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Uh...Sun's Shine and Moon's Glow? Does that work for the third challenge? I don't know any common sayings about space that could work with this. (I'm the Cosmomancer)

 "In Space no one can hear you Scream"? i don't know what your class is about, so i can't tell.

 Space, basically. Asteroids, meteors, suns, moons, intergalactic beings...maybe One Small Step and A Giant Leap?

On another note, I'm thinking of introducing Asteroid and Meteor tokens as a theme for my class. Asteroids are 1/1s with Charge and Meteors are 1/3s with Taunt. Should I keep these two?

 shouldn't it be the other way around? meteors with charge and asteroids with taunt? same with the card art; not sure.

i'd also sugest making them Asteroid Elemental and Meteor Eemental; they'd be actual being (also, there already is a meteor in the game) 

My method of thinking is that the Meteors have already crashed when they enter the battlefield, so they remain as rubble. The asteroids are constantly moving however. I dunno if the Meteors and Asteroids would count as Elementals myself.

Can you do mine! XD

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Gladiator

Current state of my Basic set (7/10):

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Can you do mine? Please?

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Can you do mine! XD

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Gladiator

Current state of my Basic set (7/10):

Card descriptions:

Hack'n'Slash: Hack is an addition to the Holy Smite / Arcane Shot family. Slash is a strictly worse Consecration, but that is ok, since one of my class'es weaknesses is a weak aoe. It is still very much a decent card.

Parry: you've already seen this in Phase 1. One of the signature cards of my class in the "protect" category, with a great flavor i think :)

Back to Basics: i know this card might seem super weak and it kinda has to be to pass as 0-cost, but i still think it has its uses. If you can land it on a sizeable minion it will act as a soft-heal, preventing the minion to go face. The minion is still able to trade into your board and my class is all about minion combat, so this is by no means a pure "Can't attack. Period." effect as iv seen ppl dislike before. Thought?

Requiem of Rainbows: decent control option that has synergy with Momentum, but doesnt promote aggro style since goin face has little value. I know its a silly name, but i kinda liked it when i found it searching for some weapon names online and i actually had an art to match it, so i went with it. I might actually do silly names for all my future weapons to keep a hearthstone-y light mood :) I think it is plausible, since gladiators would definitely name their weapons, right?:D

Reckless Brawler: her weapon of choice are fists! So you get to use her weapon ... or something :D i wanted a very simple minion that would synergize with my hero power and/or Momentum and i think i got it. Most (or all) of my weapons will be rather utility weapons than pure (face) dmg, so i think gettin one more swing out of them is a good way to go.

Worthy Opponent: get it?:D Ok, so at first glance, the stats might seem preeeety carzy, right? I mean they kinda are, but then realize that Shado-Pan Rider and Knuckles are a thing. You already forgot about em, didnt you? If i were to go for 3/7, this would make the card strictly worse, which honestly might be fine, since it is a Basic minion, so i might do that if most ppl agree i should. Btw for reference, only other two 3/8 minions r Ancient of Blossoms and Lakkari Felhound.

Unrefined ideas. Open to name change, effect change or might not include at all if not received well.

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Late for Practice: i know noone rly likes a card that gives minions Charge, but i had this idea of nerfing the attack of the minion. Would this make the card actually ok?

Nobody Saw Nothing: cheap card draw, or so it would seem. Its basically an Arcane Intellect when combined with my hero power. But since Momentum operates out of your hero attacking, sacrificing the hero power for a card draw could have an additional cost of not triggering Momentum effects. Depends on what you need at the time.

Target Practice: not sure about this card, it is probably weak on average even with the card draw slapped on it, but the idea behind this was to have a way to flush out those valuable minions hidden behind taunt walls so you can kill them off.

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Gladiator

Current state of my Basic set (7/10):

Card descriptions:

Hack'n'Slash: Hack is an addition to the Holy Smite / Arcane Shot family. Slash is a strictly worse Consecration, but that is ok, since one of my class'es weaknesses is a weak aoe. It is still very much a decent card.

Parry: you've already seen this in Phase 1. One of the signature cards of my class in the "protect" category, with a great flavor i think :)

Back to Basics: i know this card might seem super weak and it kinda has to be to pass as 0-cost, but i still think it has its uses. If you can land it on a sizeable minion it will act as a soft-heal, preventing the minion to go face. The minion is still able to trade into your board and my class is all about minion combat, so this is by no means a pure "Can't attack. Period." effect as iv seen ppl dislike before. Thought?

Requiem of Rainbows: decent control option that has synergy with Momentum, but doesnt promote aggro style since goin face has little value. I know its a silly name, but i kinda liked it when i found it searching for some weapon names online and i actually had an art to match it, so i went with it. I might actually do silly names for all my future weapons to keep a hearthstone-y light mood :) I think it is plausible, since gladiators would definitely name their weapons, right?:D

Reckless Brawler: her weapon of choice are fists! So you get to use her weapon ... or something :D i wanted a very simple minion that would synergize with my hero power and/or Momentum and i think i got it. Most (or all) of my weapons will be rather utility weapons than pure (face) dmg, so i think gettin one more swing out of them is a good way to go.

Worthy Opponent: get it?:D Ok, so at first glance, the stats might seem preeeety carzy, right? I mean they kinda are, but then realize that Shado-Pan Rider and Knuckles are a thing. You already forgot about em, didnt you? If i were to go for 3/7, this would make the card strictly worse, which honestly might be fine, since it is a Basic minion, so i might do that if most ppl agree i should. Btw for reference, only other two 3/8 minions r Ancient of Blossoms and Lakkari Felhound.

Unrefined ideas. Open to name change, effect change or might not include at all if not received well.

Card descriptions:

Late for Practice: i know noone rly likes a card that gives minions Charge, but i had this idea of nerfing the attack of the minion. Would this make the card actually ok?

Nobody Saw Nothing: cheap card draw, or so it would seem. Its basically an Arcane Intellect when combined with my hero power. But since Momentum operates out of your hero attacking, sacrificing the hero power for a card draw could have an additional cost of not triggering Momentum effects. Depends on what you need at the time.

Target Practice: not sure about this card, it is probably weak on average even with the card draw slapped on it, but the idea behind this was to have a way to flush out those valuable minions hidden behind taunt walls so you can kill them off.

I can understand Slash has to be weak, I wouldn't make it so easy to compare with Consecration though. What about cost increase + card draw? 

Requiem Of Rainbows could probably cost 4.

Worthy Opponent... I can't see what you mean about his stats... it's 11 stats for a 5 cost, perfectly fine for a vanilla.

Reckless Brawler is really strong (increasing durability is strong in general), but its effect is not what you want on a 1-drop, so it's somewhat balanced.

I love both Parrying and Back To Basics for flavour and effect.

Late For Training... I honestly don't know. Seems fine at first glance though.

Nobody Saw Nothing ehhhhhhhhhhhh I posted this a while ago and it cost 2, still with my class it's easier to get a weapon so it's probably balanced.

Target Practice great idea, could maybe cost 1 as you're technically buffing your opponent minions.

All in all it's one of my top 5 favourite entries.

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Ok, guys so i finally have something coherent to show you :) If you would like a feedback from me in return (please!) include a link to your post, thanks.

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Gladiator

Current state of my Basic set (7/10):

Card descriptions:

Hack'n'Slash: Hack is an addition to the Holy Smite / Arcane Shot family. Slash is a strictly worse Consecration, but that is ok, since one of my class'es weaknesses is a weak aoe. It is still very much a decent card.

Parry: you've already seen this in Phase 1. One of the signature cards of my class in the "protect" category, with a great flavor i think :)

Back to Basics: i know this card might seem super weak and it kinda has to be to pass as 0-cost, but i still think it has its uses. If you can land it on a sizeable minion it will act as a soft-heal, preventing the minion to go face. The minion is still able to trade into your board and my class is all about minion combat, so this is by no means a pure "Can't attack. Period." effect as iv seen ppl dislike before. Thought?

Requiem of Rainbows: decent control option that has synergy with Momentum, but doesnt promote aggro style since goin face has little value. I know its a silly name, but i kinda liked it when i found it searching for some weapon names online and i actually had an art to match it, so i went with it. I might actually do silly names for all my future weapons to keep a hearthstone-y light mood :) I think it is plausible, since gladiators would definitely name their weapons, right?:D

Reckless Brawler: her weapon of choice are fists! So you get to use her weapon ... or something :D i wanted a very simple minion that would synergize with my hero power and/or Momentum and i think i got it. Most (or all) of my weapons will be rather utility weapons than pure (face) dmg, so i think gettin one more swing out of them is a good way to go.

Worthy Opponent: get it?:D Ok, so at first glance, the stats might seem preeeety carzy, right? I mean they kinda are, but then realize that Shado-Pan Rider and Knuckles are a thing. You already forgot about em, didnt you? If i were to go for 3/7, this would make the card strictly worse, which honestly might be fine, since it is a Basic minion, so i might do that if most ppl agree i should. Btw for reference, only other two 3/8 minions r Ancient of Blossoms and Lakkari Felhound.

Unrefined ideas. Open to name change, effect change or might not include at all if not received well.

Card descriptions:

Late for Practice: i know noone rly likes a card that gives minions Charge, but i had this idea of nerfing the attack of the minion. Would this make the card actually ok?

Nobody Saw Nothing: cheap card draw, or so it would seem. Its basically an Arcane Intellect when combined with my hero power. But since Momentum operates out of your hero attacking, sacrificing the hero power for a card draw could have an additional cost of not triggering Momentum effects. Depends on what you need at the time.

Target Practice: not sure about this card, it is probably weak on average even with the card draw slapped on it, but the idea behind this was to have a way to flush out those valuable minions hidden behind taunt walls so you can kill them off.

 opal already gave you most of the feedback i wanted to say, i'l add that you can probably make Worthy Opponent a 4/8 since, when it comes to class minions, the added stats of vanilla ones if 2x the cost +2.

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Can you do mine! XD

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 Ps Nuts//Bolts challenge is "Break" the "Mold".

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Ok, guys so i finally have something coherent to show you :) If you would like a feedback from me in return (please!) include a link to your post, thanks.

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Gladiator

Current state of my Basic set (7/10):

Card descriptions:

Hack'n'Slash: Hack is an addition to the Holy Smite / Arcane Shot family. Slash is a strictly worse Consecration, but that is ok, since one of my class'es weaknesses is a weak aoe. It is still very much a decent card.

Parry: you've already seen this in Phase 1. One of the signature cards of my class in the "protect" category, with a great flavor i think :)

Back to Basics: i know this card might seem super weak and it kinda has to be to pass as 0-cost, but i still think it has its uses. If you can land it on a sizeable minion it will act as a soft-heal, preventing the minion to go face. The minion is still able to trade into your board and my class is all about minion combat, so this is by no means a pure "Can't attack. Period." effect as iv seen ppl dislike before. Thought?

Requiem of Rainbows: decent control option that has synergy with Momentum, but doesnt promote aggro style since goin face has little value. I know its a silly name, but i kinda liked it when i found it searching for some weapon names online and i actually had an art to match it, so i went with it. I might actually do silly names for all my future weapons to keep a hearthstone-y light mood :) I think it is plausible, since gladiators would definitely name their weapons, right?:D

Reckless Brawler: her weapon of choice are fists! So you get to use her weapon ... or something :D i wanted a very simple minion that would synergize with my hero power and/or Momentum and i think i got it. Most (or all) of my weapons will be rather utility weapons than pure (face) dmg, so i think gettin one more swing out of them is a good way to go.

Worthy Opponent: get it?:D Ok, so at first glance, the stats might seem preeeety carzy, right? I mean they kinda are, but then realize that Shado-Pan Rider and Knuckles are a thing. You already forgot about em, didnt you? If i were to go for 3/7, this would make the card strictly worse, which honestly might be fine, since it is a Basic minion, so i might do that if most ppl agree i should. Btw for reference, only other two 3/8 minions r Ancient of Blossoms and Lakkari Felhound.

Unrefined ideas. Open to name change, effect change or might not include at all if not received well.

Card descriptions:

Late for Practice: i know noone rly likes a card that gives minions Charge, but i had this idea of nerfing the attack of the minion. Would this make the card actually ok?

Nobody Saw Nothing: cheap card draw, or so it would seem. Its basically an Arcane Intellect when combined with my hero power. But since Momentum operates out of your hero attacking, sacrificing the hero power for a card draw could have an additional cost of not triggering Momentum effects. Depends on what you need at the time.

Target Practice: not sure about this card, it is probably weak on average even with the card draw slapped on it, but the idea behind this was to have a way to flush out those valuable minions hidden behind taunt walls so you can kill them off.

• Hack: Hey, another 1 mana deal 2 damage spell! This if fine ofcourse.
• Slash: A weaker Consecration but that's definitely not a bad thing. I actually think its a strong thing to make cards like these. Really gives the class identity.
• Parry: Seems a bit too difficult for basic tbh. Also, should this be reworded "The next time your Hero would take damage, reduce the damage dealt to 0. Draw a card"? I think that would make it more clear.
• Back to Basics: Love the flavor and artwork. Good card.
• Requiem of Rainbows: I like it! Balance is good!
• Reckless Brawler: Giving your weapon durability is really cool imo. I don't think brawler suits the effect really well though. I would personally think more of a Smith or something like that. Also, would a Pirate be good here?
• Worthy Opponent: Cool, a vanilla minion! Love it!
• Late for Training: Lol, I love effects that counteract. Name is pretty cool too.
• Nobody saw Nothing: Really strong card, but I think its ok.
• Target Practice: Not sure about this one tbh. Its cool when theres a taunt minion in play and you want too choose your trades. Other than that, its not really helpful and just a 2 mana draw a card at best. 1 mana would be fine if you ask me.

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Alright, at least I am not struggling too much to make alternate versions of Mercenary Ambush, I am trying to hit the nail in the Basic set, since probably Distract is going to cost (0), either way, Distract is a 100% going to showcase cards.

I have two versions on Mercenary Ambush, but I dunno which one hits the nail better.

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I had an idea to use the phrase "The exception that proves the rule" Could i use two cards with title "The exception" and the other one "Prove the rule"? I also already have a basic card in y example pack from phase one that doesn't follow the Deceptively Simple challenge. What should I do?

 

 you can easily go with "the exception" and "the rule"; for deceptively simple, if you don't have more than 4 cards that have over 3 lines, you're fine.

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 sentimental junckbot: i donno, may be a little strong, coldlight oracle has a simmilar effect and is a rare that's overcosted by 1.5 points; on the pther hand, northshire cleric is a thing;

spur of confidence: is an overcosted heroic strike; either reduce the cost or increase the damage;

memories: it should cost 5; it dosen't matter where the cards come from, it's still 5 of them;

spiteful destruction: you could easily make this a 4;

strenght in solitude: really bad card, you should probably reduce it's cost to 4 (unless your class has sinergy with having only one minion on the board, in which case i don't know);

mood: pleased: seems fine;

life is good: hard to judge, you might want second oppinions on this one, maybe have it just 3 health? donno.

mood: angst: you can probably reduce the damage dealt to 3.

life is crap: boy oh boy, that name! balance-wise it's fine, but that name! should probably change it.

gentle golem: this one's ok.

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Just curious – why is the "Life is Crap" name so bad? 

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Alright, at least I am not struggling too much to make alternate versions of Mercenary Ambush, I am trying to hit the nail in the Basic set, since probably Distract is going to cost (0), either way, Distract is a 100% going to showcase cards.

I have two versions on Mercenary Ambush, but I dunno which one hits the nail better, the 1st one is with Combo potential, and the second one has Coin potential.

(The first version will attack from left to right when summoned, if the minion is killed, they stop attacking, oh and yes, they can survive)