Hearthpwn

Hi guys (Again) I am Larry, and now recently I have been working on a out of wow context, a new adventure, with bosses and all, and all surged by a random idea that I had in my mind, as always, any feedback is appreciated, and rememember! This is out of the WoW Context! So almost not the typical WoW flavour in here!

This adventure relats about an unusual subject that was occurring everywhere... suddently, mystery portals from different lands appeared, and by on by on, they were constantly summoning creatures from other worlds, and some of the most dangerous of all, could our heroes defeat these powerfull creatures, and discover the origination point of these mysterious portals?

This expansion contains 45 New On the Loose cards, they mix out everywhere and get from epic heroes to the most innocent Unicorn!

The adventure has not started yet, might take some time to finish it, and maybe I can´t finish it until the end of the year, however, I do have some of the awesome cards that you are gonna find on this adventure, lets check them out! They are organised first by rarity, but showing first the neutral ones, and then the class ones, independant of the class, they are gonna be shown in order by rarity.

1st Wing, the Undeathlands Portal

You are introducted to Vaine, an unknown peasant of a city, he introduces himself and explains all the problems, then you are given the quest to find the portal origins, but there a lot of portals in your way... and wait... Oh no! Invaders, but... are these demons? We aren´t very sure.. but the thing we are sure, is that they must be passed for get to the origin.

1st Boss, High Lord Kazzak

The rest of the cards:

Tokens:

 And remember, this its gonna take a long time, so any feedback for broken card, underpowered card, explanations, feedback, support, etc, they are ALL appreciated guys!

Shuffle your board means that all your minions are changed up positions randomly, so then your opponent can´t know wich is the real Vailatrox.

Although I made it pretty similarly to a concept on one of the old competitions, Kil´Jaeden

However I am gonna fix its wording, but I don´t know how :(

I had the main idea of Troll Farseer of reducing the amount by 3, but I though that limited so it doesn´t stacks, I thought of making it rare, however, might be, however, it has also reduced stats, with a drawback for both players, so I think its more for contstructed rather than for arena, like the common Rogue Mill decks, or for just play around with your opponent.

Thanks for the feedback mate!

PD: However I am thinking about that I require a bit of feedback on Underprotected Cub, because I am not sure if making it a Druid or Hunter card :v

Added 8 new cards to the collectible adventure!

Ok guys, I mounted a poll, and that means voting time! So for deciding the order of the final bosses and cards of the adventure, I need to take YOUR suggestions for make it know and make it.

So, wich one of the Legendaries, in short words, do you want it be the 1st one of the adventure? (Or 1st wing)

Remember, I made some new cards, but they are not finished! While I do the bosses and boss battles, I am gonna make the cards.

Have an ice day!

Freezing Potion

Added 6 more cards for this adventure, wich includes:

• Deathcarver Collector (Neutral)
• Gurozond Abomination (Neutral)
• Magicfull Mercenary (Neutral)
• Blast Elementalist (Mage)
• Mechglaiver Engineer (Hunter)
• Zodiac Powerdragon (Priest)

Come on guys! I need your support for keeping upgrading and updating this! All your support or feedback on this going to be adventure is appreciated and thinked!!

Seriously, this feels so lonely... :"(

PD: Also remember that there is a poll for then starting to make the bosses! Remember to vote wich final boss you want to be first!! (And so the first Legendary reward)

Hello? There is someone in there?

Hello? Yeah? Why is this isn´t recieving support or feedback? Then I need to believe that something is wrong about it, but... seriously, there is anyone in there? I don´t like to finish a thing that isn´t seen by anyone, and even less without feedback of balance, :v

Pleaaase guys, :(, I think I am just bumping some useless comments, but... I feel its not enough the support for inspiring me to finish this, and also, an advise! There are 17 hours left to vote for then starting the "real" adventure!! Be ready!! See what do you like of ´em, and then I represent them in some way at random :v, but yes... :(, I need some support or feedback for balance.... I seriously need it guys!

And remember, nothing moves if no one helps to it! Please guyss!!!

Hey, I'll give you some feedback. I know how you're feeling. It'll take me a while to review all of the cards but some things I would like to point out:

I like the effect of Troll Farseer but I don't think it should be on a Common. Maybe Epic would be better but I'm just talking out of my ass with this one.

I don't particularly like having Inspire outside of TGT since Blizzard seems to have abandoned that concept (Discover is fair game though).

Magicfull Mercenary is really god damn powerful in Arena since you tend to not have that many spells. At that point, it's basically just a 5 mana 7/6. Not a complaint, just an observation.

I think the ability of Vailatrox is cool, but a bit unoriginal since many people have already made Jandice Barov cards with this exact ability.

Underprotected Cub seems very weird because I think a lot of times, a 1/3 would be better than a 3/1. I would give it to Hunter as opposed to Druid as the effect seems more Hunter-ish. It also has a typo in the card text. It should say "swap this minion's Attack and Health".

I don't really like Quick Poison Pool because I don't think Freezing makes much sense in Hunter (yes, we have Freezing Trap but it doesn't actually Freeze anything). In addition to that, I don't see how poison relates to freezing.

Mechglaiver Engineer seems kinda weak. Zodiac Powerdragon also might be a bit OP.

But keep up the good work. I see that you're determined to finish this.

Ok, thanks mate, err... that´s pretty proud for me and you :3, I´ll give you some explanations on a few cards.

I tried to balance the max out of Troll Farseer, and I am still unsure if making it Common or Uncommon, that´s my question, I really thought of it while making it, since at first glance it was reducting the hand size by 3, but then I realised how OP this could be in Rogue, and changed it so it doesn´t stacks, but then again, now that I think so, I am gonna make it Uncommon.

I used Freeze for Quick Poison Pool since it relats about like the Quick Sands, then you can´t go out and it costs to you more life and that, somewhat flavourwish, but unfortunaly I couldn´t made it in a shorter way :"(

Zodiac Powerdragon yes, might require some feedback, I was a bit tad and hard to decide with the stats, since this is based by a card of another game, but I wanted to keep it on powerfull, but idk, maybe as a starting 2/2 or 1/1? Since I know it can go pretty wrong with the Circle of Healing + the Pyromaniac, so then I think this one its gonna require pretty much a lot of suggestions for fix it, unfortunaly.

Thanks for pointing the Underprotected Cub class change! That was one of the ones that limited me to make more cards!

Thanks a LOT for the feedback, I truly appreciate it a LOT (And even more since this is gonna to be a long adventure to go through)

Also, a question, but just one, wich Legendary did you liked more? Since its "somewhat" part of the poll, so then I decide wich boss to make first, wich might be really important.

I greet to you a lot for your usefull feedback :3

You're welcome.

And I voted in the poll (I voted for Vailatrox).

Ok, I made a small update to this before the poll ends, so then I can organise better.

The Next Cards has been added:

• Shadow Warrior (Warlock)
• Potion of Eternalness (Warlock)

The Next Card has been removed:

• Mecha Hella Raider (Warlock), it was just a joke and the 4 mana 7/7, however, it seemed broken at the time, and it used an usefull space for another card, and then because if it was there, I couldn´t make a better card to make it fit, unfortunaly, no memes in here :"(

Quote from nomad_ninga >>

it's not really an adventure just some custom cards.

Thanks guys for the support you are giving to this! Its really hard to work on something that´s gonna be of like 1 month or so, and UPDATE AND SPOILERS!!

New Card:

SPOILER ALERT!! Reveal of a few boss cards!!

PD: I just wanted to add the card above, but I didn´t wanted it seemed so empty, so HYPE TRAIN COMING THROOOOUGH!!!

And also, there is just 1 hour left before the 1st Wing gets started!! As it seems, Clonating polls can´t be funnier! Seems that Vailatrox is winning!

EDIT: Might take some time of updating this and modifying the main page, so it doesn´t spoils too much after.

MAJOR UPDATE:

I´m still wondering, when we get to rest, I´m hungry, am sleepy, don´t wanna die!

Released 1st Boss of the Wing, Kazzak! Check it out! He´s gotta to be pretty bussy to be giving orders to their followers.

Not Vailatrox yet, but sure on the 1st wing, remember this is long, and my finger hurts right now, so tomorrow its gonna come the 2nd boss, wich seems to be a known Bounty Hunter, lets see who hunts wich one down!

But lets see how it seems, because the biggest problem was making the decklist, that was the hardest part, since I needed to restart, seems way to hard to make it below without pressing Enter, so there is a lot of space, so if someone knows how to do it, say to me.

The 2nd boss its gonna come tomorrow! I am done for today... my fingers... ouch....

Mounted up poll! You choose who is the next ascended, wich, unfortunaly, Halazael the Ascended didn´t get in, even though he got descended.

Quote from Zanywoop >>

Supreme Lord Kazzak is a doomguard, not a gnome. Here, this guys stomped on me enough