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#210 Jan 11, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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Waiting for a new page to submit this. Any suggestions on balance or wording?

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#211 Jan 11, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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Wait, so would you need a new UI to make this work? Like you would have to have the discover pane, and then something that says 'Freeze Ahune' or something to get the reset all the options.

Additionally it seems too complicated. Maybe a 6 mana 3/5 "Battlecry: Discover a spell. Freeze this minion to Discover another." Still interesting.

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#212 Jan 12, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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Quote from Teknician >>

Wait, so would you need a new UI to make this work? Like you would have to have the discover pane, and then something that says 'Freeze Ahune' or something to get the reset all the options.

Additionally it seems too complicated. Maybe a 6 mana 3/5 "Battlecry: Discover a spell. Freeze this minion to Discover another." Still interesting.

It's simple. There are 3 options in discover. Make a 4th option that is "reset the options"

Or, alternatively, since there is a "Show/Hide" button on the left, we can add a "Reset" button on the right.

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Not exactly simple by Blizzard standards tbh but whatever

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Waiting for a new page to submit this. Any suggestions on balance or wording?

I personally think you should mention that it's a choice, that you can freeze the the minion. As it is right now, it seems like you gain something from using your freeze affects on the minion.

Something like... "Battlecry: Discover a spell. You can choose to Freeze this, to reset your options.

Furthermore, couldn't you just keep Freezing it? Considering how it's currently worded.

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Quote from nobravery >>

Waiting for a new page to submit this. Any suggestions on balance or wording?

How would you choose to reset the options? That’s a new mechanic that’s never been done, it may be a bit complicated to try implementing

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#216 Jan 12, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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Alright, here's the latest version! Your thoughts?

First of all, I respond to you way too much. Does it ever get old or annoying when you open your notifications and it reads "Demonxz95 replied to your comment on jknhnjhxdfgdspqomcnd" and you think "oh, he's responded again"? If anything, other people need a chance to provide all of the fair feedback to you and I need to catch a break from replying to you all the time. This however is the Discussion Topic and I'm basically on this forum all the time, so I've gone for it.

Whatever, I'm glad I got that out of my system.

Ice Sculptor - Assuming that the copy that it becomes is also Frozen, this is a really cool effect although it doesn't produce that much board presence because it enters the battlefield Frozen. Still really cool though.

Cold to the Touch - It's a nice way to incorporate the Freeze mechanic into other classes. So yeah, I think it's really nice.

Catching Cold - Everything becomes a Frozen Crusher. Ultimate troll card against minions boards and nice synergy with Moorabi.

What the... I can't compete with this. This is why you're the champion of this place. How am I supposed to compete with this?

Nah, it never gets old or annoying when you respond to me. I think it's quite sweet really. <3 Glad you liked my cards!

Ice Lord Zero: Wow! Well, that's one way to slow the meta. I quite like it! In addition to being an Elemental in Shaman as Elemental Shaman really needs some support, it stalls , allowing for more Control-y or even Combo-y playstyles. However, you may get a HUGE tempo swing if you have board control, and if you manage to get minions on the board before your opponent does and destroy, your opponent's tempo is extremely decelerated. As a result, you should probably make it cost 6. Also, it should be worded as "All minions enter the battlefield Frozen this game" when compared to Frost Lich Jaina and Raza the Chained.

It's actually an old card I used for competition 6.13 where I almost got in, but didn't because it was on page 1. I basically get a second chance with it. It's amazing how different people's opinions of this card have been since then.

http://www.hearthpwn.com/forums/hearthstone-general/fan-creations/203322-weekly-card-design-competition-6-13-submission?comment=4
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Okay guys, any last tweaks before I post? xD

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I love how all waited for page to post our cards. 5+ submissions in 20 minutes :D

I went wit the Axe. I trust Cogito who won 4 times in almost one single season to spot good cards, and my gut feelings also leant towards it.

@Livienna: Your card doesn't stand out, but if you want to go with it anyway I'd say it's all good. You might score some votes for cuteness.

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#219 Jan 12, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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Okay guys, any last tweaks before I post? xD

The card itself looks good, although a "fledgling" is not a dragon. It's more of a bird.

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#220 Jan 12, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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I love how all waited for page to post our cards. 5+ submissions in 20 minutes :D

I went wit the Axe. I trust Cogito who won 4 times in almost one single season to spot good cards, and my gut feelings also leant towards it.

Everyone waiting for page 2 because they know page 1 is dangerous to post in. Then when it starts, everyone rapid fires to get their entry.

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Quote from CheeseEtc >>

I love how all waited for page to post our cards. 5+ submissions in 20 minutes :D

I went wit the Axe. I trust Cogito who won 4 times in almost one single season to spot good cards, and my gut feelings also leant towards it.

Page one had Unstable Chill which is definitely a contender for first place, so I chose to post page two :p I also think your card is a contender (awesome design), but I took the plunge and posted my card anyways.

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This one is too memeish? Maybe unfair with Taunt generators... Less Health?

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This one is too memeish? Maybe unfair with Taunt generators... Less Health?

Definitely very memish. Also very good with Silence. You play this, then Silence it next turn and attack. All much easier to do than summoning The Ancient One, let alone attacking with it.

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#224 Jan 12, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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I just realize that the two mechanics shaman have - windfury and freeze - are sort of symmetric with each other. One allows a minion to attack one more time, the other makes it attack one less time. I haven't gone through the whole discussion thread but has anyone made something related to this mixed theme?

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Okay guys, any last tweaks before I post? xD

The card itself looks good, although a "fledgling" is not a dragon. It's more of a bird.

Ahh thanks! I was thinking more of the adjective "fledgling" but yeah. I'm changing it back to Frost Whelpling :)

Now to wait for page 3, LOL

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Balanced? Maybe 4 mana?

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Uh @_Envy_, you stole the art I was gonna use.

Your card:

My card:

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#229 Jan 12, 2018 (Kobolds Patch)
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This one is too memeish? Maybe unfair with Taunt generators... Less Health?

Turn 10 this into your opponent not killing it for whatever reason;

Earth Shock/Ironbeak Owl + Windfury = 60 damage

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Balanced? Maybe 4 mana?

Freezing Potion costs zero, but Shatter costs two, so 4-mana isn't a bad call. Granted Shatter is kind of sucky, but splitting the difference and adding one isn't the worst thing. Brrrloc is roughly even on his stat-line, but he cannot destroy minions.

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Uh @_Envy_, you stole the art I was gonna use.

Unless you actually created the piece yourself, there's no "art theft" between the posters here. We're all pulling from the same sources (Google, etc.), so claiming "ownership" of a particular piece of art is meaningless.

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