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Hi guys... I haven't made too much progress on my Merfolk class but this is what I have so far. If you can check it out and leave some feedback I'd be happy to help you with yours too :). 
The Basics if you guys forgot 

 Ok so here is the basic set (in the spoiler).

Other basic cards I have planned (but not quite worked out how it will look like) 
- An AoE defensive buff. 
- Health-for-Cards card draw spell. 
- Beefy minion- because my other two are more like removal spells currently. 
-  General single target buff (this one is simple but I'm trying to make it more interesting than Mark of the Wild) Seacost

Seacost Warden: strictly worse Aldor Peacekeeper. Im fine with general cards like aoe/dmg/card draw being similar/same or even strictly worse than existing basic cards, i have one myself, but a signature card like Aldor? Doesnt feel right.

Sink: im not sure about this one, Recycle is a card ... a horrible, bad card ... but your card not only costs 2 less, it basically makes the minion be drawn last in your opponent's deck AND you have a strong synergy with minion leaving play. By this logic your card should cost about 7 mana, but i think you could get away with 6 mby even 5, but that would be probably pushing it. 4 seems insane, since the card is basically an Assassinate, if your opponent doesnt go to fatigue.

Swim: is discard part of your class? honestly im not sure if this card would be even played like outside of an aggro deck ... its nice you get 4 cards, but discard a random card? that is SUPER bad for any deck that doesnt want to lose specific cards, mby make it shuffle one card into your deck instead?

Rest of the cards seem ok.

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Here is my basic set, if you wanna give it a look over ;-)

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Ok, guys so i finally have something coherent to show you :) If you would like a feedback from me in return (please!) include a link to your post, thanks.

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Gladiator

Current state of my Basic set (7/10):

Card descriptions:

Hack'n'Slash: Hack is an addition to the Holy Smite / Arcane Shot family. Slash is a strictly worse Consecration, but that is ok, since one of my class'es weaknesses is a weak aoe. It is still very much a decent card.

Parry: you've already seen this in Phase 1. One of the signature cards of my class in the "protect" category, with a great flavor i think :)

Back to Basics: i know this card might seem super weak and it kinda has to be to pass as 0-cost, but i still think it has its uses. If you can land it on a sizeable minion it will act as a soft-heal, preventing the minion to go face. The minion is still able to trade into your board and my class is all about minion combat, so this is by no means a pure "Can't attack. Period." effect as iv seen ppl dislike before. Thought?

Requiem of Rainbows: decent control option that has synergy with Momentum, but doesnt promote aggro style since goin face has little value. I know its a silly name, but i kinda liked it when i found it searching for some weapon names online and i actually had an art to match it, so i went with it. I might actually do silly names for all my future weapons to keep a hearthstone-y light mood :) I think it is plausible, since gladiators would definitely name their weapons, right?:D

Reckless Brawler: her weapon of choice are fists! So you get to use her weapon ... or something :D i wanted a very simple minion that would synergize with my hero power and/or Momentum and i think i got it. Most (or all) of my weapons will be rather utility weapons than pure (face) dmg, so i think gettin one more swing out of them is a good way to go.

Worthy Opponent: get it?:D Ok, so at first glance, the stats might seem preeeety carzy, right? I mean they kinda are, but then realize that Shado-Pan Rider and Knuckles are a thing. You already forgot about em, didnt you? If i were to go for 3/7, this would make the card strictly worse, which honestly might be fine, since it is a Basic minion, so i might do that if most ppl agree i should. Btw for reference, only other two 3/8 minions r Ancient of Blossoms and Lakkari Felhound.

Unrefined ideas. Open to name change, effect change or might not include at all if not received well.

Card descriptions:

Late for Practice: i know noone rly likes a card that gives minions Charge, but i had this idea of nerfing the attack of the minion. Would this make the card actually ok?

Nobody Saw Nothing: cheap card draw, or so it would seem. Its basically an Arcane Intellect when combined with my hero power. But since Momentum operates out of your hero attacking, sacrificing the hero power for a card draw could have an additional cost of not triggering Momentum effects. Depends on what you need at the time.

Target Practice: not sure about this card, it is probably weak on average even with the card draw slapped on it, but the idea behind this was to have a way to flush out those valuable minions hidden behind taunt walls so you can kill them off.

 

Helo everyone. Second time posting again. Did some changes. Check "Patch Notes" down below to find out what changed.

Class Reminder:

Cards:

 Ps Nuts//Bolts challenge is "Break" the "Mold".

Patch Notes

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Alright! I'm becoming more and more busy as I grow up. We're never getting younger...

If you want a review, presentation help, or clarification about the rules, please reply to this, and I will try to respond ASAP!

I will reiterate my question: does "more than half" means strictly more (i.e. at least 6) or half or more (i.e. at least 5) ?

 The former (i.e. "More than half" means at least six).

 All right, another quick question: If a card technically fits on two lines but you want to put line breaks in there to make it look nicer, can it count for the simple challenge?

Also, gonna drop my set here (will return reviews and maybe do some myself when I get home). I screwed up some capitalisation on some of them, just ignore it for now xD

 

 

 

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So I have a few cards that solves both the "Two Names One Saying" challenge, and the "0/10-Cost Card" challenge. I'm unsure of which to pick for the 10-Cost, though.

I fear I might have added too much card draw to my Basic Set, 3/4 cards with draw cards. (Though all of them add something unique, like healing, changing the cost or only drawing minions)

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Helo everyone. Second time posting again. Did some changes. Check "Patch Notes" down below to find out what changed.

Class Reminder:

Cards:

 

 Ps Nuts//Bolts challenge is "Break" the "Mold".

Patch Notes

• Pelt Stones and Rain Boulders reworded for OCDs.
• Nature Elemental art and name has been changed. Elemental Tribe removed.
• Aftershock Elemental stats from 5/5 to 4/5
• Mountain Elemental art and name has been changed. Stats from 4/8 to 4/7
• Cursed Monolith damage reduced from 6 to 5 and summoned tokens stats from 4/4 to 3/3
• Additional notes: Mold and Crushing Arms are placed under watchlist for nerf
• All cards have unique tokens, thou they are not showcased here.

 

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Alright! I'm becoming more and more busy as I grow up. We're never getting younger...

If you want a review, presentation help, or clarification about the rules, please reply to this, and I will try to respond ASAP!

I will reiterate my question: does "more than half" means strictly more (i.e. at least 6) or half or more (i.e. at least 5) ?

 The former (i.e. "More than half" means at least six).

 All right, another quick question: If a card technically fits on two lines but you want to put line breaks in there to make it look nicer, can it count for the simple challenge?

Also, gonna drop my set here (will return reviews and maybe do some myself when I get home). I screwed up some capitalisation on some of them, just ignore it for now xD

 

 

 

 i don't think you have to worry about the wording, you already respect that challenge; the cards seem all fine to me, maybe slash is a little overcosted;

here's my basic set:

 I'm leaving Bunker Up! as it is, i think it's stronh enough; I'm moving Flasbang to a future set, prob. making it a secret. (Click to see here card)

 I think Slash is fine. It might be slightly weak but it's strong and useful enough for basic. I also like the symmetry with Burn, which is why I dropped it from (3) to (2) Attack. Also, +3 Attack is deceptively strong, since my class has so much synergy with Hero Attack (and a crapton of related burst that I don't want to make too easily abusable). I might bump it back up later but probably not. Also, I only have 5 cards with 2 or less lines, which is why I need another one (because STRICTLY more ;-;).

Is BFH short for Big Fucking Hammer? If it is you might want to change the name to something else xD. I think there's no swearing allowed (even if it's censored, kinda).

Hot Iron seems a little too swingy, since a 2/4 weapon is really really bad and a 4/4 weapon is pretty damn good. IDK how you can change it though, especially without butchering the flavour. Maybe make it like a 3 mana 2 durability thing, since that makes attack buffs less impactful. 

Get Over Here! Seems really strong with the Big Fucking Hammer (that's surprisingly satisfying to say for some reason). 6 mana 21 damage should not be a thing. Like it just shouldn't, no matter the circumstance xD. Maybe limit it to minions so it can only be used as removal. If you do you can drop the cost to (0) since it'd be an even worse Savagery at 1.

Repair seems a little overcosted. Also the art is too similar to Tongs I think. Like they're basically the same xD. Same composition, same colour, same tool... slightly different apron?

Scrap Storm's art is really weird as well. I can't see what's going on at all.

Bunker Up is... uh... it makes me uncomfortable but I think it's fair - if not actually a little weak. If you do drop Get Over Here! to (0), then I'd suggest you drop this one's cost slightly and also lower the Armor slightly. (like... say... 8 mana gain 16). Or something. IDK.

Otherwise, it's really cool! And flavour-wise, I'm glad a class like yours didn't immediately make me think that seems like a warrior card... and that could also be a warrior card... wow these all look like warrior cards... which is a bonus - although now that I really stop and think about it a lot of them could be warrior cards, which is a little disconcerting. You might want to watch out for that as you move on.

 

Guys i think im cursed. Why is it that everything i post something here, id be the last person on the page...

Man, I've been having a hard time trying to figure out my class' basic set. I think I got a pretty good idea though.

Reminder of my class

The ones I'm sure of

Cool ones I think fit, but not sure if they fit in the basic set

Please, I'm struggling so much

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If you want a review, presentation help, or clarification about the rules, please reply to this, and I will try to respond ASAP!

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I've replaced 2 cards in my basic set:



Runic Dominator showcases the better while ahead, worse while behind aspect. Gonna be fun making a spell heavy control class that tries to keep ahead on bored :P

Peace Treaty showcases the classes pseudo healing effects (there will be more!) that tend to not be all that helpful if your already on low health, more preemptive than anything. Plus it feels more basic than Book Bind which will be moved to classic.