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Quote from AngryChicken >>

This was in an earlier competition but I may use a similar idea. I always liked the possibility of interesting deck interactions.

 I really like the design but I don't think there's enough minion healing in  Priest right now to justify putting this card in your deck (there's Health increase, but those don't synergy with Northshire Cleric, which is a card you'd want to draw early anyway. 

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As always, I return feedback.

Immune during your turn means you can safely use Lifetap or play Flame Imp, Pit Lord, Bloodbloom, Chittering Tunneler, Cho'gall without downside etc If you draw this due to Coldlight Oracle or the like, you get a free iceblock. Needs to be killed to actually restore health, so it's a bit slower, but it only costs 1 mana and can be sacrificed by board clears, Ravenous Pterrordax or Void Terror.

 This card is a lot harder to activate with the remove of Power Overwhelming in Standard and the reward is only good in control decks, which frequently want to give Taunt or buff to bigger minions.

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Let's make Ramp Druid great again.Amazing synergy with Giant Anaconda.

 I really hate this design because it discourage this card from ever being played before turn 10.

Quote from Cogito_Ergo_Sum >>

Oh, dang. RNG based cards. Not my forte. At all. Regardless, here goes nothing! Your thoughts? Should I improve them or trash them?

(Notice how Slow does not mention that you draw a card. Also, Slow is based off of this mage spell from WoW.)

The best card is obviously Last Hope. Good body and effect while not completely useless in control match up, Druid don't have enough late-game potential to play Enervate while Slow is just too hard and random to get value out of.

 

Bump my card:

Okay, so I modified my Core idea, and made it a "bit" different, I´ll explain below.

So now, why did you changed Uzzukis dormant status? You may ask, so well, basicly, Uzzukis is the "Traveled of Time" (Actually should have changed to Traveled from Time but whatever, for last changes sake) so when it loses ALL its machinery, the time actuallity time reality system fails and he returns to the past, where he found those cores and got him into the future, when "he" finds those cores, he returns to fly again, that´s basically a bit of flavour and another thing.

Quote from FallenPiano >>

Quickened spells are the same as the original spell, but after you play them you draw a card (even if the spell was countered). They glow in the same way that Shifter Zerus does while transformed, except yellow rather than blue, with a tooltip explaining the extra effect. If this idea seems worth it, I'll try to come up with a visual example. So the effect is essentially a slower, more value-oriented version of Gadgetzan Auctioneer.

The art/name and stats/costs are totally subject to change, I'm just curious to see if people think there's any mileage in the idea or if its too slow/breaks the game in some way I haven't realised yet.

Any thoughts? As ever, I'll try to return feedback.

Quote from Cogito_Ergo_Sum >>

Huh, neat! Compared to Violet Illusionist and Runic Egg (Draw a card = 1 mana = Heal for 5), this card balancing is okay. (Although, you might want to decrease the heal because it's a bit power creepy compared to Runic Egg). However, because of the RNG factor, I don't really think this card is as reliable as Violet Illusionist (you can play her at the exact time you want her), which barely saw any play. Also, out of all the cards you've mentioned that deal damage, only Flame Imp and maybe Bloodbloom see actual play. The card's RNG factor makes it too unreliable to put any damage dealing cards in our deck since Warlock currently has no good heals, and as such, the damage dealing cards themselves are very bad. If there were good self-damage dealing cards, I'd understand, but once again, you'll most likely draw these cards by themselves, and they're more detrimental than helpful. Really, if anything, I think the card is more focused on the Deathrattle than the actual draw ability because it is easier to synerize with it. Regardless, I like the idea...but somehow (And I think this is going to be major problem with many cards in this competiton), you have to either control the RNG or make the effect good in general situations. Not specific situations.

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 I get what @AUgz is saying. Basically this won't work if you Tap into it because you'll take the damage before the card is drawn. That being said its perfectly fine to tap if this was a normal draw and you could still use your HP

As for the minion itself I agree that it feels like a weapon because its an item that you'd hold. Maybe consider a 1/1 weapon version of this? Ofc if it was that you'd need to lower the healing a bit (maybe just 4)

@LarryMoments I think that your card is weak, i mean its a 2 2/3 ... do i really want to slow my game for that minion?, also it doesn't feel very priest thematically. I assume that the "returned to time" thing its the reason why looks like a dinosaur in token form, but is a mech in normal form, thats cool, but maybe yo should be more graphic with the art about that.

Re post my cards!

Quote from Zence >>

Xaril, Poisoned Mind also had this effect, and if i'm not mistaken, besides Toshley is the only minion like that, so I feel like its fine (plus imo it makes the card look a bit more flashy lol)

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@Zukuu

Thanks for your review. While I agree that its usually better to play this than the spell, you were also right about the unreliability, which was why I was okay with it as is. Also, Rator wouldn't be an issue, because looking at the watermark you'll see its a TGT minion ;). As for both Battlecry and Deathrattle, Xaril, Poisoned Mind also had this effect, and if i'm not mistaken, besides Toshley is the only minion like that, so I feel like its fine (plus imo it makes the card look a bit more flashy lol)

Quote from Demonxz95 >>

I love that you just say "As always, I return feedback" and everyone rushes in to give feedback to you because they want feedback on their card. To be honest, who can really blame them?

The healing is fine compared to Mistress of Mixtures. Immunity is always nice, but it doesn't feel right as an "on-draw" effect. It feels like it would make more sense as a Battlecry or a passive effect. Of course then, it wouldn't be eligible. Basically what Cogito said is an accurate representation of how I feel about this card, which is part in fault of the competition as the cards made this way are naturally going to be swingy and very random and by nature, some very weird cards. Self-Immunity and Egg-like minions have always been most prevalent in Warlock (and Druid for Eggs, but that's beside the point), so you've succeeded there. It's a very interesting card that would need a lot of discussion.

I don't really need the feedback that much but more opinions are always appreciated. My card is in the Spoiler if you, or anyone else reading this post wants to review it.

Quote from LinkFan001 >>

My last idea might have been a little overpowered, so I scaled it back. Grinder mage, let's go! 

Quote from HenryXLII >>

Very first, Very rough idea