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It's that time, when I ask for your feedback guys. I've designed bunch of cards and I'm dry out. Hope you like them.

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Thunderstorm - Some good spells for shaman pls. Obviously good vs aggro and kinda bad vs control If the opponent has 4 cards in hand, then this is an Excavated Evil. Synergy with Baku Shaman.

Rock Barrage - Taunt is cheat. Me go face. That's right, when you need reach, then you just replace your bad cards anyway and throw rocks instead.

Act of Friendship - :D, ok I'm only halve serious with this. I remember the time, when Priest was a joke class and people made lots of meme videos, including building the famous Unicorn Priest. Also before the Legion expansion I have seen people making fun of Anduin for being a sissy and I just wanted to recreate those moments. The idea is taken from Nixxiom's video.

Totem Fury - You know the card. The design may be boring and simple, but it's good in an aggro/mid-range deck, which runs lots of totems.

Start from Scrap - I wanted to design a card with a structure. I thought how the warrior class fits the builder's theme more. The card is a delayed Southsea Captain, which buffs all other minions.

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I personally think that your current card is also a bit too powerful. Reduce the number of minions to 5 and I think we are ok.

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Did somebody say Thunderfury, Blessed Blade of the Windseeker? I think this is very underwhelming because it's super slow. Change the effect to end of turn. I would still prefer Lightning Bolt though.

Powerful shot - if you don't have a minion on your side of the board, then this only interacts with the opponent's minions. Imho the art feels strange in warrior as that class doesn't have ranged weapons. But I personally prefer:

Ambush - it's very flexible and useful. Also very flavourful. The only issue I have is the aggressiveness of hunter and I don't know if squeezing 3 damage would be too powerful there. Ask for others' opinions before you submit your entry.

Sorry for reply late! It's killing me that working on Saturday. And thanks for your feedback!

@CheeseETC

Defence Stance is a good way to gain more armor, however I guess weapon for warrior is more important, and this one is kind slow... I don't know how to make a choice between Fifty Shade of Purple and Cannon Fodder, they are both cool ideas with good balanced. Maybe the hunter card is better cause we could use it in a quest deck. The warlock card is a little weak in build, because warlock has so many ways to clear the battle field.

@Kovachut

Thunderstorm is kind of weird which not like a shaman class card. I guess the second part should be '... Overload (1) for each card in your opponent's hand.' Act of Friendship is too complex... though it seems balanced. I like Rock Barrage the most. It gives warrior another way to end the game with a fair cost.

And Bump my idea for the last time... I decide to submit the hunter card, but I don't know which version looks better... Should I make it 2 damage? Or make it could choose the enemy minion only? Please help me to make the choice. Thanks again.

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Sorry for reply late! It's killing me that working on Saturday. And thanks for your feedback!

@CheeseETC

Defence Stance is a good way to gain more armor, however I guess weapon for warrior is more important, and this one is kind slow... I don't know how to make a choice between Fifty Shade of Purple and Cannon Fodder, they are both cool ideas with good balanced. Maybe the hunter card is better cause we could use it in a quest deck. The warlock card is a little weak in build, because warlock has so many ways to clear the battle field.

@Kovachut

Thunderstorm is kind of weird which not like a shaman class card. I guess the second part should be '... Overload (1) for each card in your opponent's hand.' Act of Friendship is too complex... though it seems balanced. I like Rock Barrage the most. It gives warrior another way to end the game with a fair cost.

 

And Bump my idea for the last time... I decide to submit the hunter card, but I don't know which version looks better... Should I make it 2 damage? Or make it could choose the enemy minion only? Please help me to make the choice. Thanks again.

 

 

I like the idea of it only targeting enemy minions, to punish them for attacking you. But I'm not sure how an arrow attack translates into damage whenever that minion attacks instead of immediate damage.

Anyway, I'm dropping my Reverse Grip idea and have one more card that I'm likely to submit. It's an arguably better Wanted!, but is that too similar to the existing card?

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It's that time, when I ask for your feedback guys. I've designed bunch of cards and I'm dry out. Hope you like them.

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Act of Friendship (my favourite from them all). It would be better to make a more visual list like so:

                   
                                                      

               Entrance: I love you. Attack: Love me. Death: *Sob* I thought...



                                                                                                                     
Rock Barrage:

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Explanation:

Thunderstorm - Some good spells for shaman pls. Obviously good vs aggro and kinda bad vs control If the opponent has 4 cards in hand, then this is an Excavated Evil. Synergy with Baku Shaman.

Rock Barrage - Taunt is cheat. Me go face. That's right, when you need reach, then you just replace your bad cards anyway and throw rocks instead.

Act of Friendship - :D, ok I'm only halve serious with this. I remember the time, when Priest was a joke class and people made lots of meme videos, including building the famous Unicorn Priest. Also before the Legion expansion I have seen people making fun of Anduin for being a sissy and I just wanted to recreate those moments. The idea is taken from Nixxiom's video.

Totem Fury - You know the card. The design may be boring and simple, but it's good in an aggro/mid-range deck, which runs lots of totems.

Start from Scrap - I wanted to design a card with a structure. I thought how the warrior class fits the builder's theme more. The card is a delayed Southsea Captain, which buffs all other minions.

• Thunderstorm: It's a simple yet powerful AoE counter to aggro decks which is great for Shaman considering that their most viable deck is weak to aggro decks. It is however quite inconsistent against control decks, and Lightning Storm and Volcano already exist, so this might get outshined by those cards.
• Rock Barrage: Oh, I love this one. One of the problems with Control Warrior is that you don't really have a finisher and all you're hoping to do is to outvalue your opponent via fatigue...which is kinda unreliable. This provides a balanced and kinda funny solution to that problem by providing another win condition to Wallet Warriors by making them tank up and try to fill their hands with cards in order to turn them into a bunch of Darkbombs to burst your opponent down at the cost of losing utility cards like Brawl that might prove more useful then "Deal 3 damage". It is somewhat concerning that with just 5 cards, you could turn your hand into a 10 mana "Deal 15 damage", so you may wanna decrease the cost to 2. Also, something about throwing rocks at your opponent is kinda comedic. :P
• Act of Friendship: This is just a treasure trove of flavour and hilarity but it's ultimately too slow and elaborate for my liking. :P
• Totem Fury: I really like this one. It's simple but powerful and promotes a deck archetype/tribe that really needs some support. It has lots of gameplay implications in the sense that you could use this as a finisher after flooding the board with totems, but it's not too ridiculous because your Totems are obviously vulnerable. However, the fact that this card exists alone would make every totem have a soft Taunt in fear of this card, so that's another cool effect it has.
• Barracks: Like your Priest Legendary spell, it's flavourful but ultimately too complex especially considering that this is a Rare card. So it's a no for me on this one.

All in all, I think you choose either Rock Barrage, Totem Fury, or Thunderstorm. I'm leaning more towards Rock Barrage because Totem Fury is less interesting than your other cards, and Thunderstorm is just another AoE card for Shaman.

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Hoo boy. Can't wait to see how many of the submissions are Quests. Your thoughts?

 

 I actually really like all three, although I think Investigate is a bit overly complicated, especially with Fandral Staghelm as Kovachut mentioned. 

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 Ignoring the grammatical errors (if you're only shuffling one Mana Bomb, you don't need the s on the end for example), I think the quest is probably the best of the three; Chilled to the Core is just insane for Freeze Mage (4 mana Freeze and Deal 1 to all enemy minions? 3 mana Freeze and deal 1 to three enemies?), Mana Bomb just isn't a fun card in the earlier parts of the game and is basically useless later on and Remulos' effect I'm not convinced goes in Druid? But it's a decent card nonetheless.

I will note that I don't think you should necessarily give up on Mana Bomb though, that flavour of detonating Mana is something I think is really cool and I think you can definitely do a really cool effect with that.

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Feedback would be cool ;)

 Final Prophecy is really awkward as a two-of as it most likely does nothing for you on the second cast. Long Range Shot 1.) Doesn't work within the rules of Hearthstone (see Voodoo Doll interactions with cards in hand) and 2.) is extremely uninteractive even if it did work. 

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Finally! :D

 

This is basically just Counterfeit Coin except can be extended over another turn.

Alright, so I've come up with three more ideas. I haven't abandoned the other three which you can find in the spoiler tag at the bottom here (Rush is a joke, don't worry, I'm not quite THAT insane). No card art yet, but I'll have a look once I get back from my meeting.

Peridot Spellstone would summon three 1/1s and Greater would summon four 1/1s.

Edit: Spoilerising. Makes car go FASTER.

Thanks for the criticism! Fandral Staghelm won't work with Investigate because it'll work like Branching Paths...and because I said so. :P

• Double Tap: I've always wondered why Shot spells haven't become a thing yet. Anywho, this is a cool idea, but since there's only 4 Shots in Standard (Multi-Shot, Arcane Shot, Explosive Shot, and Deadly Shot) and only 2 of them barely see play currently, I have a feeling that this card won't go well, especially considering that you have to actually have to hold these shots in the first place. Otherwise, you're just holding a card that does nothing.
• Lesser Peridot Spellstone: I like this! It supports Zoolock a bit more (one day you'll return old friend) and gives some more Demon synergy for Warlock. It is a bit weak when compared to Lesser Ruby Spellstone though; maybe reduce the requirement to playing 2 Demons to upgrade it?
• Balancing Scales: It's a nice little buff-synergy spell that works nicely with Sound the Bells!, but it pales in power compared to your Warlock spellstone and Blessing of Might.

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@Cogito_Ergo_Sum: I'm not even gonna say anything about the first two ones because Investigate is just so good. The flavor is a bit off for Druid but all you gotta do is find a way to improve it a little 'cus the card is already awesome as it is. Also to everyone who's worried about how it would interact with Fandral: it wouldn't 'cus it's not Choose One so chill out.

@Divoc: The effects of the first two cards seem like they would fit better in minions (though I could see the Mage one being played), and the quest is quite slow and the reward, kinda meh in my opinion.

@crasyherbz: Run only Boars and two Blessings of Might and there you have it, 3 mana deal 28 damage. The Hunter card is an interesting idea but a little too disruptive in my opinion, as you just can't play around it.

@MrUncreative: I'm really not a fan of those "do nothing" spells for Rogue. This can also work as a really bad Wild Growth, I guess, but why even bother?

@Kovachut: Totem Fury seems like the best one. I kinda like Desperate Times though; it's a really deceptive card. I could see it being totally busted in aggro (maybe not in Warlock but say, in Hunter or other very aggressive deck that actually runs out of cards) or really shitty in every deck.

@nobravery: I like this. I think you should specify whether it draws the minion from your deck or makes a copy of it like Stitched Tracker.

@ASifyouwoulD: You should specify Double Tap only works on the turn you cast it. The Spellstone is so damn hard to buff for such a small reward. Balancing Scales creates an infinite loop, and I know that's not what you intended, so you should specify "another" minion in the card text.

@YJHS2000: Cool card, I like the flavor. Powercreep on Charge. lul

@Vilegloom: Death Shock is the coolest one, though probably not very strong. Mindbent Puppet allows you to kill your opponent with Malygos as early as turn 5 depending on your draw, so I think it's a no-go.

@THWeaver: How do you Discover random cards? Marsh Fishing is a fun card but very polarizing and I'd hate to play against it AND with it just because there's so much RNG involved. Prophecy is alright I guess; I think it would fit Druid better.

Reworked my entry; now it only destroys minions that killed yours by attacking, not through effects like Vilespine, for instance. Thanks @thepowrofcheese for pointing it out.

I'm just about to finish up my submission! Your thoughts on which wording is the clearest and neatest?

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