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Ok, what the fuck. I've posted feedback for 4 people (they've all gotten notifications for it) and asked for feedback on a card I made. I come back and 2 pages have gone by and no one has commented on the damn thing. This is the sort of thing I get pissed off with, especially when the people who crowd it out are people who haven't left any feedback themselves but then they post their cards without contributing anything else. 

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Ok, what the fuck. I've posted feedback for 4 people (they've all gotten notifications for it) and asked for feedback on a card I made. I come back and 2 pages have gone by and no one has commented on the damn thing. This is the sort of thing I get pissed off with, especially when the people who crowd it out are people who haven't left any feedback themselves but then they post their cards without contributing anything else. 

 This is the step where you usually would bump your submission idea ^^ It happens to everyone don't rage lol.

Repost it so me and others can look at it again. Sometimes things get hectic and cards get missed.

 I know, it's just that this has happened to me specifically about 8 times in the past two weeks, whereas everyone else gets their cards reviewed pretty quickly. Something about my posts is invisible.

The idea is it has twice the stats Mistress of Pain does, and is flexible enough to act as a free Innervate with damage attached. If it takes damage on your opponents turn, you gain mana crystals, but they go away when your turn starts.

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Ok, what the fuck. I've posted feedback for 4 people (they've all gotten notifications for it) and asked for feedback on a card I made. I come back and 2 pages have gone by and no one has commented on the damn thing. This is the sort of thing I get pissed off with, especially when the people who crowd it out are people who haven't left any feedback themselves but then they post their cards without contributing anything else. 

 This is the step where you usually would bump your submission idea ^^ It happens to everyone don't rage lol.

Repost it so me and others can look at it again. Sometimes things get hectic and cards get missed.

 I know, it's just that this has happened to me specifically about 8 times in the past two weeks, whereas everyone else gets their cards reviewed pretty quickly. Something about my posts is invisible.

The idea is it has twice the stats Mistress of Pain does, and is flexible enough to act as a free Innervate with damage attached. If it takes damage on your opponents turn, you gain mana crystals, but they go away when your turn starts.

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Some pretty simple ideas, I based icecrown frost mage on Fallen Hero. What do you think?

 The only one I don't like is Scourge Rider, simply because it doesn't have the same effect as Fallen Hero is trying to get you to do, and what you're trying to emulate with the other two cards. I think Icecrown Frost Mage is the best out of them because it's like the reverse of Fallen Hero and the effect isn't too powerful so it works out

 

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Here's a prospective card I had:

Yep, I know. It's a bit cheap. It's either double Mistress of Pain or an Innervate on your turn that helps ramp you up and put out high threats in the mid game. Buffing this minion with Mark of Y'Shaarj is prettttty good, even though it's not a beast. I was debating just turning it into a new keyword, Manasteal, but you don't want to assume people know what that means. Art may change, but give your thoughts please!

 Thanks for the feedback, I also was more keen on the "icecrown" minions as they followed around the same mechanic of using your Hero Power. That also why I made Icecrown Enchanter 3 mana, so you can drop it on turn 3 after your Hero Power, I would also like to see Weapon Rouge become a viable archetype.

I made  Icecrown Frost Mage a 2 2/3 because I wanted a Fallen Hero's River Crocolisk :3

 

As for your card, I really like the idea but the wording seems a little off for a Choose one card. Like you said, I would make it a keyword, but I dunno how it would affect people looking at it. You can do it like: "after this minion attacks gain two mana crystals this turn only" I know it would partially cut out the idea of buffing its attack to get more mana but it feels better on that type of Card. I would do your version if it wasn't a Choose one card. Forget what I said! New idea! Make it 5 mana an throw out the Choose one and make it Alley Armorsmith like, maybe even make it 7 hp of you want more resemblance. Hope I helped 

I know that this card is far superior to Silverback Patriarch, but I think the card to compare this to is Hot Spring Guardian. Hot Spring Guardian is a guaranteed 3 Health while Gaint Sand Leech is a delayed, unreliable, and inconsistent heal.

I created this image by photoshopping Infested Wolf and combining with the consept of Dreadsteed. Legends say these creatures are formed by the mixed ashes of a wolf pack which died from a forest fire caused by the campers. Reborned from their ashes, they are now the protectors of forests and beasts. Their fire only burns the ones disrespectful to the nature while their ashes brings life to wastelands. 

If control hunter is gonna be a thing, he needs a way to gain life while having synergy with the beasts so I think this is the best way. Also you don't need to use this card in your deck. It is a 4 mana cost card so it can be summoned from the ashes of a Zombeast ! It is also powerful with Dinomancy.

Edit: Did submission thread open? It's been 2 days so I had to ask to make sure.

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Is this too strong? I was considering making it a token from a legendary minion.

Yes it's too strong. You make Fireblast sad :(

 

How about this? It's not a direct powercreep from Fireblast as you are punished the more times you use it per turn. I think it now promotes a thoughtful use of resources, and it also gives shaman a much needed tool to supplement its random board clears in Lightning Storm, Volcano, and Elemental Destruction albeit with a steep price. 

On a different note, does the art fit? I'm not sure whether this or the previous art works better, but I'm open to finding different art if you guys think neither looks particularly good.

Okay, I think I have one idea now.

Thoughts?

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Comment for each group of cards since my post on page 9:

 

@kegstand...: None of them are exceptional but Frenzied Vampire Bat is the most interesting and flavorful of the three. IMO it doesn't need to deal damage to other firendly beast

 

Hi! Thank you for the feedback! I'm still pretty new to the custom card scene, so I really appreciate any review I can get. I've already submitted, but I don't think you have, so...

Vampiric Touch: I think we are of different minds about giving one class's WoW spell to a different class in Hearthstone. You could . . . just rename it? It seems OK in terms of balance--useful on curve or as a combo piece later on--though as a matter of personal preference I've never been wild about Curse of Rafaam-type cards.

Mark of the Plague: I like this one a lot more, particularly because of its utility, providing removal (something druid sorely lacks) or healing as needed. Feels very versatile and also has good flavor. Would upvote regardless, but have you tried looking for plague bear art? Something like that would be more consistent with the card and maybe not that hard to find.

I know I've already submitted, but what are your thoughts on this?

I sort of doubt it would see play, since it's similar to Carrion Grub, which also didn't see play, but I do like how the presence of Houndmaster and Crackling Razormaw would punish players who ignore it. At 5-mana, it can combo with the new Build-A-Beast hero power. What do you think? 

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Is this too strong? I was considering making it a token from a legendary minion.

Yes it's too strong. You make Fireblast sad :(

 

How about this? It's not a direct powercreep from Fireblast as you are punished the more times you use it per turn. I think it now promotes a thoughtful use of resources, and it also gives shaman a much needed tool to supplement its random board clears in Lightning Storm, Volcano, and Elemental Destruction albeit with a steep price. 

On a different note, does the art fit? I'm not sure whether this or the previous art works better, but I'm open to finding different art if you guys think neither looks particularly good.

 

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Any feedback for this one? Does it deserve to be a Legendary minion?

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Is this too strong? I was considering making it a token from a legendary minion.

Yes it's too strong. You make Fireblast sad :(

 

How about this? It's not a direct powercreep from Fireblast as you are punished the more times you use it per turn. I think it now promotes a thoughtful use of resources, and it also gives shaman a much needed tool to supplement its random board clears in Lightning Storm, Volcano, and Elemental Destruction albeit with a steep price. 

On a different note, does the art fit? I'm not sure whether this or the previous art works better, but I'm open to finding different art if you guys think neither looks particularly good.

 

 It's a cool and well balanced card. I think making it 2 mana +overload makes it kind of slow, but making it one mana will be a directly "Powercreep" of Fireblast (that also sinergizes with Tunnel Trogg).
The first art looks weird so keep it out, the second art you're using seems ok but if you have the chance change it

Any feedback for this one? Does it deserve to be a Legendary minion?