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Uh, so I'm stuck. Can you guys help me out. I can't think of a card I can use for my final slot.

 Hey everyone, thanks again for your feedback. I've been away all weekend, and I know I've been bad about responding and helping others. Will be home soon and hoping to do better at that.

For Demonxz95 - What do you have so far? And most importantly, what kind of hole do you want to fill? Are you looking to make a big minion? Small minion? Summon spell? Keyword spell? Buff? Card useful for control? Agro? 

All I need is my last common Karazhan card. Preferably, it would be cool to have a mid to high-cost spell (somewhere about 3+) to go along with Theatre Symphonist and the small spell theme of this set, but I'm fine with absolutely anything provided it makes sense within the class.

A few ideas I did previously have:

The first version of Invitation from Beyond was supposed to be kind of a tutor card and also works with Quick-Time with the flavor that the minion is "invited" over to your hand or battlefield (party). The second version has the same thematic, but works differently. It does feel like just a better Gather Your Party though.

 

Medivh's Spellbook I made mostly for the spell-thematic of Karazhan. The wording may seem a bit weird, but I worded it how I did because literally every single other card I have for this phase has at least 3 lines of text, so this seems like a breath of fresh air.

 

Chronoleap does play into the time travel and rearranging aspect quite a lot. Sinti did however point out Malygos could be a problem (I don't have damage target spells that hit face but I could in the future) and it would restrict design space.

 

Although I do like ??? Portal, I feel several other people will do the same thing with a "3 portal", so it kind of loses its touch. I also don't know what place is in that portal.

Anything that makes sense as a Common, a Time Traveler card and a Karazhan card is perfectly fine with me, regardless of what it is or what it does.

Theater Symphonist - I've been rethinking this card, and its pretty crazy. You could potentially cast a big spell and draw it next turn. I'd suggest making this use up that spell, rather than cast a copy of it. 

 ??? Portal could be Caverns of Time or Timeless Isle Portal. It and Medivh's Spellbook are my favorites of your suggestions. Perhaps you could include a removal spell, unless your OG set has one or more. Or a cheap spell (1 mana?) that lets you trigger Quick-Time this turn for cards in your hand. 

In any case, I did literally make this like 2 minutes ago. Not explicitly Karazhan themed, but not terrible.

Compare to Mortal Coil and Quick Shot. Also happens to be the only damage spell in the entire class that can target face.

Sadly, only a Location card can really do the artwork the justice is deserves (seriously, I absolutely love this feature).

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In any case, I did literally make this like 2 minutes ago. Not explicitly Karazhan themed, but not terrible.

Compare to Mortal Coil and Quick Shot. Also happens to be the only damage spell in the entire class that can target face.

Sadly, only a Location card can really do the artwork the justice is deserves (seriously, I absolutely love this feature).

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I am more or less set on my set (lul) but I want to create a coherent bundle to include in order to give it a theme.

Bundle #1 - Curve into your Old God (or DW)

This is the one I've shown before.

Kosumoth has been modified since last time.

Bundle #2 - Egg Package

Deathrattle was a subtheme of WOG, and eggs are a subtheme of my class.

Bundle #3 - Empty Deck

I went a little bit wild. People on the "lonely creative corner" don't really like it but what about you guys? If I don't do it this expansion, I will do it with KFT because I have a good DK idea related to this in store.

Obviously I would have to choose between Kosumoth and Cookie.

Bundle #4 - Random damage & synergy

Pls tell me which you prefer.

In addition to this, I've changed 2 cards.

Fantastic Feast

Big heals are more useful in the mid-game because they can counter aggro decks. This also incentivizes you to play and hold on Roast cards.

Top Chef

I figured out the first version is a worse Tracking 90% of the time. The second version costs 0 but the threshold has been raised to 6. 

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Uh, so I'm stuck. Can you guys help me out. I can't think of a card I can use for my final slot.

 Hey everyone, thanks again for your feedback. I've been away all weekend, and I know I've been bad about responding and helping others. Will be home soon and hoping to do better at that.

For Demonxz95 - What do you have so far? And most importantly, what kind of hole do you want to fill? Are you looking to make a big minion? Small minion? Summon spell? Keyword spell? Buff? Card useful for control? Agro? 

All I need is my last common Karazhan card. Preferably, it would be cool to have a mid to high-cost spell (somewhere about 3+) to go along with Theatre Symphonist and the small spell theme of this set, but I'm fine with absolutely anything provided it makes sense within the class.

A few ideas I did previously have:

The first version of Invitation from Beyond was supposed to be kind of a tutor card and also works with Quick-Time with the flavor that the minion is "invited" over to your hand or battlefield (party). The second version has the same thematic, but works differently. It does feel like just a better Gather Your Party though.

 

Medivh's Spellbook I made mostly for the spell-thematic of Karazhan. The wording may seem a bit weird, but I worded it how I did because literally every single other card I have for this phase has at least 3 lines of text, so this seems like a breath of fresh air.

 

Chronoleap does play into the time travel and rearranging aspect quite a lot. Sinti did however point out Malygos could be a problem (I don't have damage target spells that hit face but I could in the future) and it would restrict design space.

 

Although I do like ??? Portal, I feel several other people will do the same thing with a "3 portal", so it kind of loses its touch. I also don't know what place is in that portal.

Anything that makes sense as a Common, a Time Traveler card and a Karazhan card is perfectly fine with me, regardless of what it is or what it does. 

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In any case, I did literally make this like 2 minutes ago. Not explicitly Karazhan themed, but not terrible.

Compare to Mortal Coil and Quick Shot. Also happens to be the only damage spell in the entire class that can target face.

Sadly, only a Location card can really do the artwork the justice is deserves (seriously, I absolutely love this feature).

 

Very well then, if the wording is ambiguous, here is another version of Rift Bomb:

Now also slightly nerfed because it can no longer target face. You all guessed right, it add a copy of the killed minion to your hand. Burst damage is not really a thing in my class at all.

For Theatre Symphonist, I did think of making it a 5 mana 3/3 to maybe slow it down a little bit. I could also make it actually use up the spell instead of copying it like Grand Archivist (suggested by thepowrofcheese).

If it helps, here are all spells I have in my class that cost 5 or more so far:

Well, regardless, what should my showcase cards be?

Because I like to have each rarity represented, I would like to have at least 1 Karazhan card and want to have Quick-Time in my showcase, I currently have:

• Demented Lackey
• Child's Play
• Power of Yogg-Saron
• Murozond

The remaining spot is the hardest. Currently, I have my mind set on Theatre Symphonist, Rift Bomb and Dark Replication as the last showcase card. I won't be choosing Time Twister because I showcased it in Phase I and it's in the picture that showcases how the Hero Power UI works.

So, here I go with my submission post. How does this look?

Click here to go back to my Phase I post.

Click here to go back to my Phase II post.

Click here to go back to my Phase III post.

My entry for this competition is the Time Traveler class. This is a class themed all around... well, time which is represented in several different aspects of the class. The Hero Power of the class is Glimpse , which has you look at the top 3 cards of your deck and rearrange them in any order (if your deck has less than 3 cards when you activate this, it will simply show you less cards instead), allowing for strategically planning ahead a few turns because now you know what you're going to draw and being able to change and optimize your draws.

This class also introduces a new keyworded mechanic for the class, Quick-Time . Quick-Time effects activate if you play the card on the same turn it's added to your hand (either by drawing it or generating it, anything counts). In most other classes, this effect seems like it would be inconsistent and top-deck reliant. The Time Traveler class however has many ways to get around this, namely their Hero Power in which you can rearrange the cards you draw to make sure you draw the Quick-Time cards when you actually want to draw them. There are also some cards in the class which can makeQuick-Time cards even easier to activate.

UI for the Hero Power

Speaking of which, let's look at 5 cards that showcase some aspects of the Time Traveler class.

Remaining WotOG and ONiK cards:

Classic set:

Basic set:

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Well, regardless, what should my showcase cards be?

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Because I like to have each rarity represented, I would like to have at least 1 Karazhan card and want to have Quick-Time in my showcase, I currently have:

• Demented Lackey
• Child's Play
• Power of Yogg-Saron
• Murozond

The remaining spot is the hardest. Currently, I have my mind set on Theatre Symphonist, Rift Bomb and Dark Replication as the last showcase card. I won't be choosing Time Twister because I showcased it in Phase I and it's in the picture that showcases how the Hero Power UI works.

 I personally like Temporal Storm, Timekiller, Dark Replication, Murozond, and Child's Play.

@Demonx: The statline on Hollow Knight still sucks but apart from that it looks good.

As for me, I am almost decided on what cards I want to submit. I am 90% certain of all of those cards except Omelette Chef and Onyx Pawn [which has the effect of the previously shown Drakonid Knacker]. I went with the Julienne Cut that summons two copies despite the fact that the other version had slightly more positive feedback because this version can allow some crazy shenanigans with deathrattle minions.

I did include Kosumoth (which received mostly good feedback) I dind't find room for Haute Cuisine (which some said was redundant with Kosumoth) and Sautéed Silithid. Broeck told me I should include Haute Cuisine anyway. What do you think.

For the record, here are the cards that received positive feedback but didn't make the cut. I may still include them if I have negative feedback about this set.

So, overall?

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@Demonx: The statline on Hollow Knight still sucks but apart from that it looks good.

As for me, I am almost decided on what cards I want to submit. I am 90% certain of all of those cards except Omelette Chef and Onyx Pawn [which has the effect of the previously shown Drakonid Knacker]. I went with the Julienne Cut that summons two copies despite the fact that the other version had slightly more positive feedback because this version can allow some crazy shenanigans with deathrattle minions.

I did include Kosumoth (which received mostly good feedback) I dind't find room for Haute Cuisine (which some said was redundant with Kosumoth) and Sautéed Silithid. Broeck told me I should include Haute Cuisine anyway. What do you think.

For the record, here are the cards that received positive feedback but didn't make the cut. I may still include them if I have negative feedback about this set.

I will include the queen in MSG and the Starving Custom in KFT if they don't make the cut now.

 

So, overall?

• Twilight Cookbook
• Harsh Food Critic
• Fantastic Feast
• Haute Cuisine if you decided to replace Top Chef with it. Otherwise, Omelette Chef.
• Kosumoth

I love Omelette Chef, and I like Onyx Pawn for the roast synergy. You're taking the class in the right direction with these sets, I'd say submit them. :)

In response to people saying Hollow Knight's statline is bad, I have two new versions of Hollow Knight.

5 mana 4/7 vs 6 mana 6/7. The Boulderfist Ogre statline is honestly something I want to see again and I think a Boulderfist Ogre with an upside effect is perfectly acceptable. I mean, Sea Reaver technically counts as a Boulderfist Ogre with an upside.

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@Demonx: The statline on Hollow Knight still sucks but apart from that it looks good.

As for me, I am almost decided on what cards I want to submit. I am 90% certain of all of those cards except Omelette Chef and Onyx Pawn [which has the effect of the previously shown Drakonid Knacker]. I went with the Julienne Cut that summons two copies despite the fact that the other version had slightly more positive feedback because this version can allow some crazy shenanigans with deathrattle minions.

I did include Kosumoth (which received mostly good feedback) I dind't find room for Haute Cuisine (which some said was redundant with Kosumoth) and Sautéed Silithid. Broeck told me I should include Haute Cuisine anyway. What do you think.

For the record, here are the cards that received positive feedback but didn't make the cut. I may still include them if I have negative feedback about this set.

I will include the queen in MSG and the Starving Custom in KFT if they don't make the cut now.

So, overall?

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I went with 7/4 because all of the C'Thun cards have different statlines. For example in the 5 mana slot, 5/6 and 6/5 are already used (Usher of Souls and Twilight Darkmender), so I'm using something different. Having 2 C'Thun cards with the same statline would feel very wrong to me and I don't want to do that. This is why I went with 3 mana 4/3 for Demented Lackey. It's different than what other C'Thun cards use. I suppose I could go with 4/7 instead. No C'Thun card uses 5 mana 4/7. I also balanced it around the statline back when its effect was just outright killing a minion instead of dealing damage.

Your set looks pretty good, although personally I would be in favoring of replacing Top Chef with Haute Cuisine. I just like it better and I think it does have some different niches than Kosumoth does.

In terms of showcase cards, my choices are:

• Twilight Cookbook
• Harsh Food Critic
• Fantastic Feast
• Haute Cuisine if you decided to replace Top Chef with it. Otherwise, Omelette Chef.
• Kosumoth

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I love Omelette Chef, and I like Onyx Pawn for the roast synergy. You're taking the class in the right direction with these sets, I'd say submit them. :)

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 One more thing with regards to C'Thun.  Except for Kossumoth the roast mechanic runs quite a bit at odds with a C'Thun deck as you could easily roast it.  Perhaps your C'Thun card could look at recovering it in that event?  Not absolutely necessary as you have twilight cookbook but something to think about.