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Quote from YouthThunder >>

Is mycard Refocus in page 2 of the submission thread OP? (I did not link it because i am using my table rihjt now)

supposed to be called Mana Spring Totem.  copy/pasted the wrong text.

card desription:  While this is in your hand, whenever you would gain overload, any unspent mana from your previous turn is used instead of gaining overload.

need a lot of help on reducing the word count of this down a lot to atleast 3 lines since im basically trying to explain a mechanic that i dont believe is in hearthstone yet.    the basic idea of this card is to use leftover/unspent mana from your previous turn to circumvent your current costs.  lets say you have 3 mana left over from your previous turn, and you play Elemental Destruction this turn. while you have this in your hand, it will use the 3 mana from your last turn and make you only gain 2 overloard crystals instead of the full amount.

any ideas on how to reword this?

EDIT:

got it down to 4 lines but i've had to take out a lot of detail

While this is in your hand, use unspent mana from your prvious turn instead of gaining overload.

I have a few ideas for this week, and I'm not sure which one to use. Any suggestions?

(For Twilight Wyrm and Shadowy Manipulator, they would be revealed when drawn. Twilight Wyrm would give you the Spell Damage on your hero like Jungle Moonkin, and Shadowy Manipulator would glow orange (like Cursed!) on trigger, then add the Cursed into your opponent's hand, with the animation showing it coming directly from the Manipulator.)

@Zekana I think "While this is in your hand, whenever you Overload, Overload your unspent mana from your last turn first." would work a bit better, and it fits in 4 lines as well.

ok. 2 things for this post. first some redesigned cards (these ones i'll be posting). second, I was hoping to make a fire, earth, water, air version of each, but the rules say one token so I'm guessing I can't make 4 and enter it validly can I?

fire is to attack and earth to defend. simple enough. but maybe you want some more attack to make trading better on the opponents turn or maybe you want to use that +3 hp as a pseudo heal. simple design with complex thinking :D.

Quote from UndeadRebel13 >>

I have a few ideas for this week, and I'm not sure which one to use. Any suggestions?

(For Twilight Wyrm and Shadowy Manipulator, they would be revealed when drawn. Twilight Wyrm would give you the Spell Damage on your hero like Jungle Moonkin, and Shadowy Manipulator would glow orange (like Cursed!) on trigger, then add the Cursed into your opponent's hand, with the animation showing it coming directly from the Manipulator.)

@Zekana I think "While this is in your hand, whenever you Overload, Overload your unspent mana from your last turn first." would work a bit better, and it fits in 4 lines as well.

Quote from Anarchy_xX >>

Maybe i post here too late cause I already submitted my idea, but after seeing many other fan creations I started to feel that my cards might be a little underwhelming so I value feedback a lot:). So here they are.. balanced or underpowered (or even overpowered and I can't think straight :D)?                                                                                                                                   

totally love the art for these two cards, who knew man looks good with mascara too

Quote from Lathy >>

This was my idea for the week. What do you think? Is it balanced? Anything you think needs to be changed? And what about the art :) ? cheers

Gives your opponent the following token:

Quote from MattTh0m >>

This is my thought this week. Took me awhile to think of the wording, wanted to build on the mech agro deck

Any Thoughts?

hm, i like the wording  a lot and most importantly is that it sounds like how it would be worded in hearthstone.  changed the stat line cause well, you never want it on the board but if it does end up on the board, you still want to get SOME, even if super minor value out of it i guess.

Hi all,

This is my idea for this week. What do you think? 
The mana cost is what troubles me a bit. The spell when cast shouldn't cost too much, else it will be pretty worthless, so I think 1 mana is ok.

Do you think the orb is ok at 3 mana?

This idea is not originally mine, but the concept fits this, and I wanted to use this. You can play him turn 8 as an inferior Tirion Fordring (or a bigger Sunwalker, take it or leave it), or use it as a major Hail Mary (or YOLO, whatever floats your boat) card, that can save you until you can restabilize. The Hail Mary part can be bad against Mage, but good against Control Warrior.

Is this idea taken or considered before? Is this minion balanced as is? Which aesthetic detail should I use, a human paladin, or an archangel?

Of course, any thoughts are welcome.
Thanks!

Sorry for all the edits, had some trouble adding the pic. There's a first time for everything.

This is my idea for this weeks card design competition, it works just like  Tiny Knight of Evil but in your hand. The stats aren't band, but you have to discard a card and risk you discard this card to give him a buff. Do you think this should only be 2/2 or 1/1? I would like to hear your thoughts.

My idea for the week, it's very rare I go for legendaries, but this felt like it would fit. 

However, I'm a bit worried about the amount of text.

The Idea with this card is that while in hand the effect benefits you but the stats are good enough so that you still want to play it. The thing is I don't know if this minions stats are too weak right now or If I should make it a 5/5 for 5 mana.

Quote from Restless_Soul >>

I wanted to come up with something with a Valentine's theme for February and so here it is.  The idea is that The enemy becomes infatuated with your hero and so cannot attack or order it to be attacked until it can break the spell.

is it balanced?  

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Quote from mk572 >>

Anyway, is it me or is this week's theme an invitation to create HOLY SHIT BROKEN cards?

I think a large part of it is that there are so few examples of this sort of mechanic in the game that there aren't many reference points for balance. XP