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OK! I think I am finally done with my cards! Lovely and helpful people, which cards do you think I should showcase?

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• Carnival Enthusiast: Seems like a solid cost reduction card.
• Rockheart Protector: That seems...extremely elaborate. It's basically just a 1 mana 2/3 with Taunt that Can't Attack. That's a bit too powerful when compared to Shieldbearer.
• Thorntail Vermin: It's a great and flvaourful Beast card! Though I hope aggro decks won't abuse this because it's cheap and works with decks that spawn a ton of minions.
• Bluegill Ambusher: That's a bit too powerful when compared to Novice Engineer. It draw a card AND it has Stealth. Yikes.
• Dancing Fire Spirit: This is a great effect! I really like this; however, this would do better as a 3/3 because, really, all you're getting is +1 extra Health or Attack for making the effect conditional.
• Southsea Spearman: This is powercreep over Disciple of C'Thun. Yes, it has the Exhibit effect, but you can just easily just put this card in a class without weapons.
• Exquisite Chef: This is a nice healing card, and I think this needs to be a 3/6 when compared to Priest of the Feast because the healing effect is weaker and playing a lot of spells in Priest is MUCH easier than playing minions in any class.
• Tiger Charmer: This is a great card in Beast decks!...except it will probably be abused in decks without any Beasts.

Rare:

• Blazetail Mouse: An excellant, balanced Elemental/Beast card! I like the recursive effect!
• Wavegill Weaponsmith: Honestly, this card will be just fine if it's Exhibit effect was just a Battlecry. Noneoftheless, this is quite bad in Murloc decks because you will likely control other Murlocs, and this is one again easily abused in decks without any Murlocs, which really isn't that hard.
• Dragonkin Wolf: WOW! That is strong! I think it's borderline OP, but it's not necessary to nerf it (but you might want to). This loses no stats for a Battlecry that gives you A LOT of tempo. It's a solid card in Beast/Dragon decks, but it might be too potent.
• Frostbreath Dragon: It's a good anti-aggro card but...again, it's easily abusable in decks without many Dragons...like Discover/Control Mage and Freeze Mage...Ouch. It's okay in Dragon decks though.
• Giant Swamp Lizard: A wonderful anti-aggro card! Not much to say here.

Epic:

• Murloc Tidefisher: I'm not sure if this well ever see any play inside Murloc decks, but this is a marvelous card in Beast decks!
• Bloodsail Trafficker: It's an interesting Pirate card! I'm not sure why Pirate decks want Beasts, but this is extremely flavourful! (Again, very unreliable in Beast decks)
• Salty Drake: This is too potent when compared to Disciple of C'Thun considering that it has an extra stat AND it can draw a card. It needs to be a 3/2. Again, this will probably be a card in decks without Dragons (see the pattern?).
• Expert Showman: That's a cool, balanced card! It helps to promote Exhibit cards and thus weird multi-tribal decks. I like it!

Legendary:

• Basille, Carnival Reporter: Seems like a great, balanced card! It's another card that encourages Exhibit cards, and it's quite flavourful.
• Murkey: A Murloc with charge? That's very powerful considering the massive buffs Murlocs give to each other. (And Charge is infamous for creating some of the most OP, broken cards in the game). A Murloc that revives itself? That's OP.
• Erwen, Crocodile Hunter: Hemet Nesingwary is having a bad day. Besides the fact that this card is more powerful than Hemet, this is too conditional to see play. Plus, Beasts never really needed a counter because they aren't that strong. (Again, Beast Exhibit kind of makes it unreliable in Beast decks).
• Eranikus: To someone else, it might be a cool card, but it just seems like a copy of Ysera to me. The Nightmare Ysera legendary has been done many times already...Your Nightmare cards look balanced though.

Felgrin Bruiser: If you had a Demon friendly, but no other minions, would the Battlecry go off? It seems as though it wouldn't. Also, it seems targetable— is that right? Seems balanced otherwise.

Shadowmoon Obliterator: You could get rid of the 'Then'; "Deal 5 damage. Deal 5 damage to your hero."

Insatiable Sorceror: Always a good answer with a new keyword— a gain +1/+1 minion.

Illidari Adept: It seems like Warlock is going to be really good with this pack, given the neutral Demons and the theme of the expansion. This looks like a card that attempts to counter it. Seems good for that archetype, but it would be a must-include unless other classes got Demons too.

The epics seem somewhat underwhelming to me— they're good and balanced, but the effects aren't terribly unique; Nightlord re: Recombobulator. Still, as neutral cards, they're fine epics.

Doom Lord Kazzak: Really brings back face pressure, but I suppose it's late game and you can't really put out any serious threats on the same turn. Good card and art.

Illidan: I really like the Warglaives. Sooo powerful in a Warlock deck especially. First neutral weapon too, which is also interesting. I like that he's equally costed with the normal Illidan.

Unbridled Energy as a card, you could add more deathrattle effects to add it, you could even Unleash a minion that adds Unbridled Energy to your hand, especially as it's overcosted for the damage (see: Arcane Shot).

@UndeadRebel13: Thanks again for the feedback. I just sort of assumed you misunderstood Wither because you used Corruption as an example, sorry about that. But anyway, lemme try and review your cards:

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All right, thanks everyone for the feedback! I'm just gonna try and finalise the cards for my expansion her (doing all the changes, adding in the missing cards). Also, did you guys know that it doesn't have to be one of every rarity this time round?

Unfortunately, I didn't really have space to include anything to do with the Old Gods and their whole corruption shtick here, since they're the ones that turned the Highborne into the Naga, but still... do you guys think that'd be an interesting addition, or should I just make do without it? I sort of want to add them in somehow since I like all that dark and evil stuff and it adds another 'face' to the expansion, but I'm not sure if I should. Currently, I've got the Twisted Nightborne and the Acolyte of the Deep, but I'm worried they feel out of place.

Also, random off-topic mini-rant: A lot of the mermaid/merman art (I've been searching some up so I can use them if I run out of proper Nagas) has them not wearing anything, and it's pissing me off slightly. I've got a ton of cool art that I'm worried I can't use because I'm worried that it's too revealing. Ugh.

Commons:

If Titanic Drake seems too much like Malygos, I might make it Battlecry: Draw 2 cards. (the intention is for it to be a bigger Azure Drake of sorts, so that'd work as well).

Rares:

I'm not entirely sold on the art I currently have for the Spectre, so I'll be looking for other ones. I just grabbed whatever ghost-like thing I had lying around, so... It's also supposed to be a rare. Note that she immediately dies in your hand if her health hits 0, so at max she restores 8.

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Legendaries:

 If anyone wants feedback, just tell me and I'll try and get to it. Right now I'm feeling super-drained and I need some rest.

• Twisted Nightborne: Seems like a simple but great way to show off the Wither mechanic! Just be careful because it looks like Livienna's Chill...
• Murloc Ritualist: A solid draw card in Murlocs. I like it!
• Naga Manabinder: Again, another straightforward yet excellent card that demonstrates the Siphon mechanic! Again, be careful because it looks like Livienna's Warm...
• Withered Nightborne: I really like how this card combines your two keywords in a simple yet impactful way! Good job! It really shows the potential of both keywords.
• Reliquary Explorer: A great Discover card that could potentially lead to some fun combos. Be careful, because this and cards like Amara, Warden of Hope could lead to some unpleasant, unfair situations for your opponent.
• Acolyte of the Moon: A good support card for Siphon and a good source of Mana Surges. Just be careful that it doesn't seem like Demonzx's Void Orbs (yeah, your mechanics reminds me of others for some reason :P)
• Naga Guard: This seems like a strong yet balanced protective card! I really like the Mana Surge synergies here.
• Titanic Drake: Wow...that is uh...quite strong. It might cause some nasty combos, and, compared to Evolved Kobold, it should only be Spell Damage +2.

Rare:

• Naga Stalker: A superb Siphon card! Not much to say here...
• Illidari Scout: Besides the fact that this a just a good Discover card, I likehow it synergizes well with your spell theme!
• Mana Egg: I love egg cards, so yeah, I like this :P. In all seriousness, it's a nice source of Mana Surges, and it has Spell Damage +1, so more spell synergy! However, my main concern here is that this is going to be OP as heck in Miracle Rogue and Lyra Priest...
• Naga Sorceress: I already reviewed this card, but I still like it nonetheless. To prevent broken combos, maybe give her +1 Health and make it so that your Mana Surges can deal 1 damage to a minion.
• Spectre Of Restoration: I like the idea, and it's a nice addition to Handbuffadin, but how would this look like to your opponent? Would a card just suddenly disappear from the player's hand? Also, Health should be capitalized and this shouldn't have an Epic purple gem

Epic:

• Mana-Charged Golem: Again, a great Mana Surge source, but broken as heck in Miracle Rogue.
• Nightborne Enchantress: Looks like a fine card, but it should say "minions opposite to this one". Again, it looks a bit similar to Livienna's Chill. It's gonna be an awkward moment for you two.
• Azshara's Siren: It's a nice anti-aggro card with some spell synergy, but it's quite expensive and weak for its cost. Maybe make it cost 5 mana?
• Acolyte of the Deep: Yeah, that's gonna kill every minion in your hand! In order to make her viable, maybe downgrade her to a 4/5 that gives your minions Wither: -1/-1? It's a cool way to play with Wither noneoftheless.

Legendary:

• Sharas'Dal: I've already reviewed this, but this looks like a fine spell-synergy card. This is gonna lead to a whole bunch of Malygos-like combo decks...for the better or the worse.
• Prince Farondis: Although I kinda like the effect (it seems kind of aggro-ish), this is gonna be so infuriating when you Sunfury Protector a Withering Spirit.
• Examiner Tae'thelan: That is HILARIOUS! I love it! It's a balanced, innovative, and nice Dirty Rat-esk card that breaks spell combos.
• Ly'lith, Ghost Princess: Seems like a balanced, flavourful, and just all-around cool dormant card that synergizes extremely well with spells! Good job! ...yeah, okay I'll address the Elephant in the Room. This kinda reminds me Livienna's Dormant theme. :P

Any thoughts on my cards?

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OK! I think I am finally done with my cards! Lovely and helpful people, which cards do you think I should showcase?

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Tokens for Tiger Charmer, Wavegill Weaponsmith and Murky, respectively:

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Eranikus' Tokens:

Exhibit X: Not gonna lie, it's pretty weird that, in an expansion themed about tribal synergy, there is a keyword that anti-synergies with minion tribes. I have a feeling that this can be easily abusable in decks that don't have X because decks that have X aren't gonna play with these cards. (e.g. I think that cards with Exhibit Murloc: is going to be seen a lot more in non-Murloc decks rather than Murloc decks)

Commons

• Carnival Enthusiast: Seems like a solid cost reduction card.
• Rockheart Protector: That seems...extremely elaborate. It's basically just a 1 mana 2/3 with Taunt that Can't Attack. That's a bit too powerful when compared to Shieldbearer.
• Thorntail Vermin: It's a great and flvaourful Beast card! Though I hope aggro decks won't abuse this because it's cheap and works with decks that spawn a ton of minions.
• Bluegill Ambusher: That's a bit too powerful when compared to Novice Engineer. It draw a card AND it has Stealth. Yikes.
• Dancing Fire Spirit: This is a great effect! I really like this; however, this would do better as a 3/3 because, really, all you're getting is +1 extra Health or Attack for making the effect conditional.
• Southsea Spearman: This is powercreep over Disciple of C'Thun. Yes, it has the Exhibit effect, but you can just easily just put this card in a class without weapons.
• Exquisite Chef: This is a nice healing card, and I think this needs to be a 3/6 when compared to Priest of the Feast because the healing effect is weaker and playing a lot of spells in Priest is MUCH easier than playing minions in any class.
• Tiger Charmer: This is a great card in Beast decks!...except it will probably be abused in decks without any Beasts.

Rare:

• Blazetail Mouse: An excellant, balanced Elemental/Beast card! I like the recursive effect!
• Wavegill Weaponsmith: Honestly, this card will be just fine if it's Exhibit effect was just a Battlecry. Noneoftheless, this is quite bad in Murloc decks because you will likely control other Murlocs, and this is one again easily abused in decks without any Murlocs, which really isn't that hard.
• Dragonkin Wolf: WOW! That is strong! I think it's borderline OP, but it's not necessary to nerf it (but you might want to). This loses no stats for a Battlecry that gives you A LOT of tempo. It's a solid card in Beast/Dragon decks, but it might be too potent.
• Frostbreath Dragon: It's a good anti-aggro card but...again, it's easily abusable in decks without many Dragons...like Discover/Control Mage and Freeze Mage...Ouch. It's okay in Dragon decks though.
• Giant Swamp Lizard: A wonderful anti-aggro card! Not much to say here.

Epic:

• Murloc Tidefisher: I'm not sure if this well ever see any play inside Murloc decks, but this is a marvelous card in Beast decks!
• Bloodsail Trafficker: It's an interesting Pirate card! I'm not sure why Pirate decks want Beasts, but this is extremely flavourful! (Again, very unreliable in Beast decks)
• Salty Drake: This is too potent when compared to Disciple of C'Thun considering that it has an extra stat AND it can draw a card. It needs to be a 3/2. Again, this will probably be a card in decks without Dragons (see the pattern?).
• Expert Showman: That's a cool, balanced card! It helps to promote Exhibit cards and thus weird multi-tribal decks. I like it!

Legendary:

• Basille, Carnival Reporter: Seems like a great, balanced card! It's another card that encourages Exhibit cards, and it's quite flavourful.
• Murkey: A Murloc with charge? That's very powerful considering the massive buffs Murlocs give to each other. (And Charge is infamous for creating some of the most OP, broken cards in the game). A Murloc that revives itself? That's OP.
• Erwen, Crocodile Hunter: Hemet Nesingwary is having a bad day. Besides the fact that this card is more powerful than Hemet, this is too conditional to see play. Plus, Beasts never really needed a counter because they aren't that strong. (Again, Beast Exhibit kind of makes it unreliable in Beast decks).
• Eranikus: To someone else, it might be a cool card, but it just seems like a copy of Ysera to me. The Nightmare Ysera legendary has been done many times already...Your Nightmare cards look balanced though.

Wow! Thanks for the really complete feedback, usually I just give a quick feedback as I did with your cards, please let me know if you want such a complete feedback on your set! Nah, I will do it either way once I wake up tomorrow xD

• About my mechanic, I will quote myself on my Phase I submission: "The theme expansion are Tribes (e.g. Beasts) and how they interact not only with themselves, but with each other as well. So don't expect Murlocs that only works Murlocs nor Dragons that only work with Dragons. This idea was inspired on The Curator mechanic [...]". I don't want to pop a Beast Druid or a Demon Warloc whatsoever. That's why I've chosen a keyword that works without tribes themselves. I rather see decks with Beasts, Dragons and Murlocs than a deck with only one of these. Yet, some classes will be more oriented towards one tribe. Druid will be oriented towards Beasts, and you would want to play some cards with beast exhibit because their beast synergy overcomes its exhibit anti-synergy.
• Rockheart Protector - I wanted a Zombie Chow-like card. Maybe I try to further balance it a bit more. Any suggestions? Maybe "1-mana 2/3; Taunt, Can't attack, Your minions cost (1) more.
• Wavegill Weaponsmith - Oh! It was supposed to be Weapon Exhibit, so it doesn't destroy your current weapon if you have one.
• Bluegill Ambusher - I think this card is considerably weaker than Novice Engineer, a card that is played only in some versions of freeze mage aside from quest rogue. For a couple reasons: 1) The card draw doesn't happen in the same turn, which is quite a disadvantage. 2) It has only 1-health, can easily be destroyed while in stealth. 3) The 2-mana pool for murlocs has lots of contenders. Yet, I might consider some changes, do you think if it was simply draw a card and not a Murloc it would be better?
• Southsea Spearman - Yeah, but Disciple of C'thun wasn't even a great card in C'thun decks, it was decent. i think this guy is fair as it is.
• Dragonkin Wolf - Oh my god, I've been struggling so freakin much with this card. I want a 3-mana beast that interacts with dragons ;-;
  Do you think "3-mana 3/1; Battlecry: If you're holding a Dragon, destroy a minion that costs (2) or less" is OK? I think it is quite OK compared with Argent Horserider.
• Salty Drake - I never thought about Disciple of C'thun desigin this card, I thought about pre-nerf Keeper of the Grove. I do agree with you actually, even if Keeper had the silence versatility, the Slam effect is quite strong. I will make it a 2/3.
• Murky - Well, I want the revive effect because it is quite flavorful considering Murky's ability in HotS. If I get rid off the charge, any ideas of what I could use to replace it? Something with a cooldown effect would also be flavorful, what do you think of a "3-mana 2/2; Battlecry: Summon a Blue Murloc Egg and return an enemy minion to your opponent's hand, it costs (2) less"?
• Eranikus - Yeah, I see your point, other version of Eranikus used to open a Portal to the Emerald Nightmare, one of those unkillable things, which summoned Corrupted Ones. Do you think that's more interesting? Maybe I scratch it completely and come up with a different idea.

ShadowsofSense said we couldn't put in custom extra pictures...but he didn't say anything about CUSTOM HEADINGS! TESTING HEADINGS!

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@Cogito: Thanks for the feedback! At this stage, I feel like I might just straight up send Auctioneer to hall of fame so I can actually get to doing stuff I want to do (Miracle Rogue isn't nearly as good in wild). I've tried in general to make the neutral mana surge cards be rather expensive, making them less attractive in a Miracle deck, but TBH that's about all I can really do about the whole Rogue problem. I've been a huge miracle player for ages, and this is the first time the deck has ever made my life so god-damn annoying. I'm starting to develop a love-hate relationship with it.

About similarities to Livienna's mechanics: Yeah, I did notice that as well. Not exactly a lot I can do about it, though. I think they're different enough for it to be okay. It's not like we copied each other or anything (or did we?) Ly'lith is a one-off legendary and not a theme, so it should be okay.

I'll change Acolyte of the Deep.

Prince Farondis: You forgot that Immune Taunted minions can be bypassed again :P

Spectre of Restoration would work like this: Whenever you cast a spell, 3 health will be restored to your hero, and there'll be some animation originating from the card in your hand. When she runs out of health, she just gets discarded from your hand like any other discard effect.

I'm also gonna be bumping up the power level on a few of my cards (or adjusting them) in accordance to UndeadRebel13's suggestions and fixing some wordings, so I'll probably drop those alongside my review of your stuff later in about 1-2 hours (I gtg right about now, but I'll be back soon). I might drop Azshara's Siren to 5, but I'm worried that it'll be too strong.

Also, please for the love of god teach me how to do that custom heading thing.

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Also, please for the love of god teach me how to do that custom heading thing.

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Double post. Bleh.

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 Thanks! :3

Also, do you have an up-to-date version of your expansion? I've only found a version with a ton of extra cards, and I know you've trimmed it down a bit since then, but I'm not sure which ones you got rid of.