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#315 Oct 12, 2017 (Evergreen Nerfs)
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Quote from Phoenixfeather >>

Quote from Dr_Scaphandre >>

So while we wait for the submission thread, I'm trying to make some quotes and flavor text for my card. I need some ideas.

I was thinking of making some references to Little Witch Academia

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Why Fifth? :P

I broke the fourth wall.

How long have you been waiting for a chance to say that?

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Quote from TheProgenitor >>

Quote from Phoenixfeather >>

Quote from Phoenixfeather >>

Why Fifth? :P

I broke the fourth wall.

How long have you been waiting for a chance to say that?

Ever since the release of Goblins vs Gnomes XD.

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Wished to be pink.

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Then fired myself.

Then did again.
#317 Oct 12, 2017 (Evergreen Nerfs)
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Meh Feels a bit strong.

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Am i only one who gets that cozy feeling. Like when you sit around the fireplace talking with your friends while waiting fur the cookies to get ready?

And here's a sweater to help you understand better

(I'm the new dr. Seuss)

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Meh Feels a bit strong.

Bare minimum, that's 3 health. More realistically, that's double-digit healing on top of a Hellfire.

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Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!

I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
#320 Oct 12, 2017 (Evergreen Nerfs)
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Meh Feels a bit strong.

Yeah, agreed with Linkblade. Compared to Abyssal Enforcer (which is already an extremely strong card), you get 1 extra mana for usually about 12 extra healing to your hero (Greater Healing Potion) or even more.

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Quote from Demonxz95 >>

Quote from Prod >>

Meh Feels a bit strong.

Yeah, agreed with Linkblade. Compared to Abyssal Enforcer (which is already an extremely strong card), you get 1 extra mana for usually about 12 extra healing to your hero (Greater Healing Potion) or even more.

So the train of thought is great, with increasing power of demons. Maybe upping the cost to 9? Regardless, the lifelink feels a little strange on a "sargent", but that's just me. Also...

WHERE ARE THY SHADOWS?

*Looks at last two lines*

Oh, grab me a few rings and a Barliman's Best while you're there.

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#323 Oct 12, 2017 (Evergreen Nerfs)
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Another attempt

Doomknight i think it will be an appropriate name

This is incredibly strong. People happily spend two cards on a Doomsayer plus Treachery combo to be able to clear multiple minions, so being able to do this with just one card is very powerful. There are some drawbacks to this card, because it has a higher mana cost and you can't determine if it triggers on your opponents turn, but I think it would still dominate Arena. The idea is very interesting, but would be something for a higher rarity card, I tink.

Meh, yeah i think you are right too.
The common problem is that it summons a higher rarity card which is not "correct", i'll probably save the "theme" for another competition and go with the Abyssal instead.

linkblade91, Demonxz95 and Phoenixfeather thanks a lot for your input.
Tuned down the healing and increased the cost.

You think it should be 1 damage instead?
Also i somewhat agree with the Phoenixfeather regarding lifesteal + Seargeant combination, any ideas for a more suiting name?

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So I think here is the card I'll go with. Shoutout to BorkBot for the name.

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Okay just throwing out a the first idea I came up with for this challenge. I tried to be favorable as much as I could. Let me know what you think.

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Quote from TomBTomB >>

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One idea could be to give it 'Can't be targeted by spells or hero powers'; you will keep the synergy with Defender of Argus and Sunfury Protector, but lose the TTK potential. Or you could make it a class minion for any other class than priest.

And then you can't hard remove it which would be quite a problem when you give it Taunt.

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Quote from TomBTomB >>

Quote from Phoenixfeather >>

Quote from Dr_Scaphandre >>

So while we wait for the submission thread, I'm trying to make some quotes and flavor text for my card. I need some ideas.

I was thinking of making some references to Little Witch Academia.

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Why Fifth? :P

I broke the fourth wall.

Also about that T9 Priest. Assassinate, Shadow Word: Death, Big Game Hunter, Siphon Soul, 600 Taunt and Poisonous minions.... T8? Well there's Confuse effects... and Poisonous, among other removal that's so abundant in the game... assuming it even GETS to T9. (Looks at Quest Rogue)

I must say I'm not sold. For one, this would be a really bad Arena draft pick. Secondly, in constructed, this can really wreak havoc on a player that can't deal with it in one turn. I don't think Shadow Word: Death and Big Game Hunter can help you against this: the priest player will just cast the Inner Fire on his own turn and attack, so unless you have a taunt minion up that he cannot remove after having 9-1=8 mana left on turn 9, its GG. Especially harsh against classes that run little spot or random removal, such as druids. Having taunt minions is not enough to counter this, as you will spend half the minions in your deck to take down a 50/50 minion.

One idea could be to give it 'Can't be targeted by spells or hero powers'; you will keep the synergy with Defender of Argus and Sunfury Protector, but lose the TTK potential. Or you could make it a class minion for any other class than priest.

Yet cards like Deathwing and Tyrantus are still almost unplayable. I guess you can make this a pretty good counter to all the aggro decks then. (Once again, assuming you make it to turn 8 at all). Generally, druid decks will be able to stop this card through an overwhelming number of taunts, and just ignoring it by playing the jade gods.

In arena, this is as good as Ancient Watcher, which isn't anything new.

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#330 Oct 12, 2017 (Evergreen Nerfs)
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I came up with new card Idea, also bump for the old one:

I think most people saw Cryomaster as balance already, I hope to get more feedback on Mechanical Guradian and Hyno Python.

I personally think high Cost minion need somewhat a useful efffect and not just a stat. I think Mechanical Guardian can be compared to Obsidian Statue but in common form. Obsidian Statue have Taunt, Lifesteal, Deathrattle synergy and minion destruction, as common card Mechanical Guardian only have Taunt and damaged minion synergy but he really excel at being a hardy taunt. I think when comparing this two Mechanical Guardian is fine as it is.

Please give me your opinion of my cards.

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Okay what the hell? Why is the submission topic STILL not up?!

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Thoughts?

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Maybe... nah nah nah nah
#333 Oct 12, 2017 (Evergreen Nerfs)
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Quote from Prod >>

FIrst Attempt

Has a typo you > your

I don't know if someone already said, but a card like this should be at least epick, the idea is great but the effect is too unique and complex to be common.

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Maybe... nah nah nah nah
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We'll be going live momentarily with the Submission Thread.

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You may now submit your entries for this week's card design competition.
http://www.hearthpwn.com/forums/hearthstone-general/fan-creations/204914-weekly-card-design-competition-6-17-submission

Good luck ;)

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We'll be going live momentarily with the Submission Thread.

That's nice and all, and thank you, but...is ShadowOfSense alright? Or is he just busy?

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Behold, foolish interlopers! I am commanding this mortal to spread the will of the Scourge throughout the interwebs, encouraging you to seek out me, Archlich Kel'Thuzad! Now coming to you as the tenth class of Hearthstone!

I am a finalist in this Class Creation Competition, so if you could give it a look I would be greatly appreciative <3
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Quote from linkblade91 >>

Quote from Fluxflashor >>

We'll be going live momentarily with the Submission Thread.

That's nice and all, and thank you, but...is ShadowOfSense alright? Or is he just busy?

I'm alive! I woke up literally as Flux was posting Submissions. Accidentally passed out after dinner, I was up super early today. Was about to handle it myself when I saw he'd posted them.

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You can find me here! Good luck everyone!
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