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I made some changes after some feedback trying to stay away from similarities with the druid class.

I also change a bit the keyword / hero power now it only count the minions the board and summon the token directly. I think it’s easier to understand and more enjoyable a straightforward...

Anyway the mechanic is the same, stay alive as much as possible and protect those tiny Seedling with taunt and cheap aoe boosted with the Bloodthistle (I think in wow the name is thistleblood tho...I need to check)

part of the all mechanic was in the shuffle which I will push it more in case in the classic set with cards that add stuff in your deck. 

I'm missing one card. I think it's gonna be a minion but i'm not sure. I try with this one but i'm not happy about it...maybe if I change the stats and I bring it to a 6 mana...like a 4/5

all feedback are more than welcome :))

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Wow! Meeting the challenges is a lot harder than I thought... Keeping the cardtexts short and simple and at the same time interesting enough is no easy task. (At the moment I've got the feeling, that the Basic Set might be the hardest of all...)

So here's the direction I'm heading for with my "Swindler"-Class:

Main mechanics are carddraw, ambivalent card-effects and using your opponent's ressources. The themes regarding flavor are manipulation and trickery, under the overall image of "travelling entertainers".

(Phase I - Submission here: http://www.hearthpwn.com/forums/hearthstone-general/fan-creations/228747-trials-and-errors-class-creation-competition-5?comment=27)

I've tried to keep it simple and to still catch the flavor:

Due to the "only 2 minions" challenge, I'm experimenting with this idea:

Quite similiar to the summoned Shaman-Totems and the Hunter Companions, the Swindler wil equip a random weapon when this spell is cast.  As I decided that the Swindler is not supposed to carry "Heavy Weaponry", I came up with these items:

Accessories:

At the moment I'm not quite sure if this is completely stupid, or maybe an idea to work upon. Do you think these are balanced? I don't know, if Spell Damage +1 is rather weak, or maybe even too strong, because it's hard to be removed. And dealing damage plus card-draw might be too powerful in comparsion to the other two...

Any feedback would really be appreciated!

 

 

 Didn't you change your hero power last phase because you can't select the card you discard?

Beneath your dignity could probably cost 3. The rest of the 6 cards seems fine.

Your accessories may actually be too weak. If you look at the Animal Companions, they are slightly stronger for their cost. What I'd do for the weapons.:

• Trickster's Ring: A 1/2 and give it "Can't attack heroes".
• Lucky Charm: A 0/3 that looses durability when attacking.
• Rocky Boots: A 2/2.

Replaced 2 of my cards:

 

Earthquake is similar to Swipe, except it can't damage heroes and deals a bit more damage to minions adjacent to the target, as well as damaging all minions. Living Ice Prison is a slowdown tool and makes your opponent think about what they want to play last.

The rest of my cards are in the spoiler:

        

 I'd also want some feedback on what to showcase.

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 Thanks for the feedback!

I guess the Hero Power is the part people have the most problems with... I've been told I should change it,because selected discard is regarded as impossible.  In the spoiler under "Explanations" for the Hero Power I hopefully made a fair argument why I think that it technically IS possible - even in the way HS is programmed right now. I might change "discard" to "destroy" though, if you have the feeling that this is more fitting. (Technically it's "Play a card for free and destroy it without triggering any effects"). I guess any cards benefitting from actual discard should not synergize with the Hero Power, so maybe "Destroy the card" might be better. I just thought that this kind of wording would be even more confusing...

Thanks for the suggestions regarding the balancing of the Accessories! Will surely work on that.

Now in return some feedback on your cards:

I like the changed cards! Earthquake is a quite genuine AOE - though it might be on the fringe of being to complicated for a Basic Card. I still think you should keep it, because it's a real fresh approach.

Living Ice Prison has got a real interesting mechanic. It will keep your opponent thinking hard about what minions to play. I personally don't like 0-Attack minions, though. I get why you did it in terms of flavor for the "Prison", but this way it's far too techy for a Basic Card. Maybe change it to a 1/5  or even 2/4. This way it would be more playable and versatile. You could then replace "Prison" with something a little more animate? Maybe "Crawling Avalanche", or something like that?

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Sorry for no feedback until now , but I had realy hard time with exams. 

@turkeybag

Your cards looks nice. I'm not sure if Summoned Battleaxe isn't a bit too weak. Still I'm not realy a fan of your Hero Power, but with all the cards you designed, I think you should keep it.

@Muddler

I think that the one Accesory with Spell Damage is not good, since it gives you effect that will never last, and I thunk that's not good for Basic. Also I would change Beneath your Diginity to at least 5 Mana, since there's Druid spell in GvG with the same effect but at cost of 6. Aldo Human Shield looks a bit weak, but I like the design. All other cards are fine.

 Hi! Thanks for your feedback! Completely forgot about Recycle ! Looking at it now, I think the original Spell is far too expensive. Assassinate completely removes a minion from the game an is only 5! (But also triggers Deathrattles. Got that one)

Had an earlier version that summoned a 1/2 token as replacement (A "Stunt Double"...), but changed it due to the cardtext-challenge. Maybe have to rethink it, because I defenitely don't want to just copy existing spells...

Also looked at your cards. I see two main issues: I think we are not allowed to implement own keywords like your "overcharge" in the Basic Set (or am I wrong there?). Or is this meant to be a token? A separate 2-Mana-Spell? (Sorry, really hard to tell without pix. I know you're working on it)

And those Attack-reducing-effects are also quite problematic. If this is your Class Identity you can go for them, of course. But permanent Attack-Reduction is something many people dislike, because it can really stall the game. And that's not fun. So I'd at least add "Until the start of your next turn" or something like that, though I know that that'll make it hard to meet the short cardtext challenge...

The other cards are fine as Basic Cards imo. And I personally don't mind, if they are considered "weak". So they are more for early game control, which I think is okay!

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Question. Am I allowed to do something like this for the submission format?

No, your submission cannot use tables. 5 cards, then the explanation of the cards beneath that.

Obviously tables seem like a pretty basic thing to people who know how to do them, but the majority of people will have absolutely no idea how to do them, since there isn't a convenient button for it.

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But how do you know if you advanced to  phase II ? Did everyone advance?

 Everyone who was not disqualified advanced automatically. Those who were disqualified were sent a PM telling them; if you did not receive such a PM, you made it to the next round.

 okay! thanks!

Hello everyone,

Thank you for your guides and help. I've been designing for my Infiltrator class the past few days; t'was quite hard designing the Basic Cards as it was my first time. I wanted to capture the flavor of my class without going too complex. I'll greatly appreciate your comments and as a return I will gladly do my best to check out and comment too in others' class concept :)

THE INFILTRATOR

Premise

Infiltrators are agents, masters of disguise and espionage, able to camouflage with the community unnoticed. They can pretend as diplomats, but once they acquire diplomatic immunity, they use their political advantage to exploit the intelligence they've gathered. They make look as a force of Alliance or Horde, only to find out they're just serving their own ends. Their loyalty is unknown and their faction hides beyond the mists thicker than that of Pandaria.

No secrets are left hidden to them.. and whilst you’re still planning your witty combo next turn, an Infiltrator has already outsmarted you. No one knows how to fight them, and they leave no trail for their discovery.

Bio

Overview

New Keyword: 

Basic Set Cards

(1 weapon, 2 minions, 7 spells)

Description

Because the Infiltrator class excels in tech and disruption, I thought that I should remain true to its core in the Basic Set. The class still utilizes single target damage, AOE, draw but mostly removal/neutralization. The class lacks direct hero damage as Infiltrators must be hidden against the authority and instead draws power from hindering the opponent's play.

• Eye Poker: Use this to control the board or destroy the 1/1 guards you summoned for your opponent.
• Cipher: Immediately disrupt your opponent on turn 1 if they rely heavily from their Hero Power.
• Crypto-Portal: Disrupt them again. Yeah, annoying! But can only be properly used on turn 6, or turn 4 with Greymane.
• Infiltrator's Mark: If the odds is with you, you can destroy a lot of minions.
• Scarlet Inquisitor: Helps you to utilize spells like Infiltrator's Mark.

Remaining Basic Cards

Previous Phase

Phase I Infiltrator Class

'Feel free to comment and suggest if you like some of the hidden cards to be showcased instead. :)' Thank you

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@NiRaSt
Thanks for the feedback! Cauterize is meant to be for minions your hero attacked. I honestly forgot that that wording would include attacks by minions. I shall clarify it! 

As for your cards, I think Earthquake is pushing it for basic complexity but that might just be me. I really like the card nonetheless! Also I think Turn to Dust is pretty weak when compared to Hunter's Mark, so it should probably cost 2 or 1. The rest of your set seems fine and you have some really cool ideas. 

 Thanks for the feedback. I'd say Earthquake is still less complex than Animal Companion, which doesn't even tell you the cards it summons. Turn to dust is costed the way it is because it can still target friendly minions, so you can use it on deathrattle and still trade with it. Should I make it like execute and only target friendlies?

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Wow! Meeting the challenges is a lot harder than I thought... Keeping the cardtexts short and simple and at the same time interesting enough is no easy task. (At the moment I've got the feeling, that the Basic Set might be the hardest of all...)

So here's the direction I'm heading for with my "Swindler"-Class:

Main mechanics are carddraw, ambivalent card-effects and using your opponent's ressources. The themes regarding flavor are manipulation and trickery, under the overall image of "travelling entertainers".

(Phase I - Submission here: http://www.hearthpwn.com/forums/hearthstone-general/fan-creations/228747-trials-and-errors-class-creation-competition-5?comment=27)

I've tried to keep it simple and to still catch the flavor:

Due to the "only 2 minions" challenge, I'm experimenting with this idea:

Quite similiar to the summoned Shaman-Totems and the Hunter Companions, the Swindler wil equip a random weapon when this spell is cast.  As I decided that the Swindler is not supposed to carry "Heavy Weaponry", I came up with these items:

Accessories:

At the moment I'm not quite sure if this is completely stupid, or maybe an idea to work upon. Do you think these are balanced? I don't know, if Spell Damage +1 is rather weak, or maybe even too strong, because it's hard to be removed. And dealing damage plus card-draw might be too powerful in comparsion to the other two...

Any feedback would really be appreciated!

 

 

 Didn't you change your hero power last phase because you can't select the card you discard?

Beneath your dignity could probably cost 3. The rest of the 6 cards seems fine.

Your accessories may actually be too weak. If you look at the Animal Companions, they are slightly stronger for their cost. What I'd do for the weapons.:

• Trickster's Ring: A 1/2 and give it "Can't attack heroes".
• Lucky Charm: A 0/3 that looses durability when attacking.
• Rocky Boots: A 2/2.

Replaced 2 of my cards:

 

Earthquake is similar to Swipe, except it can't damage heroes and deals a bit more damage to minions adjacent to the target, as well as damaging all minions. Living Ice Prison is a slowdown tool and makes your opponent think about what they want to play last.

The rest of my cards are in the spoiler:

        

 I'd also want some feedback on what to showcase.

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 Thanks for the feedback!

I guess the Hero Power is the part people have the most problems with... I've been told I should change it,because selected discard is regarded as impossible.  In the spoiler under "Explanations" for the Hero Power I hopefully made a fair argument why I think that it technically IS possible - even in the way HS is programmed right now. I might change "discard" to "destroy" though, if you have the feeling that this is more fitting. (Technically it's "Play a card for free and destroy it without triggering any effects"). I guess any cards benefitting from actual discard should not synergize with the Hero Power, so maybe "Destroy the card" might be better. I just thought that this kind of wording would be even more confusing...

Thanks for the suggestions regarding the balancing of the Accessories! Will surely work on that.

Now in return some feedback on your cards:

I like the changed cards! Earthquake is a quite genuine AOE - though it might be on the fringe of being to complicated for a Basic Card. I still think you should keep it, because it's a real fresh approach.

Living Ice Prison has got a real interesting mechanic. It will keep your opponent thinking hard about what minions to play. I personally don't like 0-Attack minions, though. I get why you did it in terms of flavor for the "Prison", but this way it's far too techy for a Basic Card. Maybe change it to a 1/5  or even 2/4. This way it would be more playable and versatile. You could then replace "Prison" with something a little more animate? Maybe "Crawling Avalanche", or something like that?

 

 Thanks for feedback. I'll see what I do about Ice Prison. 

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Hello everyone,

Thank you for your guides and help. I've been designing for my Infiltrator class the past few days; t'was quite hard designing the Basic Cards as it was my first time. I wanted to capture the flavor of my class without going too complex. I'll greatly appreciate your comments and as a return I will gladly do my best to check out and comment too in others' class concept :)

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THE INFILTRATOR

Premise

Infiltrators are agents, masters of disguise and espionage, able to camouflage with the community unnoticed. They can pretend as diplomats, but once they acquire diplomatic immunity, they use their political advantage to exploit the intelligence they've gathered. They make look as a force of Alliance or Horde, only to find out they're just serving their own ends. Their loyalty is unknown and their faction hides beyond the mists thicker than that of Pandaria.

No secrets are left hidden to them.. and whilst you’re still planning your witty combo next turn, an Infiltrator has already outsmarted you. No one knows how to fight them, and they leave no trail for their discovery.

Bio

 Mirage

“Mirage is a new in her game and her disguised career didn’t take overnight. But with her charming training, she immediately rose to popularity and was privilege to entertain the royalties. Often, she would use her acting skills with the royal guards, unveiling every secret in Stormwind.”

Hero Power

BREACH: Your opponent’s next card to play costs (1) more. They summon a 1/1 Guard with Taunt .

"Infiltrators have a knack for sneaking in and end up being caught by the guards".

• Disrupt your opponent's curve on their next play. But wait, the authorities have summoned a guard!
• A very effective hero power to use anytime and since you are an Infiltrator, you always have a way to bypass those Taunt minions.

Overview

Unique Keywords: Mask

Core Keywords: Look, stealth

Mechanics: Hand information, hand manipulation , cost manipulation , tech, anti-secrets/combo

Flavor: Espionage , disguise , intelligence , bluff, anarchy

Weaknesses: Hand Information doesn’t directly solve problems, lacks direct and burst damage, masked minions can easily be wiped by AOE, lacks self-healing

 

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New Keyword: 

A Masked minion (left) compared to Stealthed (right).

• Masked minions are exclusive to the Infiltrator class. Opponents don’t know what kind of minion they are fighting against!
• Masked minions are not stealthed, and can be attacked.
• A minion will lose its Mask when another character attacks it such as another minion or a hero with an attack/weapon.
• Direct damage, AOE spells and some hero powers can target and damage it, but will not break its mask.
• When this minion attacks, it doesn’t lose Mask; however, the opponent may have a clue of its identity based from the damage it dealt (although most masked minions have the same attack).
• All Masked minions costs 4, similar to secrets, preventing the opponent from guessing it.
• Similar to Stealth and Divine shield, once a minion loses its Mask, the card text is still present but no longer does anything.

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Basic Set Cards

(1 weapon, 2 minions, 7 spells)

Description

Because the Infiltrator class excels in tech and disruption, I thought that I should remain true to its core in the Basic Set. The class still utilizes single target damage, AOE, draw but mostly removal/neutralization. The class lacks direct hero damage as Infiltrators must be hidden against the authority and instead draws power from hindering the opponent's play.

• Eye Poker: Use this to control the board or destroy the 1/1 guards you summoned for your opponent.
• Cipher: Immediately disrupt your opponent on turn 1 if they rely heavily from their Hero Power.
• Crypto-Portal: Disrupt them again. Yeah, annoying! But can only be properly used on turn 6, or turn 4 with Greymane.
• Infiltrator's Mark: If the odds is with you, you can destroy a lot of minions.
• Scarlet Inquisitor: Helps you to utilize spells like Infiltrator's Mark.

Remaining Basic Cards

Previous Phase

 

Phase I Infiltrator Class

'Feel free to comment and suggest if you like some of the hidden cards to be showcased instead. :)' Thank you

 

 

 The hero power seems a little complex, but it fits the flavour of your class. I'd change the wording to "The next card your opponent plays costs ...". Decription could probably cost 1, look at Flare. The rest of the cards seem fine.

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I made some changes after some feedback trying to stay away from similarities with the druid class.

I also change a bit the keyword / hero power now it only count the minions the board and summon the token directly. I think it’s easier to understand and more enjoyable a straightforward...

Anyway the mechanic is the same, stay alive as much as possible and protect those tiny Seedling with taunt and cheap aoe boosted with the Bloodthistle (I think in wow the name is thistleblood tho...I need to check)

part of the all mechanic was in the shuffle which I will push it more in case in the classic set with cards that add stuff in your deck. 

 

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I'm missing one card. I think it's gonna be a minion but i'm not sure. I try with this one but i'm not happy about it...maybe if I change the stats and I bring it to a 6 mana...like a 4/5

 

all feedback are more than welcome :))

 

 

 Your keyword can just be "Has +1/+1 for every other minion with Evergrowth on the board".

Briathorn's Wall is insame, either reduce thenumber of minions to 2 or make it cost 5. Actually, now that I think about it, the Briathorns are also incredibly good. I'd just make them 1/2.

Spell Power is not a thing. (on the petal).

The Honey has the wrong border. It's also very weak, the paladin has a spell that restores 6 health for only 2 mana, and refreshing your hero power isn't worth that much. I'd make it cost 3 at most. 

Herbicides should cost 3, since it's literally between Arcane Explosion and Consecration.

The rest of the cards seem fine.

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Question. Am I allowed to do something like this for the submission format?

Hablablablabla, look at this card description!	Oooh, I wonder what this card does.

Hey everybody, look at the card!	"This card's nice. This card's nice too. This card's nice. This card's nice too. This card's nice. This card's nice too..."	4 LINES ON A BASIC CARD? NO WAY!!!

 

 Not sure you actually wanted feedback for your cards, haha. They all seem fine.

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I changed some cards up. Let me know what you think!

THE ARCHAEOLOGIST

Archaeologist is a weapon focus class which focuses on board control, and sticky minions. The basic set will mostly be about controlling the board, and survivability through armor and taunt.

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Optional Keyword Section

Decay is a fairly self-explanatory keyword. It will not appear on any basic cards, but in Classic onward, it will go on mostly weapons as a way to implement aura weapons.

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Example Cards

 

  

These cards show the various strengths and weaknesses of Archaeologist, showing that Archaeologist has decent draw, removal, AoE, and good armor gain and heal.  

• Sword in Stone shows what the class cares most about, again, weapons. It's a cheap cycle that can tutor good weapons, but it benefits from having more weapons in your deck. It is balanced around Forge of Souls.
• Uncover shows a unique aspect of the class - unique token generation. The tokens (in the spoiler below) are all 4-Cost overstatted minions that you have to pay an early cost for.
• Skeletal Cast is the strange card of the Archaeologist's basic set, following in the footsteps of Tracking and Sacrificial Pact. Not only does it draw 3, it can duplicate cards, and let you know which next three cards you're going to draw.
• Earthshake is good AoE, and good draw. It's a fairly simple card which can provide a board clear and a refill at once, like a bigger Fan of Knives.
• Cavern Crash is the biggest card of the set, providing a large tempo swing and an extra 10 armor for your hero. The idea is that you wear the rocks as Armor!

Uncover Tokens:

 

Remaining Cards

 

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Previous Phase

Phase 1 Post

 

 

 Everything seems fine to me. Are fossils going to also be generated by other cards?

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eff@ShatterStar1998

I like your cards, maybe beyonde these generating Astral Spirit. It looks like too much card text on basic token. Also you cannot cut it's text by removin 'random'? Ragnaros, the Lightlord is worded that way. 

 I want to make it absolutely clear that the Astral Spirits effects have synergy with Gaze and effects like Solar Eclipse / Knight of the Eclipse. The complexity of the token is something I unfortunately cannot change without compromising the foundation of my entire class. If I did, I have to put in some healing to justify the fantasy I want to create.

Made some change to my post. Most notably putting the Strength and Weakness portion AFTER the keyword portion. My keyword is just so tied to my class's identity and its mechanic that I have no other options as well as gating it behind a spoiler:

The Astromancer

 

When the people of Azeroth are sleeping or fighting, astromancers study the stars, the sun, the moon and the planets surrounding their sky. With this knowledge, astromancers try their best to make prediction to the future based on the pattern. Unfortunately, their prediction backfires to the people of Azeroth as often as it helps them.

That isn't to say that astromancers are completely wrong. With a little more patient, set up and studying intensely, their prediction have more chance of being useful!

 

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Class Keyword

Astromancer is a high RNG class that this keyword allows them to reduce the RNG (atleast temporarily) and plan their turn as well as considering their risk / reward ratio accordingly when they don't draw or can't afford to play the Gaze cards.

How do you know and keep track of which characters are Gazed ? Any character that is Gazed will have an eye symbol with blue aura surrounding them when you hover over. Here's an example (thanks to the brilliant NoahMcGrath):

Strength and Weakness:

Strength:

• High token spawning: As long as there is one star in the sky, the Astromancers will be able to summon out the Astral Spirit that represent the soul of those stars to fight for them.
• High burst spell damage / finisher: Astromancers can command down comets and meteors from the night sky to hit their foe. Not only that but the Astral Spirits when buffs up can become formidable allies
• Decent healing: Each Astral Spirits not only allows for board presence, each of them are gentle and helpful beings who heal you and your allies/minions over time by 2 Health if they are injured.
• Decent removal: When not falling into your opponent's face, the comets and meteor conjured by the Astromancers can instead annihilate the enemy minions.
• Decent card draw: With so many random effects and the need to combine with their class keyword Gaze in order for them to be effective, Astromancers will boast a decent amount of card draw in order for them to afford to play the Gaze and the random effect in combination
• High disruption: The stars and the sky not only protect you in your turn, but in your opponent's turn as well. In addition to being a Secret class (that will be showncased in the Classic sets) and their class mechanic Gaze activates during your opponent's turn, a lot of their minions also carry disruption effects that will cause your opponent to have to think twice before making any moves as well as creating interactive games from both sides.

Weakness:

• Unreliable random effects: The power of the celestials are powerful but unstable. Astromancer is a class built from the ground up to be a high variant class. This is especially prevalent in their Basic cards and Hero Power. If your hand is filled with random effects with no effective way to make them more consistent, the RNG can easily screw you over.
• Jack-of-all-trade, Master of None: Astromancer's class card has everything but not as best as a particular something. It's both a curse in that they will be harder to clearly pinpoint a best deck while a blessing in that it allows them to be flexible and incorporating many elements in their decks.
• Buffs focus on giving minions Health and utility, not offensive power: Most of the Astromancer buffs are focusing on keeping the minions on the field, not finishing off your opponent. Thus you have to contend with grind them out and draw into your burst as well as trading and dealing chip damage carefully.
• Healing tied to spawning minions: The class has very few healing outside of spawning the Astral Spirits. Thus you need to keep them alive if you want the healing to you and your minions provided by them. They also have no natural Armor gain, so they are vulnerable to 30 or more burst damage.
• Weak board clear: The power of the stars are unreliable when forcing them to target multiple enemies. Most of the Astromancer's board clear are either unreliable (aka random), symmetrical or inefficient in term of damage to their cost.

Their Basic cards aim to establish the mechanic, flavor, strength and weakness of the class while also provide tools for them to play a variety of playstyle: Aggressive, Token based, Mid-range or Control.

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Example Cards

                                                        

                               

• Solar Eclipse: Ancient time has the belief that Solar Eclipses will cause bad luck happens to people who looks at them. With the Basic set filled with random effect, new players of this class will be grateful for this card. An introduction for the class's main flavor of control random effects as well as foreshadowing the Gaze mechanic in the Classic set. This card can also serve in more advanced decks as a combo piece since it allows you to preserve the Gaze effects already on the character.
• Astral Intellect: An example of the class's extremely powerful but also high variant random effects. Most of the other cards will not as swingy as this effect, but this card is also the most powerful when assisted by Gaze or Solar Eclipse. Of course, you can also use this card offensively in control or combo match ups to mill important cards from your opponent or get them to fatigue faster. An example of the great disruption mechanic this class have.
• Astral Touch: An example of the decent removal this class have. While the token doesn't immediately impact the board like Polymorph or Hex token, you will likely want to take care of it since the healing it provide can hit your opponent's face or minions.
• Starcaller: A minion that served many purpose: A very sticky and threatening 4 drop, a token spawning machine that allow to you spawn atleast 1-2 Astral Spirits that will most likely heal her back when she hit another minion, a great source of healing or a card will force your opponent to play inefficiently because they will likely not want you to create and the buff up the Spirits. She also another example of the great disruption mechanic the class have.
• Supernova: An example of the less than stellar board clear the class will have. The utility of healing and board presence provide by it is nice but you will either wipe out everything else on your board, leave some minions your opponent survive, both or, worse, died before reaching 7 mana.

Token:

 

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Remaining Cards

                                                            

                                  

• Fiery Comet: An example of the great burst damage this class will have. It low cost allows it to combo with Malygos with a little bit of set up like with another Gaze or Solar Eclipse. Or can use as a removal.
• Blessing of the Stars: A card that foreshadow that kind of buffs that this class will receive. Most of their buffs will focus on keeping their minions alive on the board and provide extra utility, not bursting down their opponent.
• Celestial Bow: A card that support this class's playstyle of spawning tokens as well as how it will use its weapon: Most of their weapons will be used for tempo or supporting their other cards similar to Paladin and Shaman rather than being a main focus like Rogue or Warrior.
• Astral Wrath: A card that showcase the weakness of the class has in term of AoE. The damage is extremely weak for its cost. The draw is a little utility.
• Knight of the Eclipse: A card that support more mid-range Astromancers deck. The statline is excellent for its cost and if you give him Taunt by cards like Sunfury Protector and hide him behind a bunch of Astral Spirits, he will protect them while they will heal back the damage he took. He is also an example of the disruption mechanic this class naturally has in its card set and how cards with Gaze effects will be given vanilla efficient stat to cost ratio since his effect is basically non-factor if you and your opponent don't have random effects. Or can even be beneficial to the Deadly Shot your opponent cast.

Q & A

• So, is Solar Eclipse is basically just Gaze with different wording? NO! They are similar in fuction and use the same animation, yes, but will have completely different interaction. Solar Eclipse will override any previous Gazes you stack on top of the character, which mean that you can preserve your Gaze for the next random effect you cast. Solar Eclipse also will not benefit from any Gaze synergy that will be printed.
• Will Astral Intellect interact with Gaze/Solar Eclipse on minions? No. Astral Intellect will only be affected by Gaze/Solar Eclipse on Hero.

Previous Phase:

Phase I Post

 

 

 Small typo in your keyword, it should be "targets". Also, you might want to see if having the token have more than 2 lines violates the respective challenge. The cards themselves seem allright.

 Your keyword can just be "Has +1/+1 for every other minion with Evergrowth on the board".

I don't know why the tooltip doesn't let me write the keyword like that.

Briathorn's Wall is insame, either reduce thenumber of minions to 2 or make it cost 5. Actually, now that I think about it, the Briathorns are also incredibly good. I'd just make them 1/2.

Why is insane compared with woidwalker?

Spell Power is not a thing. (on the petal).

what do you mean by that?

The Honey has the wrong border. It's also very weak, the paladin has a spell that restores 6 health for only 2 mana, and refreshing your hero power isn't worth that much. I'd make it cost 3 at most. 

yeah i didn't realise of that. I will lower it to 3 or make it stronger

Herbicides should cost 3, since it's literally between Arcane Explosion and Consecration.

I'll fix that

thanks heaps for the feedback

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I made some changes after some feedback trying to stay away from similarities with the druid class.

I also change a bit the keyword / hero power now it only count the minions the board and summon the toke directly.

 

 

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I'm missing one card. I think it's gonna be a minion but i'm not sure. I try with this one but i'm not happy about it...

 

 

all feedback are more than welcome :))

 

Few immediate problems I notice:

• Cultivation doesn't have "Hero Power" in bold at the top. It also uses the same artwork as Floop's Glorious Gloop.
• Is Evergrowth supposed to be passive? In that case, the tooltip should probably be changed so "gain" is replaced with "has".
• Fertilize also uses the same artwork as New Growth.
• Bloodthistle Petal should say "Spell Damage +2" instead of "+2 Spell Power".
• Although less obvious, I can tell that Pruning Slash also uses artwork already in the game. It uses the same artwork as Exterminate from monster Hunt. This isn't as big of a problem because some cards in Ranked mode do share artwork with adventure cards (Simulacrum - Pure Cold for example), but it feels weird to have Tess Greymane in the art when your class seems unrelated to her. The card also seems weak as well.
• Apprentice Herbalist quite obviously uses the same artwork as The Marsh Queen. Judging by the wording, the effect also needs to be a Battlecry, which will put this card at 3 lines of text meaning you'll have 4 cards with 3 lines of text, and you're only allowed to have 3. That and "hero power" should also be "Hero Power".

 I didn't know that we couldn't use images already in game but with  different zoom/angle. I'll fix them all.

For the keyword i want it to be like a buff, so it can be silenced. Thanks for the feedback

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I made some changes after some feedback trying to stay away from similarities with the druid class.

I also change a bit the keyword / hero power now it only count the minions the board and summon the token directly. I think it’s easier to understand and more enjoyable a straightforward...

Anyway the mechanic is the same, stay alive as much as possible and protect those tiny Seedling with taunt and cheap aoe boosted with the Bloodthistle (I think in wow the name is thistleblood tho...I need to check)

part of the all mechanic was in the shuffle which I will push it more in case in the classic set with cards that add stuff in your deck. 

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I'm missing one card. I think it's gonna be a minion but i'm not sure. I try with this one but i'm not happy about it...maybe if I change the stats and I bring it to a 6 mana...like a 4/5

 

all feedback are more than welcome :))

 

• Pacebloom Honey has the Neutral border, not the class border. It also way overcost. Refreshing your hero power isn't worth 2 mana attached to a Holy Light
• Prunish Slash is UP. It is so much worse than Shadowbolt, already quite mediocre. I would drop the cost to 2.
• Herbicides is a strictly better Arcane Explosion. Remember that Lighting Storm "cost" 4 mana while Consecration cost 4.
• Cultivation lacks the Hero Power keyword like every other Hero Power

I must say I'm impressed that you managed to distinguish yourself from Druid, which is not easy to do given the theme you chose.

Thanks for the feedback

Pacebloom honey / i will fix that, i noticed it later.

Prunish Slash / I was thinking to change it to deal 3-5 damage cost 3

Herbicides / i'll move it to 3

I'm late with the feedback; I apologize for that :/ I'll have to make up for it by doing extra. They're in reverse-order again, so I hit the most-recent iterations of your post(s):

Demonxz95

Ashkrell

Laurendor

Pircival

Shatterstar1998

MurderyUnicorn

Turkeybag

Muddler

Wailor

SunnoxPL

NiRaSt

 thepowrofcheese

Noah_McGrath

 I think that will have to be it, for now. I apologize again if I skipped over you or otherwise left you out; that wasn't my intention. If anyone would like to provide feedback for my Lich class, it's currently located on the next page.