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Bumping my card. Still bad at names.

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Ok guys. I have 32 cards that fit the theme, here are those I think are the best ones:

Keep in mind that this week's theme is ambiguous so some of them might not actually be good.

AGGRA - AKA Thrall's waifu. Obviously the only time it will interact with your opponent's board is during shaman mirrors but it still fits the rules :D. If you have a Wrath of Air Totem for example, she will be a 4/6 with Spell Damage +1 (assuming the Totem is not damaged).

ALICIA CUTHBERT - Again, not sure it counts. It kind of interacts with your opponent's hand since her effect will depend on it.

The idea of this card is that, as a rogue, you benefit more from The Coin so even though it can sometimes backfire, you're better off on the long term. Flavor-wise it fits because some pirates can be some kind of a Robin Hood and shit.

VARIMATHRAS - A famous dreadlord who does drealord-y things: possessing enemy minions. This card is very annoying to deal with since it will screw you if you have a board like Sylvanas Windrunner, for whom Varimathras worked for a long time before betraying her (see the dreadlord in the background on Sylvanas' art ? Well, that's him). It depdends on your opponent's board because basically it's a 8mana 7/7 if your opponent's board is empty. Might be too powerful as it is. What do you think ?

TERROR ATTACK - Reversed Feign Death and hilarious counter to Sylvanas! I think it could cost (1) without being broken since unlike Feign Death, you don't decide which minions you opponent plays. The flavor also needs some change.

As usual, the rest of my cards that fit the theme : http://imgur.com/a/RIAME

Which is best ?

Yeah, I'm absolutely stumped on this one :(.
Here's what I've got so far...

Quote from Cogito_Ergo_Sum >>

Yeah, I'm absolutely stumped on this one :(.
Here's what I've got so far...

Quote from Demonxz95 >>

Bumping my card. Still bad at names.

It seems my last idea is annoying. So I've made more creations.Which do you think is the best one? Thank you very much!

 

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Quote from YoThats >>

So i have this idea, not sure about number of enemy minions, is 4 too strong? And should i make it to destroy only enemy minions? Because now it will destroy friendly minions too, although it fits with goblin's explosive personalities.

 

 Hard to trigger and even if you do, this minion or your other minion can have the highest attack, becouse aggro decks are playing a lot of minions with 1 or 2 attack... This is arena card obv.

Quote from SvagoCorp >>

Pretty straightforward. Is it any good? The Deathrattle obviously triggers on your side of the battlefield.

 

 Make it say that Deathrattles triggers on your side. Aaaaand, Deathrattles can be bad... like that 2/2 Skeleton or Anomalus... Make it 4 mana 3/4 maybe.

Quote from Atlas9141 >>

opinion on balance/whether or not it is legal?

 

 It should've shuffle the Spells into your deck, not your hand. And I think it's okay card.

Quote from TheProgenitor >>

Some ideas:

Thoughts? Which one is best?

 

 Soul Extraction is the best, but change the wording to "Shuffle copy of all minions into your deck" And I like this card.

Quote from nurgling13 >>

Here's my initial idea:

Good stats for a 1-mana minion, but not so good if you're the starting player.

 

 So it's 1 mana 2/2 do nothing or 1 mana 2/1 do nothing... Mistress of Potions (I think it's her name) is much better... maybe 1 mana 2/3?

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I wanted to give Hunter's some healing in the form of a deathrattle minion. Unlike Cult Apothecary, this card gives the opponent time to play around the card, but you do gain significantly more healing.

 

 Good card for control hunter. Pushing the archetype, heh? :P. About a card I think it's pretty decent heal, but 3 mana slot is pretty busy for Hunter... maybe 4/2 for 4 mana?

Quote from Tiderlight >>

A "herosteal" card, What do you guys think?

 

 I don't like the idea of Discovering DKs... Sorry, but I won't vote for it.

Quote from Demonxz95 >>

Bumping my card. Still bad at names.

 

 I'm bad at the names too, so I can't help you with that... but card seems fine in Quest Mage for example. I like it, you shouldn't change it :)

Quote from Zence >>

Thought this would be perfect

 

 Cool idea, but make it's cost lower and Health higher, for example 4 mana 1/3 or something like that...

Quote from smogofwar >>

(Some clarifications: If Menagerie Corruptor destroys an X/Y minion, it gets -X/-Y; Acolyte of Death adds a random Death Knight card for each enemy Deathrattle triggered, it's abbreviated to fit on the card)

I'm not sure if Menagerie Corruptor or Acolyte of Death satisfies this round's restrictions. Also, I tried to find a way to fit Acolyte of Death's card text into a sensible space (4 lines is the most of any actual card), but it ended up potentially making the effect confusing (hopefully it's not too bad).

Menagerie Corruptor could be a 7/7 or 6/7, or lower-costed (Assassinate is 5 but it's a class card, so I was basically referencing that). Acolyte of Death could be smaller and/or cost more, but I figured that the downside of triggering Deathrattles basically outweighed the Death Knight cards.

 

 Scorching Flame is my favorite, I don't know what to say about the others... It reminds me of that LoE card for mage that dealt 3 damage and shuffled torch to your deck. I like it, tho I would make it 2 mana... I mean Mage has Frostbolt, right?

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Quote from NOVEX0R >>

Nevermind my previous cards I posted. Here's the one!

 

 It's a decent card. But it dosen't have the "Wow" factor, that many people needs for them to vote for it. It gives you some information about your opponen't hand. But if you're playing against any type of control deck, then this could quickly be a 4/5 or 5/6 on turn 3. That also gives you information.

 

 Thanks for feedback, tho i don't know what can I do to make it more "wow"...well, maybe I can think about something better.

Quote from Macabessa >>

Hello, everybody! Here is my card that will (hopefully) be discussed.

The text may need some editing but hopefully, the idea is clear. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!!!

 

 There's a card in Hearthstone that he summons, put it's name there, remove 1/1 Divine Shield Taunt and it's wording will be much better. About the card it should be just Battlecry. For real, these minions are annoying. And you can combo it with Divine Shield synergy cards. So change wording and remove Deathrattle, and it'll be pretty decent card.

Quote from Cooler39140 >>

Feedback would be appreciated!

This week's theme ain't easy to do, especially when you try to create something with that amazing effect that still suits the rules. I decided to create this card that may seem to be pretty much copy pasta of Evolutionary Apex from Duelyst (btw, it's a Magmar card that costs 7 and does the same effect), but I think it's still generating some wow effect and can also be fun, because who doesn't want to go ham with summoning minions! This one is probably reducing design space, but nevertheless, I can imagine the fun coming from this card.

 

 Good counter to many, and I mean MANY control/combo decks. N'Zoth, Battlecrys etc. And this is "Win a game" card against Quest Mage. So I think it may be a problem... maybe decrease it's cost and make it summon 1 minion from each hand?

Quote from Dat_boi_Eow >>

I'm having some wording issues. Is any of these useable?

 

 I like Frenzy, tho remove "," in text, it's no need for it. It can combo with Enrage, and cards like Rotface so yeah, it's pretty good (if I understand this card in the right way). But maybe it should cost 5?

Quote from ffinderous >>

It seems my last idea is annoying. So I've made more creations.Which do you think is the best one? Thank you very much!

 

 Mottled Drake - wording is awful, and the card is pretty weak... It should often adapt 0, 1 or 2 times.

Mr. Bigglesworth - Blizz and I don't like the ideas that interact with person itself, like turning his screen oppsite down.

Murloc Operative - It's pretty bad. Even in arena. How many murlocs are playing in meta? Paladin, and that's it.

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Hello, this is my first idea for this week. Again it's a control or tempo-hunter card.

Alternative name: Prepare the Hounds

Alternative Effect: "Opponent has at least 3 minions"

Wording is copied from Sacred Trial

I'll be happy to provide feedback for your cards if you do the same for me. :)

 

 Wording should say "Secret: If your opponent has at least 3 minions and plays another..." Idea is pretty good, I think it has problem with Hyena but Unleash has that problem too, so... Yeah, it's good.

 

 

So my cards: 

Token: 

Faerie Dragon 

 

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Quote from ffinderous >>

 

Quote from NOVEX0R >>

Quote from YoThats >>

So i have this idea, not sure about number of enemy minions, is 4 too strong? And should i make it to destroy only enemy minions? Because now it will destroy friendly minions too, although it fits with goblin's explosive personalities.

 

 Hard to trigger and even if you do, this minion or your other minion can have the highest attack, becouse aggro decks are playing a lot of minions with 1 or 2 attack... This is arena card obv.

Quote from SvagoCorp >>

Pretty straightforward. Is it any good? The Deathrattle obviously triggers on your side of the battlefield.

 

 Make it say that Deathrattles triggers on your side. Aaaaand, Deathrattles can be bad... like that 2/2 Skeleton or Anomalus... Make it 4 mana 3/4 maybe.

Quote from Atlas9141 >>

opinion on balance/whether or not it is legal?

 

 It should've shuffle the Spells into your deck, not your hand. And I think it's okay card.

Quote from TheProgenitor >>

Some ideas:

Thoughts? Which one is best?

 

 Soul Extraction is the best, but change the wording to "Shuffle copy of all minions into your deck" And I like this card.

Quote from nurgling13 >>

Here's my initial idea:

Good stats for a 1-mana minion, but not so good if you're the starting player.

 

 So it's 1 mana 2/2 do nothing or 1 mana 2/1 do nothing... Mistress of Potions (I think it's her name) is much better... maybe 1 mana 2/3?

Quote from Giz4Gamer >>

I wanted to give Hunter's some healing in the form of a deathrattle minion. Unlike Cult Apothecary, this card gives the opponent time to play around the card, but you do gain significantly more healing.

 

 Good card for control hunter. Pushing the archetype, heh? :P. About a card I think it's pretty decent heal, but 3 mana slot is pretty busy for Hunter... maybe 4/2 for 4 mana?

Quote from Tiderlight >>

A "herosteal" card, What do you guys think?

 

 I don't like the idea of Discovering DKs... Sorry, but I won't vote for it.

Quote from Demonxz95 >>

Bumping my card. Still bad at names.

 

 I'm bad at the names too, so I can't help you with that... but card seems fine in Quest Mage for example. I like it, you shouldn't change it :)

Quote from Zence >>

Thought this would be perfect

 

 Cool idea, but make it's cost lower and Health higher, for example 4 mana 1/3 or something like that...

Quote from smogofwar >>

(Some clarifications: If Menagerie Corruptor destroys an X/Y minion, it gets -X/-Y; Acolyte of Death adds a random Death Knight card for each enemy Deathrattle triggered, it's abbreviated to fit on the card)

I'm not sure if Menagerie Corruptor or Acolyte of Death satisfies this round's restrictions. Also, I tried to find a way to fit Acolyte of Death's card text into a sensible space (4 lines is the most of any actual card), but it ended up potentially making the effect confusing (hopefully it's not too bad).

Menagerie Corruptor could be a 7/7 or 6/7, or lower-costed (Assassinate is 5 but it's a class card, so I was basically referencing that). Acolyte of Death could be smaller and/or cost more, but I figured that the downside of triggering Deathrattles basically outweighed the Death Knight cards.

 

 Scorching Flame is my favorite, I don't know what to say about the others... It reminds me of that LoE card for mage that dealt 3 damage and shuffled torch to your deck. I like it, tho I would make it 2 mana... I mean Mage has Frostbolt, right?

Quote from ThisOtherGuyTox >>

Quote from NOVEX0R >>

Nevermind my previous cards I posted. Here's the one!

 

 It's a decent card. But it dosen't have the "Wow" factor, that many people needs for them to vote for it. It gives you some information about your opponen't hand. But if you're playing against any type of control deck, then this could quickly be a 4/5 or 5/6 on turn 3. That also gives you information.

 

 Thanks for feedback, tho i don't know what can I do to make it more "wow"...well, maybe I can think about something better.

Quote from Macabessa >>

Hello, everybody! Here is my card that will (hopefully) be discussed.

The text may need some editing but hopefully, the idea is clear. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!!!

 

 There's a card in Hearthstone that he summons, put it's name there, remove 1/1 Divine Shield Taunt and it's wording will be much better. About the card it should be just Battlecry. For real, these minions are annoying. And you can combo it with Divine Shield synergy cards. So change wording and remove Deathrattle, and it'll be pretty decent card.

Quote from Cooler39140 >>

Feedback would be appreciated!

This week's theme ain't easy to do, especially when you try to create something with that amazing effect that still suits the rules. I decided to create this card that may seem to be pretty much copy pasta of Evolutionary Apex from Duelyst (btw, it's a Magmar card that costs 7 and does the same effect), but I think it's still generating some wow effect and can also be fun, because who doesn't want to go ham with summoning minions! This one is probably reducing design space, but nevertheless, I can imagine the fun coming from this card.

 

 Good counter to many, and I mean MANY control/combo decks. N'Zoth, Battlecrys etc. And this is "Win a game" card against Quest Mage. So I think it may be a problem... maybe decrease it's cost and make it summon 1 minion from each hand?

Quote from Dat_boi_Eow >>

I'm having some wording issues. Is any of these useable?

 

 I like Frenzy, tho remove "," in text, it's no need for it. It can combo with Enrage, and cards like Rotface so yeah, it's pretty good (if I understand this card in the right way). But maybe it should cost 5?

Quote from ffinderous >>

It seems my last idea is annoying. So I've made more creations.Which do you think is the best one? Thank you very much!

 

 Mottled Drake - wording is awful, and the card is pretty weak... It should often adapt 0, 1 or 2 times.

Mr. Bigglesworth - Blizz and I don't like the ideas that interact with person itself, like turning his screen oppsite down.

Murloc Operative - It's pretty bad. Even in arena. How many murlocs are playing in meta? Paladin, and that's it.

Quote from Dead_MAX >>

Hello, this is my first idea for this week. Again it's a control or tempo-hunter card.

Alternative name: Prepare the Hounds

Alternative Effect: "Opponent has at least 3 minions"

Wording is copied from Sacred Trial

I'll be happy to provide feedback for your cards if you do the same for me. :)

 

 Wording should say "Secret: If your opponent has at least 3 minions and plays another..." Idea is pretty good, I think it has problem with Hyena but Unleash has that problem too, so... Yeah, it's good.

 

 

So my cards: 

Token: 

Faerie Dragon 

 

  @NOVEX0R

Thanks for feedback! So Mottled Drake is the best one?How can I modify the card, to make it more useful? Thank you~

 You can make it 5 mana 4/4 (Like Azure Drake) with text: "Battlecry: Adapt for each minion in your opponent's hand that costs more than this minion." :)