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So, which is best ?

If all of them suck be honest pls

The only problem I see is that Short Circuit should say "opponent's deck" instead of "enemy deck", so it goes with the wording of cards like Iron Juggernaut, Beneath the Grounds and Thoughtsteal. Draw a card is also on its own sentence for tokens like Burrowing Mine, Ambush! or Ancient Curse, but that might be a bit too nit-picky. I do like these ideas though. EDIT: Forgot this, I was wrong.

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So, which is best ?

If all of them suck be honest pls

 

 Firebombs - Really neat effect, although I don't want to give an okay go just yet because this curb-stomps Greater Arcane Missiles value-wise

I think Short Circuit is kinda broken, yes you can give the Ambush! argument, but honestly this effect is much more enfeebling than that one. Maybe only overload 2.

Shadow Mend - while this is a cool idea, the fact that Greater Healing Potion isn't that much more of a sacrifice, and this is also something you don't want out of Lyra, I don't really like it that mcuh.

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So, which is best ?

If all of them suck be honest pls

Shadow Mend seems strangely underpowered to me. Greater Healing Potion is a flexible heal for 12 costing 4 mana - with this you sacrifice a lot of flexibility but you rarely use heals of that size on minions anyway. However the potion already sees little to no play and considering that the 10 damage mine you get from this card seems like quite the punishment.

If i get Firebombs right, they trigger two times: once when you draw them; once when you play them. That is balanced i guess, but the almost complete inability to control the use of this also feels kinda... weird. For one tick you can at least make sure it goes off at the right time, but the other one is entirely out of your control.

Short Circuit however feels a little like the Shaman equivalent of Beneath the Grounds and i quite like that. Especially because it doesn't lock your enemy's mana crystals right away but gives him a turn to react to the "Bzzt!"-draw and plan ahead for his next, overloaded turns. As of now, this one is my favourite of the three.

 Thanks for your reviews. @Zence: Overload only takes effect the following turn by definition, so your opponent can see it coming. That said I now know that if I go with one of those 3 cards I'll go with Short Circuit (or a modified version of it).

In the meantime I had 2 new ideas:

Ironbark Juggernaut is intended to make Ramp Druid more consistent by allowing you to choose when to draw the card (if it's the only card in your deck, it will be drawn again and make an infinite loop until you choose to keep it), not too sure about the stats though.

Arcane Guardian is just a straight anti-aggro tool (balanced around Bog Creeper).

My old cards in case they were actually better:

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So, which is best ?

If all of them suck be honest pls

I like your ironbark juggernaut. Its pretty much the same concept as one of the first cards I've tried for this one, but mine didn't work proberly. I think this one does, though I think it needs a rewording: "When drawn on your turn, Choose One - Keep it; or Shuffle it into your deck and draw a card."

I definitely think this is the better of your cards.

EDIT: This was the idea, unfortunately there was no room for "on your turn", so I scrapped it. Thought it was a pretty good idea myself, which is why I might be biased about liking your card :D

Snowball Generator should be a mech. The effect has already been done by someone else, tho.

Alextrasza wouldn't work. "Revert it" is not a mechanism in the game and is kinda arbitrary as to what it actually does in the game. Deal X damage? Heal X? 

Arcane Amplifier is probably too strong compared to other 1 mana, deal 2 damage spells.

Okay, I'm just gonna dump this here:

Flavour is that you paid for him last turn, but he was just showing up late. Not sure about the balance. Helps with decks that play off-curve, or just in Aggro decks that just can't spend all their mana after, like, turn 6.

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Okay, I'm just gonna dump this here:

Flavour is that you paid for him last turn, but he was just showing up late. Not sure about the balance. Helps with decks that play off-curve, or just in Aggro decks that just can't spend all their mana after, like, turn 6.

Well, may as well bump my cards:

I'm not really sure about the wording of the first card, all feedback is appreciate. A little explication in the spoiler 

3 mana 4/4 + doing something detrimental to your opponent is far too strong. Wasting a precious late-game draw on a 1 mana minion that is unplayable at some stages of the game, is a huge drawback. If you add them to your opponent's hand, then we can argue it is a disadvantage to YOU.

Wording:
When you draw this, shuffle two 'Flame Imp' into your opponent's deck.

Thanks about the wording dude,How about this?,or should a keep him as a 3 Mana 4/4?.

Probably too weak this way. They get to attack with it before and it might as well be a 3/2 vanilla minion, since the battlecry doesn't trigger, so I kinda like the idea of adding it to their hand. This way it can also find a way to mill them in some cases. 3/4 might be pushing it in that case tho, but anything below those stats feel just very weak, and this has no tribe tag or an effect otherwise, so it should be fine.

The biggest problem is if you get it on your start hand. Then it's a better Totem Golem. Difficult to balance. Might be easier if you make it 3 mana, then you can make it a 2/5 with taunt.

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Thanks about the wording dude,How about this?,or should a keep him as a 3 Mana 4/4?.

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 What do you think of this?

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Probably too weak this way. They get to attack with it before and it might as well be a 3/2 vanilla minion, since the battlecry doesn't trigger, so I kinda like the idea of adding it to their hand. This way it can also find a way to mill them in some cases. 3/4 might be pushing it in that case tho, but anything below those stats feel just very weak, and this has no tribe tag or an effect otherwise, so it should be fine.

The biggest problem is if you get it on your start hand. Then it's a better Totem Golem. Difficult to balance. Might be easier if you make it 3 mana, then you can make it a 2/5 with taunt.

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Thanks about the wording dude,How about this?,or should a keep him as a 3 Mana 4/4?.

 

I think you should make it like Cornered Sentry where the stats of the minion you summoned for your opponent is added to your own minion. So, maybe a 3 mana 3/5 with taunt? (We've learned from many cards that cards that get an upside at turn 1 or 2 is pretty OP)

Really wonky idea here. If it's no good, feel free to say so. Feedback is appreciated!

should be "opponent's hand". 2/5 without anything else is too weak. We already have vanilla minions in the game with that statline Carrion Grub and that has a beast tag, which is quite valuable in hunter, Coliseum Manager is another one, which has a questionable downside. So either give it taunt, or make it a 3/5.