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I gave the 6th challenge another go and made Hack and Slash reference. I changed my AOE card (Clean Sweep) to Slash and made a Hack card, basically from the Holy Smite, Arcane Shot family. Didnt realize this until after i made it, but looking at it now, the Hack being single target 2 dmg and Slash aoe 2 dmg kinda fits the theme nicely as well :) What do you think? (i admit its kinda bland, but its not that bad, is it?:/)

My previous idea, Practice makes Perfect:

i'm bumping those two cards since i forgot to put them in the previous post:

the other cards:

 i'd also like some feedback on the classic card i've made thus far; if my calculations are corect, the week when submisions for that phase are live, i'll have finals, so i want to make a good chunck of it right now.

 i might repost this in the discussion topic once it goes live.

@Sinti, while i think practice and perfect are more interesting, i think hack and slash goes better with your class; i sugest you go with the latter, but keep the former in the back of your head.

@NOVEX0R, yeah, you're right about spell book, there were some other cards on this thread that had specific draw, which is why i balanced it around that, but it's up to you how you do it. 

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i'm bumping those two cards since i forgot to put them in the previous post:

the other cards:

i've moved the security system to the classic set and added the apprentice, if #5 gets picked up, i'll change her for something else.

i was also thinking of changing the 5 damage on strike to "deal 2 damage adjecent minions", since i dont have an AOE, what do you think?

 i'd also like some feedback on the classic card i've made thus far; if my calculations are corect, the week when submisions for that phase are live, i'll have finals, so i want to make a good chunck of it right now.

Sharp and Sharpen are basically my old keyword, Active (click to see), i just decided to change it; what do you think?

Sir Anduin Lothar equips a weapon whenever your old one is destroyed, except when you replace your old one, and makes sure it stays Sharp; if anyone knows a notable blacksmith in wow, i'm open to sugestions. (please ignore the mech tag, everyone knows lothar is a murloc, i just put the wrong one)

The rest of the cards should be pretty easy to understand.

 i might repost this in the discussion topic once it goes live.

@Sinti, while i think practice and perfect are more interesting, i think hack and slash goes better with your class; i sugest you go with the latter, but keep the former in the back of your head.

@NOVEX0R, yeah, you're right about spell book, there were some other cards on this thread that had specific draw, which is why i balanced it around that, but it's up to you how you do it.

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@NiRaSt

When you make a post like that, it's always helpful to put a spoiler with your Hero Power and custom Keywords at the start.

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i'm bumping those two cards since i forgot to put them in the previous post:

the other cards:

i've moved the security system to the classic set and added the apprentice, if #5 gets picked up, i'll change her for something else.

i was also thinking of changing the 5 damage on strike to "deal 2 damage adjecent minions", since i dont have an AOE, what do you think?

 i'd also like some feedback on the classic card i've made thus far; if my calculations are corect, the week when submisions for that phase are live, i'll have finals, so i want to make a good chunck of it right now.

Sharp and Sharpen are basically my old keyword, Active (click to see), i just decided to change it; what do you think?

Sir Anduin Lothar equips a weapon whenever your old one is destroyed, except when you replace your old one, and makes sure it stays Sharp; if anyone knows a notable blacksmith in wow, i'm open to sugestions. (please ignore the mech tag, everyone knows lothar is a murloc, i just put the wrong one)

The rest of the cards should be pretty easy to understand.

 i might repost this in the discussion topic once it goes live.

@Sinti, while i think practice and perfect are more interesting, i think hack and slash goes better with your class; i sugest you go with the latter, but keep the former in the back of your head.

@NOVEX0R, yeah, you're right about spell book, there were some other cards on this thread that had specific draw, which is why i balanced it around that, but it's up to you how you do it.

What is B.F.H. anywaY? Big F*** Hammer? If so that isnt rly HS appropriate now is it :P

Hot Iron seems too strong for a card, let alone basic card. It will theoretically be Assassin's Blade or better 2/3 times.

One of your Classic cards seem to be deleted from imgur.

Quick Reflexes: the wording is fine, but holy f*** how many itterations of "___ your hero is attacked ___" r there lol :P What is Sharpen? I didnt see any mention of it in your Phase 1 sumibssion either.

Eh, Get Behind Me: i like this one.

Prototype: Explosive Trap and Harvest Golem: i dont like these two very much, feels way too similar to their originals and also seeing so many Prototype cards, feels like ur goin a little bit hard on the theme. Mby at least make some original ones like Prototype: Security System.

 

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@NiRaSt

Repair feels way to expensive to me. Maybe considering your other cards it isn't, can't tell. Feels more like 2 mana.
If you want to make Strike splash damage then it has to target a minion. 'Deal 3 damage to a minion. I you have a weapon equipped, deal also 2 damage to adjacent ones.' Don't know if you want that.
Bunker Up! feels little weird but well dunno. Maybe add something like suggested before. Card draw etc.
Rest of Basic seems fine.

Isn't Prototyp: Secrurity System pretty nuts? Playing this on turn 1 or 2 and your opponent has no answer and you summon a fatty?

To the rest I don't know what Sharpen is...

Well, we have our challenges! Discussion and Submission will be up shortly.

i was expenctin #3 and #6 to be picked, but i wasn't expecting #1 to be in the lead.

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@NiRaSt

When you make a post like that, it's always helpful to put a spoiler with your Hero Power and custom Keywords at the start.

 you can click the image on my signature and it gets you to the entry on phase one, and if you click on Active in that post, it opens a new tab with the keyword.

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i'm bumping those two cards since i forgot to put them in the previous post:

the other cards:

i've moved the security system to the classic set and added the apprentice, if #5 gets picked up, i'll change her for something else.

i was also thinking of changing the 5 damage on strike to "deal 2 damage adjecent minions", since i dont have an AOE, what do you think?

 i'd also like some feedback on the classic card i've made thus far; if my calculations are corect, the week when submisions for that phase are live, i'll have finals, so i want to make a good chunck of it right now.

Sharp and Sharpen are basically my old keyword, Active (click to see), i just decided to change it; what do you think?

Sir Anduin Lothar equips a weapon whenever your old one is destroyed, except when you replace your old one, and makes sure it stays Sharp; if anyone knows a notable blacksmith in wow, i'm open to sugestions. (please ignore the mech tag, everyone knows lothar is a murloc, i just put the wrong one)

The rest of the cards should be pretty easy to understand.

 i might repost this in the discussion topic once it goes live.

@Sinti, while i think practice and perfect are more interesting, i think hack and slash goes better with your class; i sugest you go with the latter, but keep the former in the back of your head.

@NOVEX0R, yeah, you're right about spell book, there were some other cards on this thread that had specific draw, which is why i balanced it around that, but it's up to you how you do it.

What is B.F.H. anywaY? Big F*** Hammer? If so that isnt rly HS appropriate now is it :P

Hot Iron seems too strong for a card, let alone basic card. It will theoretically be Assassin's Blade or better 2/3 times.

One of your Classic cards seem to be deleted from imgur.

Quick Reflexes: the wording is fine, but holy f*** how many itterations of "___ your hero is attacked ___" r there lol :P What is Sharpen? I didnt see any mention of it in your Phase 1 sumibssion either.

Eh, Get Behind Me: i like this one.

Prototype: Explosive Trap and Harvest Golem: i dont like these two very much, feels way too similar to their originals and also seeing so many Prototype cards, feels like ur goin a little bit hard on the theme. Mby at least make some original ones like Prototype: Security System.

 

 What do you mean? B.F.H. stand for "Big Fat Hammer". What were you thinking about? ;P

Yeah, i think i'll make Hot Iron cost 5.

This one was missing (i deleted the original because it had the mech tag): 

 Plenty; there are plenty of iterations of "___ your hero is attacked ___" iterations; Sharpen is Active, i just changed the name, what do you think, is it better? (click here to see the keyword).

yeah, that was the idea with prototype, existing cards with a little twist on it, but don't worry, i'm not making any more for the classic.

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Aaaand #6 is out. Non-native speakers are all screwed.