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 I don't think Power Word: Balance is too good considering that it also effect enemy minions if they survive and you don't get the healing right away until the end of the turn. I can change it to "Give all minions 2 Health" and maybe that it will be more balance?

How's this?

Hey, I'm somewhat new to the fan-creations competitions but if we win, not saying that I will, how will we know and how long will we have to make a new idea up?

I posted this earlier and all I got was "This is not good for warrior" and I'm now asking "What class this would be good for?" Help please?

I'm thinking of making my first ever submission. Here's my idea:

Is it clear how this behavior would work? For example, if the opponent had 5 minions, and you aimed this at the middle one, it would deal 5 to that minion, then 4 to the ones left and right, then 3 to the next ones left and right: (3-4-5-4-3). Or it could be aimed at the second from the right for a damage pattern like so: (2-3-4-5-4). This would do poorly against a small number of minions (1-3), pretty good against a medium number of minions (4-5), and be excellent against a large number of minions (6-7). I figured the idea of a growing cloud of toxic gas could fit with Rogue, especially since they could use a board clear. And the positioning and number of options would be interesting.

Let me know if anyone has any thoughts!

Thoughts?

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Thoughts?

My submission

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Flavor Text

If you stare long into the abyss, the abyss stares back at you

Notes

Lunatic Gaze was an Iconic spell from WoW Yogg Saron encounter

Looking into the maw of madness unhinges your mind, inflicting 5700 to 6300 Shadow damage and reducing Sanity by 4% every 1 sec. for as long as you are facing the caste

If your sanity reached zero you were getting mind controlled.

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Can someone look at my card? I really need a help for the wording and feedback for the overall idea.

If you'll let me play the grammar guy again, I'll see if I can help with the wordings.

Cannon Volley is my favourite out of all of them, although the the Southsea Deckhand should not be plural. The balance on it is fine, and I'd definitely give this a try if it was ever actually a thing,

Clea Deathstrider should probably be 'For each minion destroyed', and other than that I think it's a cool card. I'd probably make it a 3/2 though, cuz that battlecry is worth at least 2 mana if not more. In fact, I'd make it 'Split among all enemies', to cut down the text and help balance it further.

Hunter's Shotgun: I can't think of a good way to word this, except saying 'Your hero power casts Powershot. Inspire: Lose 1 Durability', and that's kind of awkward.

Two more ideas. I'm not sure about the cost of either, or the wording of either, so all criticism is welcome.

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I am just gonna ask a dumb question: How do you embed the image into your post? 

Thank you very much, Hieii :)