in these parts! (well, second quickest I guess)
I submitted my idea and immediately regretted it lel. It's too plain of an idea.
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
@linkblade91 inB4 it’s the highest rated submission in the page
I wanted to do this theme since several months and patiently awaited for my next victory. As for your cards, I really like Flying Monkey but I would make the effect an aura.
My card denies you a draw on turn 3 when played on curve, so IMO it still requires some builaround to work.
I thought about Harambo but I'm reluctant to pick it because the base idea came from Tox (it was for our custom multiclass gang), so it might be illegal. Tbh I don't really like any of your cards. First one has too many tokens and the tokens are too complicated. Second one could do with just having Spell Damage and adding Razorpetals. Third one is too situational.
Custom cards :
CLASSES : Alchemist (CCC#5 | Phase V) | Chef (CCC#4)
EXPANSIONS : Year of the Scorpion (Year Comp)
Thoughts or feedback? It's a 4 mana 4/4 that gets you at least one petal from playing it.
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@Kovachut it's not obvious what "your Razorpetals ARE NOW Pellets..." means. All of them? Or newly generated? Or generated in the past? You say you mean future ones in your comment but it should be obvious from the card text. "For the rest of the game, ..." or "Replace Razorpetals in your hand with..." would specify the future or the past better. I guess I can see the problem of "For the rest of the game, your cards that add Razorpetals instead add Pellets to your hand" taking up too much space, but that's still more correct in my mind.
Also, whatTheHeck said earlier that I don't need to add "that deals 1 damage" after Razorpetal. What do you think about that, consdering that both Razorpetal Lasher and Razorpetal Volley have that text? (and I got space)
@CheeseEtc Your card is extremely close to 2 mana 3/2 Battlecry: Add a Banana to your hand. Only that the other version can cast the Banana faster, but yours can see and cast your real card sooner. Either way it would be an autoinclude in every minion deck in the game with that face value.