First couple of ideas, feedback is always appreciated, I might even get round to submitting this week -
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eScapegoat1270 - Zalazane
Possibly leans slightly to the strong side, but not in a broken way. Good idea, quite interesting. I like it.
rdeegan - Raja'sul the Relentless
A limited removal, that has potential for doubling up. Balanced quite nicely, as you've got the 3 mana body, coupled with an effect that I'd cost in at 4 (Better than Deadly shot, worse than Assassinate, unless you get the double.) Can be played around if it's expected. I'd maybe consider making it class limited, but it's good.
Demonxz95 - Zul'jin
The lore geek in me has to point out that Zul'jin was never a druid, rather using Loa to grant him shapechanging abilities. That minor quabble aside, I think a 5 option Discover style effect would really push mobile devices. Also, do you really want 11 different tokens? Limiting the possibilities would reduce it to 4, which would fit a lot closer to the WoW encounter as well (Bear, Eagle, Dragonhawk and Lynx). Nice idea, maybe a bit excessive in the scope of it. Maybe a little cheap as well, I'd consider an 8 mana 5/5, but that would depend on which option you dropped from the option pool. A 4/4 Stealth Windfury Lifesteal is huge for 6 mana.
IgnatiusJreilly - Samedi
Pick one for the token, both is too wordy, it looks like it's crammed in. I'm not a huge fan of the design personally, but can't really put my finger on why. I think it just feels like it's trying to be complex, but failing. Not sure what I can suggest as improvements. Sorry.
Fortify - Nurturing Zoologist
Been mentioned before, but it should be Adapt, not adept. This would exist purely to allow more Hadronox plays, as the is no real strong targets for the first option, except maybe a Quest druid running Ultrasaur? If you can think another reason to play it than just getting more Hadronox's, let me know, but I can't. Actually worse than Witching Hour, as you don't specify friendly beasts, so could potentially just pull a Stonetusk Boar against some decks.
I'll leave it there, anyone else wants my exceedingly amateurish feedback, just ask.
Turns out I have two Troll cards already: one I've already submitted (twice) and the other I've sat on for an appropriate occasion. In both cases the troll is incidental:
I'll work on something else. Edit: Just realized Menagerie Tamer is a 2-mana 3/4 across two bodies, with Snowflipper Penguin or Murloc Tinyfin lel. Whoops.
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I mean, I'm creating a card around Zuni and his jokes, not sure If I can.
It heavily depends on what you mean by a "meme card." We generally frown on that. I guess I'd have to see it.
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Okay, so here is my first idea. Now I've never played WoW before, so I'm taking everything here based on internet sources.
His art makes him look like a Rogue, but he's actually more like a Druid. He transforms into several different forms while fighting. When you play him, you transform him and you pick between a set of 5 options thrice and he becomes a new form. Kinda like a smaller Galvadon. Some examples:
Some notes:
Unlike Adapt, all 5 options actually appear at once to choose from rather than choosing from 3. In the past, we have seen the ability to choose out of 4 before (Kalimos, Primal Lord is one such example). Never 5, though it might be possible.
Zul'jin has a Bear Form, Eagle Form, Lynx Form and Dragonhawk Form. The difference is purely visual and chosen at random.
The annoying part will be making the tokens for the choices.
This is a cool idea, and I think the mana cost and statline work well with 3 chooseable keywords. For simplicity, you could have the image be dependent of the first keyword, and then have the other two keywords be added as buffs. It'll save you from making a bunch of tokens... but the 3-keyword tokens would look better.
I went through a few over-the-top ideas (Hakkar) but I like my toned-down Griftah much more.
Couple of ideas I came up with off the bat. Alkali is by far just a meme card, gives warrior an unreliable board clear that can clear your own board (probably won't use it because of the silence synergy and if I do i'd have to jack the cost). Drakuru is also flavorful as in WoW he's a powerful scourge lord but doesn't quite reach the Lich King, so same effect, but far weaker.
As always, i'll give my input as more cards roll in!
Here's another idea for this week (if you haven't seen my first one please check it out). Basically what this card does is that if a friendly minion dies and you have another copy of it in your deck, you recruit it. It gives you some extra steam or maybe provides cool combos. Anyways, give some feedback if you like it or don't like. It would be much appreciated :)
Couple of ideas I came up with off the bat. Alkali is by far just a meme card, gives warrior an unreliable board clear that can clear your own board (probably won't use it because of the silence synergy and if I do i'd have to jack the cost). Drakuru is also flavorful as in WoW he's a powerful scourge lord but doesn't quite reach the Lich King, so same effect, but far weaker.
As always, i'll give my input as more cards roll in!
Another way to balance Akali somewhat is to include "Can't attack heroes." on there, like Icehowl. Akali could theoretically target your minions, but a smarter play would be to just avoid having a table at all when the times comes to play it. And a 5-mana 10/10 that doesn't require any additional effort to acquire is just too much. At least White Eyes's token requires his death and finding the minion later.
As for the other cards, I like Drakuru the most. I don't understand the point of Drakkari Frost Warden: he will be permanently Frozen. You could accumulate endless copies of him from Moorabi, but they-too will remain Popsicles taking up board space.
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Here's another idea for this week (if you haven't seen my first one please check it out). Basically what this card does is that if a friendly minion dies and you have another copy of it in your deck, you recruit it. It gives you some extra steam or maybe provides cool combos. Anyways, give some feedback if you like it or don't like. It would be much appreciated :)
Back in 2017 I might have said "Yeah, totally!" to this card, but with all of the flak the Warlock currently receives for cheating out minions...no way. Even with the upcoming nerfs, with this on the board Possessed Lackey -> Voidlord + Dark Pact is a 7-mana combo that pulls your other Lackey and Voidlord automatically. Carnivorous Cube would double as a Recruit tool D:
I went through a few over-the-too ideas (Hakkar) but I like my toned-down Griftah much more.
The art for your Useless Amulet is the art for Amulet of Domination; you would need to find something else. Either-way, I like Hakkar the Soulless more: a very powerful effect, but it's a 9-mana Do Nothing on the turn it's played so it's not too ridiculous. I mean, it's a little ridiculous given that Holy Nova would act as both a double-heal and automatic board-wipe lol
I always found the Loa an interesting part of Troll culture. Here are a few ideas I came up with:
I like Troll Lifestealer the most. It's a very interesting and unique effect, and a couple different classes can play with it. He's a fine buff target for the Paladin, and the Priest synergy is obvious. You have the Classic watermark on it though; 0/10 lol :P
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Already posted Right above. After I finished it I realized that it doesn't seems like a meme.
Yeah that seems fine; it's not a meme so much as just "flavorful". The text however should say "Summon two 1/1 Nagas for your opponent", and you might want to shave "Zuni's Tricks" down to just "Trick". It doesn't roll off the tongue well in its current form.
I wasn't intending to quadruple post, but here we go...
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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
I've come up with a new card that I like a lot more. Don't mind the derpy name; that is Kimbul's actual title lel
Not a fan of how dark the art is, but the pose is absolutely perfect :/ Anyway, Kimbul is basically the new Swamp King Dred, but with a tech-card vibe. Rather than being a catch-all stomper, Kimbul is a more precise predator hunting specific targets. He functions as a combo-disruptor, although your opponent would not know in advance which particular minion you have selected.
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Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
and you might want to shave "Zuni's Tricks" down to just "Trick"
I'm not sure about that. The title of each spell is a quote that Zuni says in World of Warcraft.
It mainly comes down to the fact that you're talking about one Trick being added to the player's hand, but you're name-dropping them in a plural form. "I was lost in New York City, so I got into a random taxis." You would say taxi (singular), because it's not grammatically correct to say the plural taxis *shrugs*
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
The art for your Useless Amulet is the art for Amulet of Domination; you would need to find something else. Either-way, I like Hakkar the Soulless more: a very powerful effect, but it's a 9-mana Do Nothing on the turn it's played so it's not too ridiculous. I mean, it's a little ridiculous given that Holy Nova would act as both a double-heal and automatic board-wipe lol
and you might want to shave "Zuni's Tricks" down to just "Trick"
I'm not sure about that. The title of each spell is a quote that Zuni says in World of Warcraft.
It mainly comes down to the fact that you're talking about one Trick being added to the player's hand, but you're name-dropping them in a plural form. "I was lost in New York City, so I got into a random taxis." You would say taxi (singular), because it's not grammatically correct to say the plural taxis *shrugs*
Oh, wait. I though you was talking about removing "Zuni's" from the text.
That reason almost made me give up. I didn't know how to write the texts in the correct way. I had to change the language of my game to English just to start posting my cards here because English isn't my main language.
Okay, so here is my first idea. Now I've never played WoW before, so I'm taking everything here based on internet sources.
His art makes him look like a Rogue, but he's actually more like a Druid. He transforms into several different forms while fighting. When you play him, you transform him and you pick between a set of 5 options thrice and he becomes a new form. Kinda like a smaller Galvadon. Some examples:
Some notes:
Unlike Adapt, all 5 options actually appear at once to choose from rather than choosing from 3. In the past, we have seen the ability to choose out of 4 before (Kalimos, Primal Lord is one such example). Never 5, though it might be possible.
Zul'jin has a Bear Form, Eagle Form, Lynx Form and Dragonhawk Form. The difference is purely visual and chosen at random.
The annoying part will be making the tokens for the choices.
This is a cool idea, and I think the mana cost and statline work well with 3 chooseable keywords. For simplicity, you could have the image be dependent of the first keyword, and then have the other two keywords be added as buffs. It'll save you from making a bunch of tokens... but the 3-keyword tokens would look better.
I went through a few over-the-top ideas (Hakkar) but I like my toned-down Griftah much more.
Thanks for the feedback. As for your cards, Hakkar the Soulflayer is interesting although following HS wording, it would probably just say "your spells have Lifesteal and Poisonous". It's a bit situational given that Priest doesn't have many damage spells without using Auchenai Soulpriest, which effectively negates the Lifesteal. I do like how it can combo on turn 10 with a Holy Smite though. I do like Griftah better. Maybe it's a bit unoriginal, but it's still pretty good.
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First couple of ideas, feedback is always appreciated, I might even get round to submitting this week -
Feedback -
eScapegoat1270 - Zalazane
Possibly leans slightly to the strong side, but not in a broken way. Good idea, quite interesting. I like it.
rdeegan - Raja'sul the Relentless
A limited removal, that has potential for doubling up. Balanced quite nicely, as you've got the 3 mana body, coupled with an effect that I'd cost in at 4 (Better than Deadly shot, worse than Assassinate, unless you get the double.) Can be played around if it's expected. I'd maybe consider making it class limited, but it's good.
Demonxz95 - Zul'jin
The lore geek in me has to point out that Zul'jin was never a druid, rather using Loa to grant him shapechanging abilities. That minor quabble aside, I think a 5 option Discover style effect would really push mobile devices. Also, do you really want 11 different tokens? Limiting the possibilities would reduce it to 4, which would fit a lot closer to the WoW encounter as well (Bear, Eagle, Dragonhawk and Lynx). Nice idea, maybe a bit excessive in the scope of it. Maybe a little cheap as well, I'd consider an 8 mana 5/5, but that would depend on which option you dropped from the option pool. A 4/4 Stealth Windfury Lifesteal is huge for 6 mana.
IgnatiusJreilly - Samedi
Pick one for the token, both is too wordy, it looks like it's crammed in. I'm not a huge fan of the design personally, but can't really put my finger on why. I think it just feels like it's trying to be complex, but failing. Not sure what I can suggest as improvements. Sorry.
Fortify - Nurturing Zoologist
Been mentioned before, but it should be Adapt, not adept. This would exist purely to allow more Hadronox plays, as the is no real strong targets for the first option, except maybe a Quest druid running Ultrasaur? If you can think another reason to play it than just getting more Hadronox's, let me know, but I can't. Actually worse than Witching Hour, as you don't specify friendly beasts, so could potentially just pull a Stonetusk Boar against some decks.
I'll leave it there, anyone else wants my exceedingly amateurish feedback, just ask.
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Turns out I have two Troll cards already: one I've already submitted (twice) and the other I've sat on for an appropriate occasion. In both cases the troll is incidental:
I'll work on something else. Edit: Just realized Menagerie Tamer is a 2-mana 3/4 across two bodies, with Snowflipper Penguin or Murloc Tinyfin lel. Whoops.
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Can I submit meme cards?
I mean, I'm creating a card around Zuni and his jokes, not sure If I can.
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
I always found the Loa an interesting part of Troll culture. Here are a few ideas I came up with:
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Couple of ideas I came up with off the bat. Alkali is by far just a meme card, gives warrior an unreliable board clear that can clear your own board (probably won't use it because of the silence synergy and if I do i'd have to jack the cost). Drakuru is also flavorful as in WoW he's a powerful scourge lord but doesn't quite reach the Lich King, so same effect, but far weaker.
As always, i'll give my input as more cards roll in!
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Here's another idea for this week (if you haven't seen my first one please check it out). Basically what this card does is that if a friendly minion dies and you have another copy of it in your deck, you recruit it. It gives you some extra steam or maybe provides cool combos. Anyways, give some feedback if you like it or don't like. It would be much appreciated :)
bepisZuni's Tricks:
Naga:
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
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That reason almost made me give up. I didn't know how to write the texts in the correct way. I had to change the language of my game to English just to start posting my cards here because English isn't my main language.
Click the image to go to my custom Time Traveler class.