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I like Undying Spirit, but I think you can word these cards differently. Either "Whenever your hero attacks, Overload: (1)" or "Whenever your hero attacks, Overload a Mana Crystal." Overload in terms of wording hasn't been done like that before but I think it makes enough sense. For Undying Spirit I think it should be "Whenever this takes fatal damage, prevent it and Overload: (2)" or "take Overload: (2)" or "gain" or "get". You could make it a 2/3 but with the current wording your opponent can just shut you down by putting down almost any minions and damaging this multiple times. Freezing it as well— really have to hedge your bets with the current incarnation.

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Thoughts? Might need to be 3 mana, but theres not many cards that work with the effect, but still might be too strong.

 The cards we're talking about here are Wild Growth, Darnassus Aspirant, Jade Blossom, and Grove Tender. It's a very limited pool, so the stats are fine. Should capitalize Mana Crystal though, for formatting purposes.

Also @everybody: I've posted ~9 ideas so far and only got feedback on 3. Could I get feedback on the other 6 please? This is the sort of thing that keeps happening to me X_X

 I really like this card its a class card that is only op in situational circumstances, your card is also a great intensive to play cards like Felguard along side it which are not presently run but might be run with this card. 

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Thoughts? Might need to be 3 mana, but theres not many cards that work with the effect, but still might be too strong.

 The cards we're talking about here are Wild Growth, Darnassus Aspirant, Jade Blossom, and Grove Tender. It's a very limited pool, so the stats are fine. Should capitalize Mana Crystal though, for formatting purposes.

Also @everybody: I've posted ~9 ideas so far and only got feedback on 3. Could I get feedback on the other 6 please? This is the sort of thing that keeps happening to me X_X

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Ok new idea:

The idea here is that one of your mana crystals is permanently transformed into a Soulstone (until you use it). The transformed Mana Crystal will have a different graphic so you know it's active. This means you can only have a max of 9 mana crystals. When your hero dies, the soulstone is used up and you're resurrected with 10 Health. You can then have 10 mana crystals again. The idea is thematically similar to my Marl Wormthorn idea:ystal.

Im pretty sure that "when your hero dies", the game is over. It would have to read as Ice Block ... prevent the damage, so your hero doesnt die in a first place. Also what would happen if u had two soulstones at the same time? Would they activate simultaneously or not? kinda non new player friendly. All that being said, seems too strong, sure u give up one mana crystal and playin 10 or 9 cost cards, but the benefit is huge.

 It's not as strong as Ice Block. You can be damaged again immediately after this. It's basically just a delayed 10 mana heal (slightly better, but not by much). I also don't think it needs to be worded like Ice Block. If a card were released with this wording, everyone would know what it means. Obviously, you wouldn't lose the game if your hero died while this was out. It's also about as new player friendly as a shitload of existing cards that aren't completely explained with their text. 

Also, with two of them out, only 1 would be used up when you die. 

I would really appreciate it if you could shed some light on these questions i have about my card.

My questions are, Is the card over-powered or under-powered? Is there to much text on the card? Do you like the card?

I had to resubmit the card due to grammar errors.

The idea is cool and the card isn't to op but i cannot imagine how salty i would get over this card. 

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@SvagoCorp shouldnt say "this turn..." at first also?

I like that you gain a mana crystal instead of gain the coin.

This is my first idea this week, how it looks?

 

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 I posted 1 idea and only got feedback on 0 of them :)

 

Here it is, again. Please give some feedback on this one.

I feel like this shouldn't be a hunter card, but also this is way too powerful to be a Druid card. I'm not sure what Hunter needs ramp for (we have midrange that works well enough to survive to 10 mana most of the time, and it costs enough to make it late ramp anyway), but this in Druid would just bork ramp druid entirely, so I don't really know how to evaluate it. If it was an Elemental in Shaman and instead had the effect "Deathrattle: Gain Mana Crystals and Overload equal to this minion's Attack" as a 4 mana 2/5 I could buy it for sure.

Here are all the cards I've put up— tiny for added readability ;)

It's not nine cards, but it's close!

 

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 I posted 1 idea and only got feedback on 0 of them :)

 

Here it is, again. Please give some feedback on this one.

I feel like this shouldn't be a hunter card, but also this is way too powerful to be a Druid card. I'm not sure what Hunter needs ramp for (we have midrange that works well enough to survive to 10 mana most of the time, and it costs enough to make it late ramp anyway), but this in Druid would just bork ramp druid entirely, so I don't really know how to evaluate it. If it was an Elemental in Shaman and instead had the effect "Deathrattle: Gain Mana Crystals and Overload equal to this minion's Attack" as a 4 mana 2/5 I could buy it for sure.

Here are all the cards I've put up— tiny for added readability ;)

It's not nine cards, but it's close!

 

Ancestral Influence: i thought this was a joke card lol :P dont do that :P

Impatient Felguard: flavor is cool, but this is basically a 50/50 good/bad card, doesnt feel that good overall.

Mana Giant: seems fine.

Skywrath: like i said before, seems very underpowered.

Ancient Power: like i said before, seems very overpowered and not sure how it would actually work (do u want to go over 10 mna? dont think u can)

Eruin: like i said before, i like this one.

Infusekin: ehm ... what? 2/2 for a destroyed mana crystal doesnt seem like a very good deal.

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Here is the new wording for my cards, how do they look now ?:) Well the last one didnt need rewording, but i ll put it here for feedback from other ppl sake.

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I would really appreciate it if you could shed some light on these questions i have about my card.

My questions are, Is the card over-powered or under-powered? Is there to much text on the card? Do you like the card?

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Ok new idea:

The idea here is that one of your mana crystals is permanently transformed into a Soulstone (until you use it). The transformed Mana Crystal will have a different graphic so you know it's active. This means you can only have a max of 9 mana crystals. When your hero dies, the soulstone is used up and you're resurrected with 10 Health. You can then have 10 mana crystals again. The idea is thematically similar to my Marl Wormthorn idea:ystal.

Im pretty sure that "when your hero dies", the game is over. It would have to read as Ice Block ... prevent the damage, so your hero doesnt die in a first place. Also what would happen if u had two soulstones at the same time? Would they activate simultaneously or not? kinda non new player friendly. All that being said, seems too strong, sure u give up one mana crystal and playin 10 or 9 cost cards, but the benefit is huge.

 It's not as strong as Ice Block. You can be damaged again immediately after this. It's basically just a delayed 10 mana heal (slightly better, but not by much). I also don't think it needs to be worded like Ice Block. If a card were released with this wording, everyone would know what it means. Obviously, you wouldn't lose the game if your hero died while this was out. It's also about as new player friendly as a shitload of existing cards that aren't completely explained with their text. 

Also, with two of them out, only 1 would be used up when you die. 

Hmm, i didnt think of it that way, ok mby ur right. Tho 10 heal for 1 mana is still quite a lot, especially since u either dont have to play it right away to lock yourself out or in most decks u wouldnt rly need those mana crystals anyway and would be relatively comfortable at 8. I would go to at least 2 mana with the card.

@teknician: i didnt see more than 3 cards from u, post them again then ;-)

 I think you're forgetting that you are actually destroying a mana crystal to get this. You need to transform one of your current mana crystals into a soulstone, and you don't get it back. That's worth quite a bit.

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Ok new idea:

The idea here is that one of your mana crystals is permanently transformed into a Soulstone (until you use it). The transformed Mana Crystal will have a different graphic so you know it's active. This means you can only have a max of 9 mana crystals. When your hero dies, the soulstone is used up and you're resurrected with 10 Health. You can then have 10 mana crystals again. The idea is thematically similar to my Marl Wormthorn idea:ystal.

Im pretty sure that "when your hero dies", the game is over. It would have to read as Ice Block ... prevent the damage, so your hero doesnt die in a first place. Also what would happen if u had two soulstones at the same time? Would they activate simultaneously or not? kinda non new player friendly. All that being said, seems too strong, sure u give up one mana crystal and playin 10 or 9 cost cards, but the benefit is huge.

 It's not as strong as Ice Block. You can be damaged again immediately after this. It's basically just a delayed 10 mana heal (slightly better, but not by much). I also don't think it needs to be worded like Ice Block. If a card were released with this wording, everyone would know what it means. Obviously, you wouldn't lose the game if your hero died while this was out. It's also about as new player friendly as a shitload of existing cards that aren't completely explained with their text. 

Also, with two of them out, only 1 would be used up when you die.

Hmm, i didnt think of it that way, ok mby ur right. Tho 10 heal for 1 mana is still quite a lot, especially since u either dont have to play it right away to lock yourself out or in most decks u wouldnt rly need those mana crystals anyway and would be relatively comfortable at 8. I would go to at least 2 mana with the card.

@teknician: i didnt see more than 3 cards from u, post them again then ;-)

 I think you're forgetting that you are actually destroying a mana crystal to get this. You need to transform one of your current mana crystals into a soulstone, and you don't get it back. That's worth quite a bit.