Thanks for the feedback! If you have better art for "young boom", please help me out. This was one of the few alt arts I could find. As for the mana cost, you're right in terms of power level, but I liked the flavor of a combined mana cost of 7 (since, you know, dr. b is all about that number) but I do not like the thought of making it an odd-costed 5 mana 5/5.
As for your cards:
Feral Instincts somehow feels like a card they have already done. So spot on with the theme. The damage part is a bit random though, maybe granting your hero attack is more fitting (but also wordier).
Ultimate Finfestation is just great. I'd strengthen the flavor by upping the cost and giving your Murlocs taunt. Otherwise, you got my vote and I would be happy to see you develop this one further :)
Eavesdropping is quite difficult to balance due to Sprint. It is a card that could definitely see print (maybe even at a lower cost), but wont see that much play.
FeaRForce: You can simplify the wording: "Draw a Taunt, Divine Shield, Lifesteal and Windfury minion from your deck." Keep the power level in mind though! Countess Ashmore and The Curator both draw a max of three while costing 7. You need to do some balance work I think!
MrDopehead: NO! This is a draw 3 for 4 with a potential disruptive upside. Sorry, but you need to find something else in my opinion. Also, use the spell template for spells and check your spelling. It adds a professional layer to your cards.
Thanks for the feedback! If you have better art for "young boom", please help me out. This was one of the few alt arts I could find. As for the mana cost, you're right in terms of power level, but I liked the flavor of a combined mana cost of 7 (since, you know, dr. b is all about that number) but I do not like the thought of making it an odd-costed 5 mana 5/5.
You could go and try to find something good in google (or in blizz-art). For now I can propose the following pics, but dunno if they depict precisely Dr. Boom before he defended his "disertation".
As for your cards:
Feral Instincts somehow feels like a card they have already done. So spot on with the theme. The damage part is a bit random though, maybe granting your hero attack is more fitting (but also wordier).
Ultimate Finfestation is just great. I'd strengthen the flavor by upping the cost and giving your Murlocs taunt. Otherwise, you got my vote and I would be happy to see you develop this one further :)
Eavesdropping is quite difficult to balance due to Sprint. It is a card that could definitely see print (maybe even at a lower cost), but wont see that much play.
1) FI - good idea. I will change the card so.
2) UF - Thanks for the kind words, but dunno if I should change the card the way you suggested. I fear it may get overcomplicated.
3) ED - Initially it cost 4 mana, but then I thought how the rogue player would get sick card draw for cheap. This spell also gives you information about the contents of the opponent's hand. I ended up increasing its mana cost to 6, because I compared it to Nourish, Thistle Tea, Cabalist's Tome etc. Since you think it's a bit problematic, I will ditch it.
Does this one fit? On one had, the card itself doesn't determine the amount of cards drawn, but on the other hand, it's still predictable because you can see the state of the board.
I know this is a weird question, given I suggested the theme... But would this count?
Yes, it should count. "Filling your hand" is conditional and will result in a varying number of tokens - and by extension the number of cards you could end up drawing from those tokens.
...technically Yes? We're getting further into the gray area with Acolyte of Pain. I was going to say something like "we want cards that directly draw cards. not ones that wait around hoping they will", but we allowed Genzo and Jeeves so I guess that doesn't work.
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You're using Hearthcard's minion template, when you should be using the spell template. You can change templates on the left-hand side of the design menu. No spell looks like this, certainly not with "Spell" where a minion's tribal tag goes.
Also, that art belongs to Pick Pocket already; you'll need to find something else.
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Does this one fit? On one had, the card itself doesn't determine the amount of cards drawn, but on the other hand, it's still predictable because you can see the state of the board.
It would work if you phrased it correctly: "Draw a card for each Elemental on the battlefield." :P You're overthinking it: the "Repeat" part could end up creating an infinite loop, as the spell triggers in its entirety again and again.
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You left the "Spell" tag at the bottom, which shouldn't be there. Also, I wouldn't recommend using an in-game image; you can always tell, and it doesn't look right.
You can get your images from Google or any-other image database, really. We're not trying to profit from our cards so there're no copyright issues or whatever; just find whatever looks appropriate.
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Would this qualify? The amount of cards will vary, but you will know beforehand how many you'll draw when you look at your mana.
This will certainly count towards the competition, because the drawing effect has a condition. I think the card will be better, if you rename it "Forbidden something".
Oh yeah, I forgot about the 'Forbidden' cards. Thanks. Updated the card.
Another card means any card that isn’t a spell or minion.
I'm inclined to say No, because the outcomes are basically predetermined, but I guess it counts. Yeah there's technically a variable (Win = 2 cards, Lose = No cards) but it's still a pretty rigid setup. I did not realize there would be such a vast gray area with this theme DX
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If I make something else, I will put it in this post in a spoiler.
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Card Design ChampionThanks for the feedback! If you have better art for "young boom", please help me out. This was one of the few alt arts I could find. As for the mana cost, you're right in terms of power level, but I liked the flavor of a combined mana cost of 7 (since, you know, dr. b is all about that number) but I do not like the thought of making it an odd-costed 5 mana 5/5.
As for your cards:
Feral Instincts somehow feels like a card they have already done. So spot on with the theme. The damage part is a bit random though, maybe granting your hero attack is more fitting (but also wordier).
Ultimate Finfestation is just great. I'd strengthen the flavor by upping the cost and giving your Murlocs taunt. Otherwise, you got my vote and I would be happy to see you develop this one further :)
Eavesdropping is quite difficult to balance due to Sprint. It is a card that could definitely see print (maybe even at a lower cost), but wont see that much play.
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Card Design ChampionFeaRForce: You can simplify the wording: "Draw a Taunt, Divine Shield, Lifesteal and Windfury minion from your deck." Keep the power level in mind though! Countess Ashmore and The Curator both draw a max of three while costing 7. You need to do some balance work I think!
MrDopehead: NO! This is a draw 3 for 4 with a potential disruptive upside. Sorry, but you need to find something else in my opinion. Also, use the spell template for spells and check your spelling. It adds a professional layer to your cards.
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Card Design ChampionYou could go and try to find something good in google (or in blizz-art). For now I can propose the following pics, but dunno if they depict precisely Dr. Boom before he defended his "disertation".
1) FI - good idea. I will change the card so.
2) UF - Thanks for the kind words, but dunno if I should change the card the way you suggested. I fear it may get overcomplicated.
3) ED - Initially it cost 4 mana, but then I thought how the rogue player would get sick card draw for cheap. This spell also gives you information about the contents of the opponent's hand. I ended up increasing its mana cost to 6, because I compared it to Nourish, Thistle Tea, Cabalist's Tome etc. Since you think it's a bit problematic, I will ditch it.
Ship in a bottle shluld be worded 'Shuffle a copy of each friendly Pirate into your deck and Draw them' I think.
The Trogg should be like '...enemy minions 'Oberkill: ...' and not be bold after Overkill.
Does this one fit? On one had, the card itself doesn't determine the amount of cards drawn, but on the other hand, it's still predictable because you can see the state of the board.
...technically Yes? We're getting further into the gray area with Acolyte of Pain. I was going to say something like "we want cards that directly draw cards. not ones that wait around hoping they will", but we allowed Genzo and Jeeves so I guess that doesn't work.
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
You're using Hearthcard's minion template, when you should be using the spell template. You can change templates on the left-hand side of the design menu. No spell looks like this, certainly not with "Spell" where a minion's tribal tag goes.
Also, that art belongs to Pick Pocket already; you'll need to find something else.
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It would work if you phrased it correctly: "Draw a card for each Elemental on the battlefield." :P You're overthinking it: the "Repeat" part could end up creating an infinite loop, as the spell triggers in its entirety again and again.
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I knew it looked weird, but hadn't seen the tabs on the left of the creation tool until you mentioned them.
Is there a certain place to get the images from? Because I just went on Google and found one that fit roughly with the concept of the card.
And is it okay now, or did I miss something?
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Spells don't have tribes.
You left the "Spell" tag at the bottom, which shouldn't be there. Also, I wouldn't recommend using an in-game image; you can always tell, and it doesn't look right.
You can get your images from Google or any-other image database, really. We're not trying to profit from our cards so there're no copyright issues or whatever; just find whatever looks appropriate.
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Card Design ChampionOh yeah, I forgot about the 'Forbidden' cards. Thanks. Updated the card.
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Card Design ChampionWould this qualify?
Another card means any card that isn’t a spell or minion.
I'm inclined to say No, because the outcomes are basically predetermined, but I guess it counts. Yeah there's technically a variable (Win = 2 cards, Lose = No cards) but it's still a pretty rigid setup. I did not realize there would be such a vast gray area with this theme DX
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