From what I can tell, of those currently submitted, no one appears to be subject to disqualification. I will not be around tomorrow to make one last sweep, so you final-minute types had better leave enough time to double-check your work :P
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I think Rotating Fire could be simplified as "draw the bottom card of your deck"
Overall
I think your cards have too much text. There's also the issue of art I probably mentioned in earlier phases.
Witchwood
Individual cards
The Blood Moon is too dangerous. We're seeing it in wild right now with Bloodbloom.
Overall
Same comments as K&C. Also, as Wailor said, it's weird for you set to have weapon synergy but no actual weapons.
Thanks for the feedback. Ryxtaz deals 1 damage to any target of your choosing. it's exactly like the mage hero power. You cast the spell, you enter that targeting screen, you ping for 1, you put a copy at the bottom of your deck then the spell takes effect. I'll replace Blood Moon with a weapon, rework The lord of candles and simplify Rotating Fire.
@Noah: Flame Serpent's text should be split so the 'to' appears on the last line along with 'your hand' – makes the textbox look better. Rotating Flame should also be split, perhaps to read "the bottom card of your deck" Missing a comma after the condition on Malevolent Wand Drakonid Sorceress doesn't feel like an epic card – rare at best, despite the effect being powerful if this lives and you have a 4/12. However, most Dragons are considered as having Taunt anyway (i.e. you don't let your opponent keep a Ysera or a Malygos on the board).
Looks like everyone has submitted! I've just returned from seeing Endgame, and I forgot to prep the poll in advance, so bare with me. Should be up in an hour at the latest.
Ok, Witchwood set!
In this set we have:
Feedback is welcomed and encouraged!
It's super off to have a set with weapon synergies and no weapon, you need at least a little in set synergy.
Is the phase gonna end today in 4 hours or do i have tomorrow as well?
1 day, 5 hours left!
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Oh thank god.
From what I can tell, of those currently submitted, no one appears to be subject to disqualification. I will not be around tomorrow to make one last sweep, so you final-minute types had better leave enough time to double-check your work :P
Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!
I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
@Noah_Mcgrath
K&C
Individual cards
Overall
I think your cards have too much text. There's also the issue of art I probably mentioned in earlier phases.
Witchwood
Individual cards
Overall
Same comments as K&C. Also, as Wailor said, it's weird for you set to have weapon synergy but no actual weapons.
Custom cards :
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Thanks for the feedback. Ryxtaz deals 1 damage to any target of your choosing. it's exactly like the mage hero power. You cast the spell, you enter that targeting screen, you ping for 1, you put a copy at the bottom of your deck then the spell takes effect. I'll replace Blood Moon with a weapon, rework The lord of candles and simplify Rotating Fire.
Simplified some cards and replaced Blood Moon with Malevolent Wand and Blazing Enchantment with Flame Serpent.
So I need feedback on my set before I submit:
https://imgur.com/a/kdk8Sex
I'll just spoilerize the images.
K&C
Witchwood
@Noah: Flame Serpent's text should be split so the 'to' appears on the last line along with 'your hand' – makes the textbox look better.
Rotating Flame should also be split, perhaps to read "the bottom card
of your deck"
Missing a comma after the condition on Malevolent Wand
Drakonid Sorceress doesn't feel like an epic card – rare at best, despite the effect being powerful if this lives and you have a 4/12. However, most Dragons are considered as having Taunt anyway (i.e. you don't let your opponent keep a Ysera or a Malygos on the board).
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Looks like everyone has submitted! I've just returned from seeing Endgame, and I forgot to prep the poll in advance, so bare with me. Should be up in an hour at the latest.
You can find me here! Good luck everyone!
We're live! Good luck to everybody, you've all made fantastic classes and I can't wait for the finals.
You can find me here! Good luck everyone!