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#41 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Quote from Teknician >>

My alternatives were Desperate Stand and Blessing of Wisdom. Other ideas:

Of all the variants, I believe the Avenging Wrath version is the best. I think it's also more in-tune with her character, personality-wise.

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#42 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Here's my idea for now. I'll make more later.

(Ignore the Battlecry keyword. I fucked that up and will remove it later. The battlecry doesn't exist, it's a passive effect.)

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#43 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Here are my ideas so far:

The librarian isn't that big a threat, but, played at the right time, it can make your opponent choose between giving you a free Silence and making a suboptimal play. The other two are sources of Sap for Rogues. The first one is symmetric with your opponent, but would be really good in mill where they really don't want you to be able to play your minions again. The last one is simpler and punny. Also, he's covering his face so that you can't see him. He thinks that's how you Stealth. He just wants to be a Rogue!

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#44 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Another idea! Maybe it should be rare or epic?

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#45 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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"Curse your inevitable betrayal."

I need to tweak this more. I'm not sure your opponent's hand will fill up with Treachery cards fast enough for it to matter.

Some potential conditions:

When a minion dies

When they play a card

End of every turn
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#46 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Not sure how this is gonna fare.

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Zombie Chow

What do you think of her balancewise? I feel it's a bit underpowered when compared to Antique Healbot, but I dunno.

As for previous cards, my fav is that Tauren Commander dude. Such cool flavor and the idea of an ongoing Enrage effect is cool too.

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#48 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Not sure how this is gonna fare.

Regardless of balance, I imagine at least some people would upvote it for the amusing name+Battlecry combination.

That being said...Can you scale down your card next time you post? There's no need to take up so much visual real-estate. Not calling you out in some personal fashion; just in general for everyone.

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#49 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Doesn't seem to work... I took the link from URL of Imgur. Is that wrong?

Sorry, I have never used Imgur before. :p

After saving your card to Imgur you should open the image into a new page, then take that URL. It's easier to avoid mistakes that way. If you just click on the image from your profile page, and the little pop-up appears with your card, the URL at that moment is not of the image directly: it's a link to the page, not the picture.

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I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
#50 Oct 19, 2017 (Triggered)
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Quote from biggerbossman >>

Not sure how this is gonna fare.

Regardless of balance, I imagine at least some people would upvote it for the amusing name+Battlecry combination.

That being said...Can you scale down your card next time you post? There's no need to take up so much visual real-estate. Not calling you out in some personal fashion; just in general for everyone.

Thank for pointing the image size out! Didn't realize until now that it's bigger than it's supposed to be. I've been posting images this size for the past competitions, and no one has called me out on it yet. My thanks.

For balance, 7 mana 3/6 maybe?

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For balance, 7 mana 3/6 maybe?

I think it's roughly fine as-is, to be honest. You're acquiring three 1-mana spells - not unlike Rhonin - but their usefulness is not always immediate, and more mana will be required down the line (to play the minions you Discover). Maybe go 7-mana 5/5 if you feel it's too strong where it is.

Plus...Rhonin is shit, so your card can be better than him and still be reasonable lol.

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Quote from Heinibrother >>

Two ideas so far. Can't decide which one I like better and could also use some help balancing:

Pandaren Classes - Probably is too cheap, but I'm not sure. The Lorewalker summon is meant as a drawback, but if you're able to remove it with your first spell it gets really good. By the way, can epic cards summon legendary minions or is it not logical?

Patches' First Mate - Another pirater counter, hurray! Making the game even more draw dependent, hurray! Is the meme enough though to get any upvotes? Didn't make it a pirate, because in the mirror you would summon patches times two on your first turn. Alternative name: Pirateshark ( in reference to Bearshark).

I will return the favor to anyone giving me feedback ;)

I like Pandaren Classes, but I agree it's too cheap to be balanced. Even more, I think this card should be expensive to the point of being unplayable, as it's really cool as meme card, but it shouldn't be competitive. However, I would vote this card in the first round and probably in the finals too (except if there are other cards that I like a lot)

I'm not a fan of Patches' First Mate, though I really like the art.

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I feel tempted to post something like this again, but with a new name and art?

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Quote from Heinibrother >>

Quote from Wailor >>

Quote from Heinibrother >>

Two ideas so far. Can't decide which one I like better and could also use some help balancing:

Pandaren Classes - Probably is too cheap, but I'm not sure. The Lorewalker summon is meant as a drawback, but if you're able to remove it with your first spell it gets really good. By the way, can epic cards summon legendary minions or is it not logical?

Patches' First Mate - Another pirater counter, hurray! Making the game even more draw dependent, hurray! Is the meme enough though to get any upvotes? Didn't make it a pirate, because in the mirror you would summon patches times two on your first turn. Alternative name: Pirateshark ( in reference to Bearshark).

I will return the favor to anyone giving me feedback ;)

I like Pandaren Classes, but I agree it's too cheap to be balanced. Even more, I think this card should be expensive to the point of being unplayable, as it's really cool as meme card, but it shouldn't be competitive. However, I would vote this card in the first round and probably in the finals too (except if there are other cards that I like a lot)

I'm not a fan of Patches' First Mate, though I really like the art.

You're right it should be costed at 7 or maybe even 8. Drawing 5 random cards on average and a minor setback would probably mean a cost of 7, but I'm open to other suggestions.

Yeah, 7 is fine. 6 would also be ok. 8 is too much, IMO.

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Quote from nurgling13 >>

Here are my ideas so far:

The librarian isn't that big a threat, but, played at the right time, it can make your opponent choose between giving you a free Silence and making a suboptimal play. The other two are sources of Sap for Rogues. The first one is symmetric with your opponent, but would be really good in mill where they really don't want you to be able to play your minions again. The last one is simpler and punny. Also, he's covering his face so that you can't see him. He thinks that's how you Stealth. He just wants to be a Rogue!

I really like the Librarian and the Treant, they're really flavourful. I think the Treant is maybe a little too good? Sap is a really powerful card.

As an aside, convention says that these should be worded as 'add a 'Silence' spell to your hand' and 'add a 'Sap' spell to your hand'. For minions you don't specify and don't use 'x', but for spells you do.

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Quote from Cogito_Ergo_Sum >>

Just gonna put down these proto-ideas before I go to sleep. Your thoughts?

Future winner here. You can close the thread.

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Quote from ShadowsOfSense >>

Quote from nurgling13 >>

Here are my ideas so far:

The librarian isn't that big a threat, but, played at the right time, it can make your opponent choose between giving you a free Silence and making a suboptimal play. The other two are sources of Sap for Rogues. The first one is symmetric with your opponent, but would be really good in mill where they really don't want you to be able to play your minions again. The last one is simpler and punny. Also, he's covering his face so that you can't see him. He thinks that's how you Stealth. He just wants to be a Rogue!

I really like the Librarian and the Treant, they're really flavourful. I think the Treant is maybe a little too good? Sap is a really powerful card.

As an aside, convention says that these should be worded as 'add a 'Silence' spell to your hand' and 'add a 'Sap' spell to your hand'. For minions you don't specify and don't use 'x', but for spells you do.

If I nerf the Treant at all, it will have the same statline as Loot Hoarder. Is getting a Sap better than drawing a card? Seems like it should be basically the same to me. Even if it's a little better, my card is a class card, so it should be better than Loot Hoarder.

Also, anyone know how to make sure text in Hearthcards isn't bolded? It auto-bolds Silence when you type it in, but I don't want it to be (since I'm referring to the card, not the keyword).

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Shimmering Tempest

This is a bit of a unique Battlecry, only triggering if you cast a spell after you play this guy on the same turn.

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Alright, here's what I have in my folders:

As usual, here's the rest of my shit : https://imgur.com/a/safe2

To be honest none of my cards looks good enough to be submitted to me.

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