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Du, ich mag dich. :P

Stimmt. Die neue Karte gefällt mir auch. Man spürt, dass sie wirklich der Schurkenklasse gehört. Dein Drache war auch sehr interessant, aber meiner Meinung nach sollte er weniger kosten und vielleicht mehr Statistiken haben. Vergiss nicht, dass der Jäger Probleme mit dem Kartenziehen hat. Diese Klasse hat nicht so viele gute Optionen dafür und deshalb wird man auf Schwierigkeiten treffen, wenn man den Drachen aufwerten möchte. Ähm, leider muss ich alles auf Englisch schreiben, weil Flux das von uns erfordert.
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Ok, so I wrote him the following in German:

You - I like you. True. I also like the new card. You can feel how this really belongs to the Rogue class. Your dragon was also very interesting, but imho it should have cost less and maybe have better stats. Don't forget that hunter has problems with drawing their cards. That class doesn't have that many good options and you will have a hard time, when you try to upgrade the dragon. Ehm, sadly I have to write everything in English just because Flux demands it so (look at the link above).

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Meaningless Side Quest: Of the 89 1-Cost spells, 88 are listed. Which collectible 1-Cost card is missing from the examples?

 Not sure if anyone else found it but it's Conceal from Rogue :)

... of fucking course it is.

atack opponen't deck consistency to finally make use of Azari, the cevourer

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As fun as this can be, it's actually bonkers. Everyone would want to dilute their opponent's deck with worthless cards. Imagine how the opponent draws supbar or/and really expensive 8+ minions in the early game.

And what do you mean by to finally make use of Azari, the Devourer. He is really strong in slower MUs already.

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As fun as this can be, it's actually bonkers. Everyone would want to dilute their opponent's deck with worthless cards. Imagine how the opponent draws supbar or/and really expensive 8+ minions in the early game.

And what do you mean by to finally make use of Azari, the Devourer. He is really strong in slower MUs already.

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 Hey, you are probably new to designing cards. Let me introduce you to some helpful articles (here and here). I will be quick - this card doesn't fit the priest thematics, it's kinda situational (not all classes have weapons) and there isn't a keyword called slipping. You should have used either "attack the wrong enemy" or "to miss". The last one should be explained a bit more as well.

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Life Bloom - I personally think, that this card will be broken in token dudu. You play this on turn 1, your whole board is filled with bodies, then you just use Mark of the Lotus or Power of the Wild and now you have a threatening board, even bigger due to the fact that the mushrooms buff each other.

Arcane Barrage is nice. I like how you have to sequence it (just like Giant Sand Worm).

 

Serpent Sting is also pretty nice, but a bit OP. I like it, because it reminds me of Power Word: Glory. But applying damage is more powerful than healing, because the first one puts you closer to winning the game. Hunters can be quite aggressive and every free damage they lay on the opponent is more than welcome. Since they will combine their sticky minions (dire maul) with this spell, they will land 6-9 free damage by turn 4. Imho it would be best, if your spell targeted only enemy minions. This way the opponent will have to decide if they can afford playing passive or if they have to make a trade.

I'm kinda tired to give a full explanation on the quest - but it feels it wasn't worded correctly and the reward isn't impressive enough. True that the requirements are also easy to fulfill (you make 5 trades), but the whole quest feels underwhelming.

Lastly the warlock spell is broken. Although I like the flavour behind this, just imagine how people will end the games with a draw on turn 1. If a certain hero is 15 or lower, then they will die first regardless how ahead they were on the board (you cast this, you summon a 5/5 -> a second 5/5 and the first one deals 5 damage -> a third one and the first two demons deal 10 extra damage -> 4th demon and 15 more extra damage). Do the math and see what I mean.

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I like it. Maybe it's a bit too strong, but the opponent can play around it so I think it's balanced. It feels like a Corruption with an "immediate" effect. GJ, go with it.

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I read that you made your card for the funzies. As fun as it can be, this card (On the Hunt) is just better and I would have preferred the Gibberer king (which was posted by someone back in the preference for a reference WCDE). Sorry. Nice flavour text, though.

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The first card feels the best in comparison to the other two, but I think that you can do better than that.
(browsing through the deathrattle cards I find a nice little combo with your spell - Malygos in hand, you play Kobold Illusionist + your spell)

Toad-ally Awful - as much as I love the flavour - is a super punishing card. This is 99% worse than Purify with the exception of the frigid cases, where making a totem into a taunt will matter a lot. Sorry mate, I don't want to be rude.

The 3rd card feels very situational.

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 I will be quick. I like the first card. Unlike others I don't think it's OP with spell damage, but just strong in a fair way. You don't kill all of the minions, so it's ok. Rogue won't use Malygos just to clear 3 minions, they will use the dragon's spell damagr somewhere else ;)

I like the flavour of Travel form, but it kinda looks underwhelming. Only slightly better than Savagery. About Phase - as others said, it doesn't feel like a mage card.

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 I like the first card - it's like a Blessing of Might for warlocks and a weaker Power Overwhelming (you can't use the Void Terror to consume its health), but it's still pretty nice.

Bristle? Isn't that for a fur? Why is there armor on the art? Nvm, I won't act as if English is my first language. Tbh this card is pretty nice in aggressive warrior decks. They never need their defensive HP as it doesn't contribute to their strategy.

As for the last card - as much as I love the flavour, this card is kinda underwhelming only because it's kinda situational. I know what you are going to say, but imho zoo would prefer more burst, charge minions or just Silence for the annoying taunts. Imagine having this spell vs aggro. You are constantly fighting for the board, you would need something more reactive imho.

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Preparation + Eviscerate? The rogue would enjoy this. Inb4 I think the requirements are super easy to fulfill. You just play the 2 mana burgle spell and voila, quest completed. I know that this is a turn 10 play and you won't always have the spell by then, but I just wanted to show you how easy is to complete the quest. As for the "will probably change it to 1-cost spells" part - just look at those spells in rogue's class. The reward + Sinister Strike = 15 damage in 1 turn, the reward + Southsea Deckhand (if you already have weapon equiped) + coldblood = 18 damage + 1 weapon ping. Dunno mate, it's no wonder that Glinda Crowskin only works on minions.

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Well, gratz for making your card fair to play against. Sadly I have to say that I'm not that impressed by it. For the token part - Living Roots feels stronger. It's not in standard anymore, but this had way more uses than your card. You got the tokens immediately and you could buff them as early as turn 1 (with Innervate). Anyway as for the poisonous part, I prefer when this has a body (Plague Scientist). Even though this comes 2 turns later and requires a combo to be activated, this one feels more threatening because you still get tempo over your opponent. Your card feels like it would fit in token dudu, but that deck cares more about having an explosive start and rushing down the opponent as fast as possible. Your card is kinda slow. Sorry.

Bump, modification and some new ideas... Please tell me which one you like most

'Imp' include Imp, Blood Imp, Flame Imp, Witchwood Imp, Sneaky Devil in standrad.

Also include Tiny Knight of Evil, Malchezaar's Imp, Street Trickster, Imp Gang Boss, and especially, Unlicensed Apothecary in wild.

Feedback from where I left last time up to the bottom of page 3.

@ihascorn - Flavor not that great and effect not that original.

@linkblade91 - "When a friendly character is attacked, give it +2 Attack", that way it can also protect your face (but does less damage) and isn't as useless. That's the change I would make but your version is fine as it is albeit not the most original effect ever made. Would upvote.

@LarryMoments - That's a weaker Whirlwind.

@AsIfYouWould - Powercreep on Charge (the card).

@Arnqui96 - Trick Shot is alright but needs to be reduced to 3 damage. I don't like the other two, they're either boring or complicated.

@Sillyraptor - Glad to see you followed my advice on Corpse Run! I'd put "then" on the last line for cosmetic reasons. Would Upvote

@acegameretc... - Even the Lesser version is more powerful than a single secret.

@BurgerDonut - Wtf is that

@ffinderous - Go with Serpent Sting but make it 2 damage. Would upvote. All other cards have issues.

@waterwalker - Nice card. Would upvote.

@McFartson - Wtf is that

@Vision136 - Vengeful Rattle is a nice card but is waaay to dangerous with Carnivorous Cube around. Toad-ally Awful is a fitting name because no one would play that.

@nurgling13 - Phase was made by the Chronomancer thing class in CCC#4. Shuriken is decent, but not winner material. I don't like Travel Form.

@HenryXLIII - Wtf is that

@thepowrofchesse - Nice. Would upvote.

@Redqueen - I don't like any. The first two are overpowered the last one is too situational.

@Colinthepyro - I don't see the reward.

@xowleyx - Nice card. I would cut "friendly" though to reduce card text. You would never cast this on a enemy minion anyway. Would upvote.

Finally I'm asking for a last round of feedback for my card.

Gluttony has been replaced by a new card as it was the least preferred card. "I'm into that" renamed into "Fifty Shades of Purple"

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I already gave you my feedback on the cards you just listed, but I'm spamming here, because I don't like the title of the warlock spell. I don't think that this is suitable - it's kinda unoriginal imho. The last title was better.

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